Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammatical accuracy and fluency by using correct subject-verb agreement and removing redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Keep answers to no more than 4–5 sentences and use linking words (e.g., because, and, so) correctly.

例: I prefer casual clothes like T-shirts and jeans because they are comfortable and easy to wear. For example, I usually wear them when I go to work or hang out with friends, since they allow me to move freely and feel relaxed.

提案: Reduce hesitation and repetition; use the correct nouns and pronouns (e.g., 'casual clothes' not 'casual girls'). Provide a concise opinion sentence followed by one clear reason introduced by a linking word like 'because' or 'so'.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes such as jeans and T-shirts because they allow me to move easily and feel relaxed. Therefore, I usually choose them for going out or doing active tasks.

提案: Fix verb forms and word order (e.g., 'I like wearing T-shirts' or 'I like to wear T-shirts') and avoid filler words. Give a specific example of when you wear them and mention one more detail such as how you style them.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts and I have many at home. I usually wear them when I meet friends or go to work because they are comfortable and go well with jeans or shorts.

提案: Use correct adverb forms and infinitive structures (e.g., 'often' and 'choose'). Make your answer more coherent: give one reason and one example, linked with words like 'because' and 'so'. Avoid fragmented sentences.

例: Yes, I often spend a long time choosing clothes because I want to look good. If I'm unsure which outfit suits me, I usually ask a friend for advice, which can take extra time.

提案: Organize your answer into a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting sentences. Use plural/singular correctly (e.g., 'trousers') and linking words like 'while' or 'whereas' to contrast weekdays and weekends. Keep sentences concise.

例: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear formal clothes such as shirts and trousers for work, whereas on weekends I prefer T-shirts and casual pants because they are more comfortable for going to the park or relaxing.

提案: Avoid repetition and use concise, natural expressions (e.g., 'I prefer black' then one clear reason). Use linking words such as 'because' and give a specific example of when you choose black clothing.

例: I prefer black because it pairs easily with other colours and always looks neat. For example, I often choose a black top when I need an outfit that is simple but stylish for work or social events.

× I like to wear the casual clothes such as T-shirts and jeans.

✓ I like to wear casual clothes such as T-shirts and jeans.

The article 'the' is unnecessary before a general plural noun 'casual clothes'. Removing 'the' makes the sentence natural when speaking about clothes in general. Use 'casual clothes' without 'the'.

× I think they are make me feel comfortable and it's very easy to wear the casual clothes when we go to the work and hanging out with friends.

✓ I think they make me feel comfortable, and it's very easy to wear casual clothes when we go to work or hang out with friends.

'They are make' is incorrect; use 'they make' for subject-verb agreement. 'The work' should be 'work' when speaking generally. Replace 'and hanging out' with the infinitive or base form 'or hang out' to parallel 'go'. Also remove unnecessary 'the' before 'casual clothes'.

× I would like to wear the casual girls such as jeans and T-shirts because they make us feel comfortable when we like, do something.

✓ I would like to wear casual clothes such as jeans and T-shirts because they make me feel comfortable when I do things.

'Casual girls' is wrong; use 'casual clothes'. Replace 'we' with 'I' to match the speaker and avoid inconsistency. 'When we like, do something' is ungrammatical; use 'when I do things' or 'when I'm doing activities'.

× We, we, we can feel, we can, we can feel good. So I, I will prefer the casual clothes for going outside as well.

✓ We can feel good in them, so I prefer casual clothes for going out as well.

Repeated words are fillers; remove them and combine ideas into one clear sentence. 'Will prefer' is odd; simple present 'prefer' is appropriate for habitual preference. 'Going outside' is better as 'going out'.

× Definitely, I like to wearing the T-shirts and I have lots of T-shirts at my home.

✓ Definitely, I like wearing T-shirts and I have lots of them at home.

Use either 'like to wear' or 'like wearing' but not 'like to wearing'. 'The T-shirts' becomes simply 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. 'At my home' is more natural as 'at home'.

× Ioffer.

✓ (remove)

'Ioffer.' appears to be a typo or fragment and has no meaning; remove it. Ensure complete sentences with subject and verb.

× I usually wear T-shirts when I go to with my friends and I when I go to the work because I think the T-shirts make us feel comfortable and we can wear the T-shirts with jeans and the shorts as well.

✓ I usually wear T-shirts when I go out with my friends and when I go to work because they make me feel comfortable. I can wear T-shirts with jeans or shorts as well.

Remove extra 'to' and reorder phrases: 'go to with my friends' -> 'go out with my friends'. Use consistent subject pronoun 'I' and avoid switching to 'we' unless speaking for a group. 'The T-shirts' -> 'T-shirts' or 'they'. Use 'or' instead of 'and' for alternatives. 'The shorts' -> 'shorts'.

× Yes, oftenly I spend a lot of time to choosing the class because I want to look good.

✓ Yes, I often spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to look good.

'Oftenly' is not a word; use 'often'. 'Spend time choosing' does not need 'to'. 'Class' is likely a typo for 'clothes'. Place 'often' before the verb for natural adverb placement.

× That's why sometimes if I feel don't good in, if I don't like, if I can't think like which one is good for me.

✓ Sometimes, if I don't feel good in an outfit or can't decide which one is good for me, I...

Original sentence is fragmented and ungrammatical. Use clear conditional structure: 'if I don't feel good in an outfit' and 'can't decide which one is good for me'. Complete the thought.

× So then I ask my friends for advice to choose the clothes.

✓ So then I ask my friends for advice on choosing clothes.

Use 'advice on choosing clothes' rather than 'advice to choose the clothes'. 'The clothes' is overly specific; 'clothes' is better for general reference.

× That's why it takes.

✓ That's why it takes time.

Sentence lacks object; add 'time' to complete the meaning.

× Yes, I wear the different styles of clothes on my weekdays and weekends I wear the I wear the formal clothes on my weekdays for going to work I wear the shirt and trouser and for going to work and on On weekends I wear T-shirts and pants because it make me feel comfortable so I can go to the park and.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I wear formal clothes for work, such as a shirt and trousers. On weekends I wear T-shirts and pants because they make me feel comfortable so I can go to the park.

Remove unnecessary 'the' before 'different styles' and 'weekdays/weekends'. Break into clear sentences. Use plural 'trousers'. 'It make' should be 'they make' to agree with plural subject. Complete the final clause.

× I prefer the black color because black color is we can match black color with the any color easily.

✓ I prefer black because you can easily match black with any color.

Drop repeated 'color' words; 'prefer black' is natural. Use 'you can' or 'we can' consistently. 'The any color' is wrong; use 'any color'. Place 'easily' before the verb phrase for natural flow.

× So that's why I would like to get like the black color because it's it's also look good look.

✓ That's why I would like black; it also looks good.

Remove filler 'like' and unnecessary repetition. Use 'looks' for third-person singular 'it'. Keep sentence concise.

× That's why and black color is like very famous nowadays.

✓ That's why black is very popular nowadays.

Use 'popular' rather than 'famous' for colors. Remove 'like' filler. Keep 'black' without 'color' when context is clear.