Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer grammatically correct and more natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and avoid unclear phrases like "make me too proud." Add one brief reason or example using a linking word.

例: I prefer wearing comfortable yet attractive clothes. For example, I usually choose soft fabrics and simple designs because they help me feel relaxed and confident when I meet people.

提案: Use correct tenses and concise linking words. Start with a direct preference sentence, then give one or two specific reasons linked by "because" or "so." Avoid repetition.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they are practical. For instance, I can walk around shopping or meet friends in the park without worrying about my outfit being restrictive.

提案: Fix basic grammar (infinitive/gerund, articles, plurals) and make the reason specific. Keep it short: a topic sentence and one supporting detail with a linking word.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. They are very comfortable and versatile, so I often wear them for study days, casual outings, and exercise.

提案: Correct vocabulary errors (use "deciding/liking" not "lying") and verb forms. Give one clear reason and an example of when you spend more time choosing clothes. Use a linking word such as "because" or "when."

例: Yes, I do. I often spend a long time choosing clothes because I am picky about colors and designs; for example, I usually compare two or three options before buying a dress.

提案: Be clear about weekday/weekend differences and correct words ("weekday," not "wig"). Use a simple comparison structure and give one specific example of each style.

例: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear comfortable, neat clothes such as jeans and a blouse for work or classes, whereas on weekends I choose more fashionable outfits for parties or social events.

提案: Use correct phrasing and avoid repetition. State your favorite color, give specific shades, and add a brief reason or example of items you own. Correct nouns (e.g., "frocks") and article use.

例: My favorite color is blue, especially navy, sky blue and royal blue. I have many blue T-shirts and a few skirts and dresses because blue matches most of my other clothes.

× I like to wear comfortable and beautiful clothes because it's make me too proud.

✓ I like to wear comfortable and beautiful clothes because they make me very proud.

The referent 'clothes' is plural, so use plural pronoun 'they' rather than 'it'. Also 'make' must agree with plural subject. 'Too proud' is unnatural here; 'very proud' or 'quite proud' is more appropriate.

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because it's helped me for shopping and sometimes I go to the park with my friends so comfortable and casual clothes are good for me.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes because they help me when shopping, and sometimes I go to the park with my friends, so comfortable, casual clothes are good for me.

'It's helped me' is incorrect because 'it' does not refer correctly and tense/verb form is wrong. Use 'they help me' to agree with plural 'clothes' and present simple to express habitual action. Use 'when shopping' not 'for shopping'. Add commas for clarity.

× Yes, I like to wearing T-shirt. I have a many T-shirts because it's so comfortable and I can wear everywhere.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. I have many T-shirts because they are so comfortable and I can wear them everywhere.

After 'like' use gerund 'wearing' or the infinitive 'to wear', not 'to wearing'. 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when general. 'A many' is incorrect; use 'many'. Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'T-shirts' and include 'them' after 'wear' when needed.

× Definitely. I spent a lot of time choosing clothes because sometimes I'm not lying to that color or I'm not lying to that design. So I spend a lot of time to choosing clothes.

✓ Definitely. I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because sometimes I don't like a color or I don't like a design. So I spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

The student mixed past 'spent' and present 'sometimes'. For habitual action use present simple 'spend'. 'I'm not lying to that color' is wrong — intended meaning is 'I don't like that color'. Also 'to choosing' is incorrect; 'choose' takes gerund 'choosing' without 'to' after 'spend time'.

× Yeah, I wear beautiful and comfortable clothes in wig and I wear fashionable and party clothes to weekend because I have a lot of party.

✓ Yeah, I wear beautiful and comfortable clothes during the week, and I wear fashionable clothes for weekends because I have a lot of parties.

'in wig' seems to be a misspelling of 'during the week'. Use 'during the week' or 'on weekdays'. 'to weekend' should be 'for weekends' and 'party' plural 'parties'. 'Fashionable and party clothes' is better as 'fashionable clothes for parties'.

× My favorite color is blue, so I like to blue color clothes, dark blue, light blue, sky blue. I like to that one. I have a lot of T-shirts, skirts and frocks in frocks.

✓ My favorite color is blue, so I like blue clothes: dark blue, light blue, and sky blue. I like those. I have a lot of T-shirts, skirts, and frocks.

'Like to blue color clothes' is ungrammatical; use 'like blue clothes'. 'I like to that one' should be 'I like those' to refer to items. 'In frocks' is wrong; list items directly. Use commas for lists and plural nouns where appropriate.