Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and correct minor grammar issues. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details (when and why). Avoid redundancy and incomplete clauses.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me feel relaxed throughout the day. For example, I usually wear soft cotton shirts and loose jeans at home and when I go out on weekends.

提案: Clarify and correct sentence fragments; use linking words to contrast choices smoothly. Give a brief specific example of situations for each style.

例: It depends on the situation: I usually wear casual clothes at the weekend to relax, such as T-shirts and jeans, but I wear professional suits on weekdays when I meet clients or go to the office.

提案: Fix repetition and grammar (remove duplicate words; correct word order). Give a short reason and a specific detail about what qualities you look for in a T-shirt.

例: Yes, absolutely. I have many T-shirts and I prioritize quality and texture over design or price because a soft, breathable fabric keeps me comfortable all day.

提案: Complete incomplete sentences and avoid vague endings. State clearly how your routine changed and give a specific reason or example for the change.

例: I used to spend a lot of time choosing clothes at university because I wanted to look fashionable, but now I have less time due to work commitments, so I usually pick simple outfits quickly in the morning.

提案: Be slightly more specific and use linking words to contrast clearly. Mention one specific weekend outfit to make the answer vivid.

例: Yes. On weekdays I wear uniforms or suits to present a professional image to clients, but on weekends I prefer relaxed outfits such as hoodies and jeans that I find comfortable.

提案: Correct repetition and grammar; explain briefly why you choose these colours with a specific example (e.g., pairing items). Use a linking phrase to justify your preference.

例: I mostly wear white, black, or grey because they are practical and easy to match; for instance, a grey sweater goes well with both black trousers and blue jeans, so I rarely make a wrong choice.

× Though I buy loads of clothes or garments every year I wear.

✓ Although I buy loads of clothes every year, I don't wear them all.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and lacks a clear structure; 'Though' used at start needs a main clause and the verb phrase 'I wear' is incomplete. Rewriting with 'Although' and adding 'I don't wear them all' clarifies the contrast and completes the sentence. Use a comma after the introductory concessive clause.

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes on my leisure time, especially during weekends because that's the time for myself.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes in my leisure time, especially on weekends because that's time for myself.

The preposition should be 'in' with 'time' and 'on' with 'weekends' (preposition error addressed here but correction focuses on participle form wording 'that's the time for myself' which is awkward). 'That's time for myself' is more natural. This sentence also needed preposition corrections which are related to usage of time expressions; keep verb forms unchanged to match tense.

× However, on the other hand, I wear professional suits or during weekdays.

✓ However, on weekdays I wear professional suits.

The phrase 'on the other hand' is redundant with 'however'. The original also contains an extra 'or' making the sentence fragmented. Remove redundancy and the extraneous word and place the time expression 'on weekdays' correctly.

× I have so many T-shirts that I could wear them every day though I I prioritize the quality and texture of the T-shirt before design, color or prices.

✓ I have so many T-shirts that I could wear one every day, though I prioritize the quality and texture of a T-shirt over the design, color, or price.

The original repeats 'I' and misuses 'them' with 'could wear every day'—better to say 'one every day'. Also 'before' is incorrect in this context; use 'over' to compare priorities. 'Prices' should be singular 'price' when speaking generally. These are word choice and structure improvements while keeping verb forms appropriate.

× I think to be comfortable is most important.

✓ I think being comfortable is the most important thing.

English prefers the gerund 'being' after 'think' in this context. Also include 'the' and 'thing' to form a natural superlative expression 'the most important thing.' This corrects tense/verb form and article usage.

× I used to spend a lot of time on choosing clothes, especially when I was in university.

✓ I used to spend a lot of time choosing clothes, especially when I was at university.

Do not use the preposition 'on' with 'choosing' here; 'spend time doing something' is the correct pattern. Also, use 'at university' which is the standard prepositional phrase in this context.

× I value the dress code much more than I do nowadays.

✓ I valued the dress code much more than I do now.

The original mixes past and present in an awkward way. If referring to the past habit, use 'valued' to match 'when I was in university' or keep 'do' and change 'nowadays' placement. The corrected sentence contrasts past preference with the present concisely.

× I find that I have less time after graduation, especially of.

✓ I find that I have had less free time since graduation.

The original ends with an incomplete fragment 'especially of.' Use 'since graduation' to indicate when the change started and 'have had' or 'have' to indicate the ongoing state. Also specify 'free' time for clarity.

× On weekdays we are required to wear uniforms or professional suits to show the professional appearance to our client.

✓ On weekdays we are required to wear uniforms or professional suits to present a professional appearance to our clients.

Use plural 'clients' if referring to clients in general. 'Show the professional appearance' is awkward; use 'present a professional appearance.' This fixes pronoun/number agreement and improves collocation.

× Most of my clothes are either white, black or grey.

✓ Most of my clothes are either white, black, or grey.

Add a comma before 'or grey' (Oxford comma optional but improves clarity). The sentence is otherwise correct; this addresses punctuation for clear listing.

× I find those 3 colours are the most practical practical colour to wear.

✓ I find those three colours are the most practical colours to wear.

'Practical' was repeated and 'colour' should be plural to agree with 'those three colours.' Also write numbers in words in formal speech. Fixes adjective duplication and number agreement.

× It goes with everything and can make no wrong choice.

✓ They go with everything and you cannot go wrong choosing them.

The original has pronoun-antecedent mismatch ('It' referring to multiple colours) and an unidiomatic phrase 'can make no wrong choice.' Use 'they' for plural and the idiom 'you cannot go wrong' for natural expression; restructure to maintain meaning.