Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Correct factual errors, avoid repetition and keep answers concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, follow with one or two specific supporting details, and use linking words (for example, because, so) to connect ideas. Also watch pronunciation and grammar (e.g. subject-verb agreement: "it makes," not "it really make").

例: I like wearing dresses, especially pretty ones, because they make me feel confident and feminine. For example, I have several summer dresses that I wear to parties and family events, and they always boost my confidence.

提案: Be more precise and reduce filler words (uh, um). Use linking words to contrast two situations (however, but, while). Correct vocabulary errors ("oversized T-shirt" not "oversight") and grammar ("which make" → "which makes" or rephrase). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

例: At home I prefer comfortable clothes, such as shorts and an oversized T-shirt, because they make me feel relaxed. However, when I go out I usually choose smarter outfits, like a blouse and tailored trousers, to look more put-together.

提案: Give a direct answer, then add one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid repetition and fragmented sentences. Correct grammar ("T-shirts" plural, "they make me"), and use linking words (for example, because, so).

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, at home I wear fitted T-shirts to relax, while for casual outings I choose oversized T-shirts to create a cute, relaxed look.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence (No, I don't), then explain briefly and specifically. Use linking words to organize options (for example, if... then..., or, when). Remove repetition and tighten phrasing.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I usually decide based on the occasion: dresses for when I want to feel pretty, jeans and a T-shirt for going out with friends, and oversized T-shirts and shorts for home.

提案: Answer directly, avoid unclear phrases ("big days and weekends") and use clear contrasts (on weekdays vs at weekends). Use correct vocabulary ("formal wear" not "formal wears") and reduce repetition. Provide a short specific example of each situation.

例: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear formal work clothes, such as blouses and dress pants, because I need to look professional. At weekends I prefer casual outfits like T-shirts and jeans when I meet friends.

提案: Be concise and avoid repeating the same point. Give one clear reason and, if possible, an example of when you wear that color. Use linking words (for instance, because, so) and correct phrasing ("my favorite color is yellow" and "yellow makes me feel vibrant").

例: My favorite color is yellow because it makes me feel vibrant and cheerful. For example, I like to wear yellow dresses in summer when I go to outdoor events because the color brightens my mood.

× Uh, there are many type of fruits which I like to wear.

✓ Uh, there are many types of clothes which I like to wear.

The noun 'type' should be plural 'types' to agree with 'many'. Also 'fruits' and 'wear' are semantically wrong for clothing; replace with 'clothes' to fit context. Suggestion: use 'many types of' + plural noun.

× It really make me feel really confident, really pretty.

✓ It really makes me feel really confident and pretty.

Subject 'It' requires the verb 'makes' (third-person singular). Also combine repetitive adverbs and use 'and' to join adjectives. Suggestion: use third-person singular verb forms for 'it'.

× And whenever I wear that, I, I feel really confident in my style.

✓ And whenever I wear it, I feel really confident in my style.

Replace demonstrative 'that' with pronoun 'it' which is more natural; remove stutter. No verb error but wording improved. (If strict: third person singular not applicable beyond pronoun choice.)

× I own so many dresses.

✓ I own so many dresses.

This sentence is grammatically correct; it uses present simple to state a fact. No change needed.

× I usually, uh, like to wear comfortable and casual clothes when I'm home, but whenever I go out, uh, I usually like to wear the smart clothes.

✓ I usually like to wear comfortable, casual clothes at home, but when I go out I prefer to wear smart clothes.

Reduce filler words and use 'at home' rather than 'when I'm home'. 'Prefer' is more natural than repeating 'usually like'. Remove unnecessary article 'the' before 'smart clothes'. Suggestion: streamline and avoid double commas.

× Uh, usually during whenever I'm home, I wear the shorts and an oversight T-shirt, which make me feel really comfortable at my house, But whenever I go out, I wear smart clothes.

✓ When I'm at home, I usually wear shorts and an oversized T-shirt, which make me feel very comfortable, but when I go out I wear smart clothes.

Use 'when I'm at home' and correct 'oversight' to 'oversized'. 'Shorts' and 'T-shirt' are plural/singular pairing: keep as is; 'make' agrees with plural subject 'shorts and an oversized T-shirt' (plural compound -> use 'make'). Fix capitalization of 'But'. Suggestion: check word choice and sentence connectors.

× Yes I really do like wearing T-shirt.

✓ Yes, I really do like wearing T-shirts.

Plural 'T-shirts' fits general preference. Add missing comma after 'Yes'. Use plural when speaking generally. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general habits.

× As I told earlier whenever I'm at home I I usually wear T-shirt or whenever I go out I usually wear a bigger size T-shirt so it make me look and feel cute and the T-shirts are more comfortable.

