Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and correct small grammar errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid trailing words like 'but.'

例: I prefer comfortable clothes, such as sweatshirts and sweatpants, because they make me feel calm and relaxed. For example, when I wear a soft sweatshirt at home I can concentrate better and feel more confident.

提案: Good direct answer. Improve by adding a brief reason with a linking word and a specific example to make your response more informative and natural.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me feel confident and at ease. For instance, a casual outfit like jeans and a T-shirt makes me more relaxed during meetings with friends.

提案: Avoid rhetorical questions and vague phrases. Give a concise topic sentence and add a specific reason or example using a linking word to support your opinion.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are versatile and easy to style. For example, a plain T-shirt can be dressed up with a blazer or worn casually with shorts.

提案: Make the sentence grammatically correct and more precise. Use a clear topic sentence followed by a linked explanation with a specific detail about your routine.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I usually plan my outfit in advance. For example, before leaving home I already decide between two specific options so I can get ready quickly.

提案: Answer directly then give a brief reason and one specific contrast if possible. Avoid adding unrelated comments at the end.

例: No, I don't usually wear different styles because my wardrobe is limited and I prefer comfortable basics. On weekends I might add a jacket or brighter shoes, but the overall style stays the same.

提案: Be consistent and specific: name the colours, give a linked reason, and avoid confusing examples. If you mention a combination, explain why briefly.

例: I prefer neutral colours like black, white and grey because they match easily with other items. For example, black pairs well with brighter colours like pink, which helps create a balanced outfit.

× I like comfortable clothes such as sweatshirts or pajamas because I like the feeling of being calm, relaxed.

✓ I like comfortable clothes such as sweatshirts or pajamas because they make me feel calm and relaxed.

The original sentence contains awkward phrasing and a dangling noun phrase 'the feeling of being calm, relaxed.' Replacing that with 'they make me feel calm and relaxed' clarifies the subject (clothes) causing the feeling and fixes sentence structure; use 'they' to refer to 'clothes' and parallel adjectives 'calm and relaxed.'

× It's just makes me feel more confident but.

✓ It just makes me feel more confident.

The original has a redundant 'It' with 'just makes' producing a subject-verb conflict and ends with an unnecessary conjunction 'but.' Removing the extra 'It' and the trailing 'but' yields a complete, grammatical sentence. Use concise structure: subject 'It' or omit if referring to previous clause; here 'It just makes me feel more confident.'

× Well, actually no, because before I go out there is always some specific options in my head.

✓ Well, actually no, because before I go out there are always some specific options in my head.

The noun 'options' is plural, so the verb must be plural 'are' (subject-verb agreement). Also word order is acceptable; correcting the verb fixes the tense agreement. Alternatively 'there are always a few specific options in my head' would be more natural.

× For example black and pink are good combo.

✓ For example, black and pink are a good combination.

'Combo' is an informal noun and needs an article; 'a good combination' is grammatical. Also add a comma after 'For example' for clarity. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'black and pink' (plural idea) take singular 'a good combination' as a compound idea.