Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar (e.g., "I like" vs "the fact I like"), and add one specific reason or example. Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences and use linking words for coherence.

例: I prefer oversized clothes because they feel comfortable and airy. For example, in hot summer days I wear loose shirts and shorts so I can stay cool and move easily. Also, oversized clothes help hide sweat and feel more relaxed when I’m outdoors.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence and then explain with a clear contrast using linking words (e.g., "however", "but", "when"). Fix grammatical mistakes and be specific about occasions when you wear smart clothes.

例: It depends on the situation: I usually wear casual clothes, but for special occasions I choose smart outfits. For instance, I wear a suit or a smart shirt to weddings or job interviews because they look professional and make a good impression.

提案: Be careful with pronunciation errors and filler words. Use clear vocabulary ("breathable" instead of "pressable") and avoid hesitations. Provide two concise reasons with linking word "and" or "because" and one short example.

例: Yes. I wear T-shirts almost every day because they are comfortable and breathable, which is ideal for gym workouts. I also like them for casual outings since they’re easy to wash and pair with jeans.

提案: Structure the answer with a clear topic sentence and tidy up grammar. Use linking words to give brief examples of how you choose clothes for specific places. Avoid repeating ideas and correct vocabulary ("casual and comfortable clothes", "formal meetings").

例: No, I don’t spend much time choosing clothes because I prefer practicality. I usually pick something casual and comfortable for the gym or at home, but for formal meetings I choose smart, neat clothing so I look professional.

提案: Give a clear comparison using a linking word such as "whereas" or "while". Correct grammar ("I prefer to wear" not "I prefer to wear smart clothes as I have lessons like almost every day"). Be specific about what you wear on each day and why.

例: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear smart clothes because I have lessons and meetings at university, so I want to look presentable. On weekends I prefer casual clothes like T-shirts and sweatpants since I relax at home or run errands.

提案: Start with a direct statement and then provide specific reasons or preferences. Correct vocabulary ("subtle colors" not "subtle, like white one") and give examples of other preferred shades. Keep it concise and natural.

例: I prefer subtle colours rather than bright ones. For example, I usually wear white, grey or navy because they look neat and are easy to match with other items.

× I prefer to wear clothes that are oversized.

✓ I prefer wearing oversized clothes.

Use of verb + -ing after 'prefer' when stating general preferences is natural and concise. 'Prefer to wear clothes that are oversized' is wordy; 'prefer wearing oversized clothes' uses the gerund correctly and sounds more fluent.

× The fact I like the fact that they are big and they make me like comfortable especially during hot during hot days like in the summer.

✓ I like them because they are big and make me feel comfortable, especially on hot summer days.

Original sentence repeats phrases and has awkward structure and incorrect preposition. Removed redundancy ('the fact') and corrected verb phrase to 'make me feel comfortable' and preposition to 'on hot summer days' for natural English.

× Actually it depends on the circumstances as there is some space special occasion I prefer to wear smart clothes as they make me attractive and during like casual days I prefer to wear comfortable clothes.

✓ Actually, it depends on the circumstances: on special occasions I prefer to wear smart clothes because they make me look attractive, and on casual days I prefer comfortable clothes.

Sentence run-on with missing prepositions and connectors. Inserted commas and 'on' before 'special occasions' and 'casual days', replaced 'as they make me attractive' with 'because they make me look attractive' for grammaticality and clarity.

× Yes I do, I wear T-shirts almost every day, especially for workouts at the gym because AT shirt is comfortable and pressable, it kinda lets me move freely.

✓ Yes I do. I wear T-shirts almost every day, especially for workouts at the gym because a T-shirt is comfortable and breathable; it kind of lets me move freely.

Fixed preposition/punctuation by splitting into sentences. Replaced 'AT shirt' with 'a T-shirt'. 'Pressable' is incorrect here; 'breathable' or 'comfortable' fits meaning. 'Kinda' changed to 'kind of' for standard writing. Ensured article 'a' before 'T-shirt'.

× I also prefer them for casual uh outings since they are easy to wash and match with jeans.

✓ I also prefer them for casual outings since they are easy to wash and match with jeans.

Removed filler 'uh' for clarity. Sentence is otherwise correct; small cleanup to improve fluency and register.

× No I don't. I'm not kind of person who spends a lot of time for choosing clothes.

✓ No, I don't. I'm not the kind of person who spends a lot of time choosing clothes.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'kind of person' and incorrect preposition 'for' should be omitted: 'spends time choosing' is the correct collocation.

× I think it's kind of waste of time.

✓ I think it's kind of a waste of time.

Missing article 'a' after 'kind of' when followed by countable noun 'waste'. Also 'kind of' is informal; acceptable here but needs 'a'.

× I just choose appropriate clothes for the place I'm going.

✓ I just choose appropriate clothes for the place I'm going to.

Add particle 'to' after 'going' for correct verb phrase 'going to' when referring to destination.

× Like if it's gym ever casual and comfortable causes, if there is some kind of official meetings.

✓ For example, if I'm going to the gym I choose casual and comfortable clothes, but if there are official meetings I choose smart clothes.

Original fragment is ungrammatical and unclear. Rewrote into two clauses with correct verbs and plural 'meetings' agreement and clear contrast using 'but'.

× I prefer smart courses that's all.

✓ I prefer smart clothes, that's all.

Spelling error: 'courses' should be 'clothes'. Added comma before 'that's all'.

× Yes I do on weekdays I prefer to wear smart clothes as I have lessons like almost every day and on weekend.

✓ Yes I do. On weekdays I prefer to wear smart clothes because I have lessons almost every day, and on weekends...

Missing punctuation and plural 'weekends'. Use 'because' for reason and place 'almost every day' after 'lessons'. Ellipsis indicates continuation corrected in next sentence.

× On weekends I just for casual clothes at home as I as I don't have any place to go out.

✓ On weekends I just wear casual clothes at home since I don't have anywhere to go out to.

Missing verb 'wear' and awkward phrasing 'any place to go out'. Use 'anywhere to go out to' or better 'anywhere to go' and keep 'since' for reason.

× What colour clothes do you like? I don't like clothes that are bright like red, yellow or blue. I prefer ones that are a bit subtle, like white one.

✓ I don't like clothes that are bright, such as red, yellow, or blue. I prefer ones that are a bit subtler, like white ones.

Mismatch 'white one' (singular) with 'ones' earlier. Use plural 'white ones' to match 'ones'. Also 'subtle' comparative 'subtler' or 'a bit more subtle' preferred. Fixed punctuation and list comma.