Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is largely unintelligible and does not address the question. Focus on giving a clear topic sentence stating the kinds of clothes you like, then 1–2 supporting details (reason or example). Keep it natural and concise (max 5 sentences). Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to connect ideas.

例: I prefer casual clothes such as jeans and plain T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to move in. For example, I usually wear a pair of dark jeans and a soft cotton T-shirt when I go out with friends.

提案: The answer is confused and doesn't clearly state a preference. Start with a direct response (e.g., "I prefer comfortable and casual clothes") then give 1–2 specific reasons and a short example. Use linking words like "because" and "for instance" to make it coherent.

例: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes because I value ease and practicality. For instance, I often choose soft sneakers and a hoodie when I commute, since they keep me comfortable throughout the day.

提案: The answer is unclear and does not directly say yes or no. Begin with a clear short answer (Yes/No), then add a reason and a brief example. Keep sentences simple and logical, using connectors like "because" or "when".

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and suitable for warm weather. For example, in summer I often wear cotton T-shirts when I go to the park or run errands.

提案: The response is mostly unintelligible and does not answer the question. Give a clear topic sentence (e.g., "No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes" or "Yes, I do") followed by specific reasons or a brief routine description. Use linking words like "so" or "because."

例: No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I usually have a few go-to outfits. I quickly pick a shirt and jeans in the morning and then head out.

提案: The answer is unclear and does not state whether styles differ. Start with a direct response (yes/no), then explain how styles change with specific examples (e.g., "I wear formal clothes to work on weekdays but casual clothes on weekends"). Use linking words like "however" or "for example."

例: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I usually dress smartly for work, such as shirts and trousers, but on weekends I wear casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts for comfort.

提案: The response is irrelevant and confusing. Answer directly by naming the colours you prefer, then give brief reasons or examples of when you wear them. Use linking words like "because" or "for instance."

例: I prefer neutral colours like navy, grey and black because they are versatile and easy to match. For example, a navy sweater goes well with both jeans and smart trousers.

× The time is very small.

✓ I have very little time.

Original sentence uses 'The time is very small', which is unnatural and incorrect English structure for expressing limited time. Replace with 'I have very little time' to correctly convey limited time; 'little' quantifies uncountable 'time' and 'have' provides the verb.

× And the two shows that were still in, she's never said yeah, I'd say it was about and they was able to say.

✓ And the two shows that were still on, she never said 'yes'; I'd say it was about... and they were able to say it.

Multiple issues: 'shows... in' should be 'shows... on' or 'still on' (preposition error and sentence structure). 'she's never said' should be 'she never said' to match past narrative (present perfect vs simple past); 'they was' violates subject-verb agreement; use 'they were'. Also punctuation and clarity improved.

× I could go where I smoked noise, that's the case.

✓ I could go where I felt comfortable; that's the case.

Original is incoherent ('smoked noise') likely intended 'felt comfortable' or similar. Corrected to a coherent phrase that fits the question about clothing preference.

× It's easy to wear, it's too very nice and I definitely was acceptable.

✓ It's easy to wear, it's very nice, and I definitely find it acceptable.

Use of 'too very' is incorrect; choose either 'too' or 'very'. 'was acceptable' suggests past; 'find it acceptable' aligns present opinion. Also 'It's easy to wear' is fine.

× It doesn't mean that ease, so I'm not too much, I said.

✓ It doesn't mean I'm lazy, so I'm not overdoing it, I think.

Original is unclear: 'doesn't mean that ease' is incorrect; likely intended 'doesn't mean I'm lazy'. 'I'm not too much' is ungrammatical; 'not overdoing it' expresses balance. 'I said' changed to 'I think' for expressing opinion.

× It's easy to know, especially when the snow is plenty nice and I feel I can definitely I gotta go.

✓ It's easy to know, especially when the weather is nice, and I definitely feel like going out.

'snow is plenty nice' is unlikely; 'weather is nice' fits. 'I gotta go' is informal and mismatched; 'I feel like going out' is clearer and fits question about T-shirts.

× Today I'm a very easy man to choose an appointment in the world and the birth is a person that lived.

✓ Today I'm a very easy person to dress; I don't spend much time choosing clothes.

Original is unintelligible. Rewritten to answer the question about time spent choosing clothes: 'easy person to dress' and 'don't spend much time' are natural.

× It's just a kind of family.

✓ It's just a kind of routine.

'family' does not fit context; likely meant 'routine' or 'habit' when describing how they choose clothes. Correcting to a word that makes sense in context.

× I just picked it.

✓ I just pick it.

Question is about habitual action, so present simple 'I just pick it' is appropriate rather than past 'picked', unless describing a specific occasion.

× I just put it on his hands on the those that I usually tied up.

✓ I just put it on; those are the clothes I usually choose.

Original has pronoun confusion ('his hands', 'the those') and wrong verb 'tied up'. Simplified clear phrasing removes incorrect pronouns and clarifies meaning.

× Play the seasonal centers with annoying advocating to open the first time.

✓ I change my clothes for different seasons, and sometimes I like to dress up for special occasions.

Original sentence is incoherent. Rewritten to convey meaning about wearing different styles on weekdays and weekends and seasonal changes.

× I need to look at my sometime and feel like an opportunity to deal with my stuff.

✓ I sometimes need to take time to look at my clothes and decide what to wear.

Original word order and word choice are incorrect. 'Take time' and 'decide what to wear' clearly express the intended idea.

× Microsoft is my voice is especially the only way to potentially show them that plays with the technology and put the eyes on the party for other people's opportunities.

✓ I like neutral colours, especially grey, because they match many things and are appropriate for social events.

Original sentence is gibberish with 'Microsoft' and 'voice'; likely intended to name a colour preference. Rewritten to a coherent answer: 'neutral colours' and reasoning why. This addresses adjective choice and clarity.