Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Говорите короче и яснее: начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте одно-две конкретные детали. Избегайте лишних слов и грамматических ошибок (например, like wear → like to wear; It's make me → They make me). Старайтесь использовать связку для логичности, например “because” или “so”.

例: I usually prefer comfortable clothes. For example, I often wear sports pants, T-shirts and comfortable shoes because they allow me to move easily and feel relaxed during the day.

提案: Сформулируйте одну ясную причину и объясните её правильно. Избегайте повторов и неправильных выражений (например, “brave” и “dream my move” не подходят). Используйте связки: “because”, “so”, “which” и корректную грамматику (make → makes / allow me to move freely).

例: I prefer casual clothes because they allow me to move freely and feel more comfortable. This helps me stay relaxed at work and during my free time.

提案: Отвечайте кратко и приведите конкретный пример. Исправьте грамматику: like to wear, variety of colours/sizes/designs. Употребляйте одно связное объяснение с примером.

例: Yes, I do. I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and come in many colours, sizes and designs. For example, I often wear plain blue or printed T-shirts on weekends.

提案: Дайте ясный ответ и объяснение: используйте правильные времена и порядок слов. Избегайте сложных фраз без уверенности (например, “use by using artificial intelligent”). Лучше сказать просто “I buy clothes online and use filters or recommendations”.

例: Not really. I usually buy clothes online and use filters or recommendations, so I can find suitable items quickly and save time.

提案: Ответьте прямо и структурированно: скажите что делаете на буднях и что на выходных. Избегайте слов-паразитов и незавершённых фраз. Используйте связки “on weekdays” / “at weekends” и конкретные примеры.

例: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts, while at weekends I sometimes dress more formally when I go to events or meet people.

提案: Дайте короткий прямой ответ и объясните свою причину ясным языком. Избегайте тавтологии и незаконченных мыслей. Используйте корректные фразы: “my favourite colour is blue” и объяснение почему (e.g. calm, versatile).

例: My favourite colour is blue because it feels calm and goes well with many other colours. I own several blue shirts and they are easy to match with jeans or trousers.

× Actually on my daily life routine, you know, I like wear some comfortable and convenient clothes such as some sports pants, T-shirts and also comfortable socks and shoes.

✓ Actually in my daily routine, you know, I like to wear comfortable and convenient clothes such as sweatpants, T-shirts, and comfortable socks and shoes.

The sentence uses incorrect preposition 'on' and incorrect verb form 'like wear'. Use 'in my daily routine' for routines and 'like to wear' or 'like wearing' for habitual actions. Also choose more natural nouns ('sweatpants' instead of 'sports pants') and add articles/commas for clarity. Suggestion: use 'I like to wear' for habitual present tense and correct prepositions.

× It's make me more convenient and brave in my.

✓ It makes me feel more comfortable and confident.

Subject-verb agreement error and unclear phrase 'brave in my' and incorrect adjective 'convenient' for feelings. Use 'It makes me feel' + adjective. 'Comfortable' and 'confident' are appropriate for clothing effects. Ensure subject 'It' takes verb 'makes' (third person singular).

× First of all, this type of this type of outfit make me more brave and dream my move and can free my move and they can improve my life.

✓ First of all, this type of outfit makes me feel more confident and free to move, and it can improve my life.

Repeated phrase and subject-verb agreement: use 'this type of outfit makes' (singular subject with 'makes'). 'Brave' is better as 'confident'; 'dream my move' is meaningless—likely intended 'free to move'. Combine clauses with commas and use 'it' singular pronoun to match 'this type of outfit'.

× Yeah, absolutely. I like to wearing T-shirts of some grades of T-shirts because I think T-shirts like a cloth is very comfortable for me and there are a lot of variety of color of size and of picture.

✓ Yeah, absolutely. I like wearing T-shirts of different grades because I think T-shirts as clothing are very comfortable for me, and there is a wide variety of colors, sizes, and designs.

Use either 'like wearing' or 'like to wear' — not 'like to wearing'. 'Of some grades of T-shirts' is awkward; use 'different grades'. Subject-verb agreement: 'T-shirts as clothing are' or simply 'they are'. Use 'a wide variety of colors, sizes, and designs' for correct quantifier and noun forms.

× I don't say that I spent a lot of time for choosing some clothes because I buy my clothes in online shop use by using artificial intelligent and this type of shopping can save my time and it helped me.

✓ I wouldn't say that I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I buy my clothes in online shops using artificial intelligence, and this type of shopping saves me time and helps me.

Tense and modal issues: 'I don't say that I spent' mixes tenses; use conditional 'I wouldn't say' or present simple 'I don't spend'. Use 'spend time choosing' (no 'for'). 'Online shop' should be plural or 'online shops'; 'using artificial intelligence' is correct phrase order. Use present simple 'saves' and 'helps' to describe habitual effects.

× Like, uh, like a standard teenager, I like to wear some different styles, beginning with some casual and finishing some official style.

✓ Like a typical teenager, I like to wear different styles, starting with casual and ending with more formal styles.

Use 'typical' instead of 'standard' and correct participle forms: 'starting' and 'ending' are present participles used to describe sequence. Use 'formal' rather than 'official' for clothing style. Also pluralize 'styles' where appropriate.

× And it can be.

✓ And it can be suitable for different occasions.

Fragment: 'And it can be.' is incomplete. Provide a complete idea such as 'it can be suitable for different occasions' to clarify meaning and complete the sentence structure.

× A very good question because I have a lot of white of colors, but the most favorite this is blue.

✓ That's a very good question because I have a lot of white clothes, but my favorite color is blue.

Use 'That's' to respond naturally. 'A lot of white of colors' is incorrect — likely 'a lot of white clothes' or 'many white items'. Use 'my favorite color is blue' for correct possessive and noun order. Article 'the' before 'most favorite' is unnecessary; 'favorite' alone suffices.

× I think blue colors have a lot of benefits because to all the most natural color and it and it can be.

✓ I think blue has many benefits because it is one of the most natural colors and it is calming.

'Blue colors' is redundant; use 'blue' or 'the color blue'. 'Because to all the most natural color' is ungrammatical—use 'because it is one of the most natural colors'. Complete the idea: suggest 'it is calming' or another benefit. Avoid repeating 'it and it can be'.