✓ As I said earlier, when I'm at home I usually wear T-shirts, and when I go out I often wear a larger-size T-shirt because it makes me look and feel cute and T-shirts are more comfortable.

Fix tense 'told' to 'said' for reporting speech, remove duplicate 'I'. Use plural 'T-shirts' for general habit. 'Bigger size' -> 'larger-size'. Verb 'make' must be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'a larger-size T-shirt'. Suggestion: punctuate clauses and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Most comfortable thing.

✓ They are the most comfortable things.

Original is a fragment without subject and verb. Make a full sentence with subject 'They' referring to T-shirts and verb 'are'. Use plural 'things' to match 'they'.

× I agree and there are many types of T-shirt I wear like.

✓ I agree, and there are many types of T-shirts I wear, like...

Use plural 'T-shirts' and complete the sentence or add an example after 'like'. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: list examples after 'like'.

× No, usually I don't take a lot of time choosing good because I have two things in my mind.

✓ No, usually I don't take a lot of time choosing clothes because I have two things in mind.

Replace 'good' with 'clothes' for correct noun. 'In my mind' not 'my mind.' Ensure direct object present. Suggestion: use precise nouns.

× Like whenever I want to feel pretty I wear dresses and whenever I want to go somewhere with my friends I really wear I really wear jeans and T-shirt and whenever I am at home I wear oversized T-shirt and shorts.

✓ When I want to feel pretty, I wear dresses; when I go out with friends, I wear jeans and a T-shirt; and when I'm at home, I wear an oversized T-shirt and shorts.

Remove repetition 'I really wear I really wear' and add articles 'a' where needed. Use parallel clauses and punctuation for clarity. Suggestion: keep parallel structure for repeated 'when' clauses.

× So it's not a lot of time.

✓ So it doesn't take a lot of time.

Use 'take time' idiomatically: 'it doesn't take a lot of time' rather than 'it's not a lot of time'. Suggestion: use common expressions for time duration.

× Yes, I wear different styles of clothes on weekends. I mean weekends, big days and weekends.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles of clothes on special occasions and on weekends.

'Big days and weekends' is unclear and repetitive; replace with 'special occasions' to convey 'big days'. Suggestion: use clear collocations like 'special occasions'.

× So during big days I have work to do so I usually wear the formal wears.

✓ So on special occasions when I have work to do, I usually wear formal clothes.

Don't use 'the' before 'formal wears' and use 'clothes' not 'wears'. 'Formal clothes' is correct. Suggestion: use 'on' for occasions and 'formal clothes'.

× But during the weekends when I have to go out with my friends I usually wear casuals or specifically T-shirt and jeans.

✓ But on weekends, when I go out with my friends, I usually wear casual clothes, specifically a T-shirt and jeans.

Use 'on weekends' and 'casual clothes' rather than 'casuals'. Add article 'a' before 'T-shirt'. Suggestion: prefer 'casual clothes' and include articles.

× So yeah I wear different style of clothes for the.

✓ So yeah, I wear different styles of clothes for different occasions.

Original ends abruptly and uses singular 'style' with plural 'clothes'; correct to 'styles' and complete the thought with 'different occasions'. Suggestion: finish sentences fully.

× There are many colors of clothes I like, but the most, my favorite color is yellow.

✓ There are many colors of clothes I like, but my favorite color is yellow.

Remove redundant phrase 'the most,' which is incorrect placement. Keep singular 'color' for 'favorite color'. Suggestion: be concise.

× Whenever I wear yellow clothes, it makes me feel really, really cute and more vibrant.

✓ Whenever I wear yellow clothes, I feel really cute and more vibrant.

Use 'I feel' instead of 'it makes me feel' to be more natural; both are acceptable but keep subject consistent. Remove duplicate 'really'. Suggestion: avoid unnecessary repetition.

× And yellow is my favorite color, so it makes me feel really pretty.

✓ Yellow is my favorite color, and it makes me feel pretty.

Combine clauses naturally and reduce redundancy 'really pretty' to 'pretty' for concision. Suggestion: avoid repeating ideas.

× And yellow is the summer color.

✓ Yellow is a summer color.

Use 'a summer color' rather than 'the summer color' because many colors can represent summer. Suggestion: choose appropriate article for general statements.

× It makes me feel vibrant. Yeah. So I like yellow colored.

✓ It makes me feel vibrant, so I like wearing yellow.

Original 'So I like yellow colored' is ungrammatical. Use 'I like wearing yellow' or 'I like yellow clothing'. Combine short sentences into one coherent statement. Suggestion: ensure adjective use ('yellow-colored' noun) or use 'wearing yellow'.