Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clearer and directly state preferences, use correct verbs/nouns, and avoid contradictions. Keep answers concise (max 4–5 sentences). Use linking words (e.g., "when", "so", "but") and give one or two specific examples of clothing items and occasions.

例: I prefer comfortable clothes that suit the situation. For example, when I go to university I usually wear shirts or a blazer because they look smart. At home I change into casual clothes like a hoodie or sweatpants to relax.

提案: Begin with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then add a short reason and an example. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., "casual", "smart", "jacket", "comfortable") and proper grammar for verbs and articles.

例: It depends on the occasion: I prefer smart clothes like a blazer and trousers for university because they look professional. However, at home I usually wear casual items such as a T-shirt and sweatpants for comfort.

提案: Answer directly, then give 1–2 specific supporting details (reasons or examples). Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use precise vocabulary to describe designs or brands and situations where you wear T-shirts.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, I have several graphic band T-shirts and a unicorn design I wear to university or when relaxing at home and even for sleeping.

提案: Start with a clear answer, then explain why and give a short example of your shopping routine. Correct common errors: "spend a lot of time", "try clothes on", "buy them". Keep it coherent using linking words like "because" and "so".

例: Yes, I usually spend quite a lot of time choosing clothes because I like them to fit well. I often go shopping with friends and try items on before buying; if something doesn't suit me I won't buy it.

提案: Give a direct contrast between weekdays and weekends with clear reasons and examples. Use correct nouns (e.g., "sportswear", "formal clothes") and link ideas with "because", "so", "but". Keep within 3–4 sentences.

例: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I usually wear smart or semi-formal clothes for university, such as a shirt and trousers. On weekends I prefer sportswear like a tracksuit and trainers because I often exercise or go for a run.

提案: Answer concisely: state favorite colors and explain with a brief reason (e.g., skin tone, versatility). Use correct color names and phrases like "neutral tones", "warm colors", and avoid filler words. Provide one example of how you choose colors.

例: I like blue, but most of my clothes are neutral tones such as white, cream, and beige. Because my skin is quite light, I often choose warm or neutral colors that suit me, for example a cream sweater or a navy jacket.

× I usually ride across that make me uncomfortable like dishes or maybe dress.

✓ I usually avoid clothes that make me uncomfortable, such as tight dresses.

The original sentence has unclear structure and wrong verbs (ride across) and nouns (dishes). This is a sentence structure error: replace incorrect phrases with clear verb and noun choices, use 'avoid clothes that make me uncomfortable' and give examples like 'tight dresses.' Use correct collocation 'tight dresses' rather than 'dishes.'

× I think it's depend on the situation.

✓ I think it depends on the situation.

Subject-verb agreement with present tense requires the third-person singular verb form 'depends' after 'it.' Use 'depends' not 'depend.'

× When I go to study I will rather shirts or dress but when I'm staying home I just violently cheers.

✓ When I go to study I prefer to wear shirts or a dress, but when I'm staying home I just wear casual clothes.

Original mixes modal 'will rather' (incorrect) and odd words ('violently cheers'). This is a sentence structure error. Use 'prefer to' for preferences and 'wear casual clothes' for home attire. Add articles where needed ('a dress').

× Or the jacket.

✓ Or a jacket.

Fragment lacking article and connection. Add 'a' to make a complete noun phrase and attach it to previous sentence or make it a standalone sentence 'Or a jacket.'

× For me it depends on the situation, if I go to university I prefer to wear the smart clothes they suit or jacket that that more formal.

✓ For me it depends on the situation; if I go to university I prefer to wear smart clothes such as a suit or a jacket because they are more formal.

Multiple issues: unnecessary 'the' before 'smart clothes' (article error), repetition 'that that,' and sentence structure unclear. Correct present tense preference 'prefer to wear,' use 'such as' for examples, include articles 'a suit' and 'a jacket,' and clarify reason with 'because they are more formal.'

× But when I'm stay at home I prefer to wear comfortable like chairs or mini dressed.

✓ But when I stay at home I prefer to wear comfortable clothes like shorts or a mini dress.

Incorrect verb form 'I'm stay' should be 'I stay' (present tense). 'Comfortable like chairs' uses wrong nouns; likely meant 'shorts.' Also add 'clothes' after 'comfortable' and correct 'mini dressed' to 'a mini dress.'

× Yes I do. I really like wearing T-shirts.

✓ Yes, I do. I really like wearing T-shirts.

Minor punctuation: add comma after 'Yes' for natural speech writing. Grammar is otherwise correct (present preference).

× I have many band after T-shirt that I really like for example Unicorn or net.

✓ I have many band T-shirts that I really like, for example ones featuring Unicorns or Nets.

Original word order and choices are incorrect ('band after T-shirt'). This is a sentence structure error. Use 'band T-shirts' or 'T-shirts with bands,' add comma before example, and use plural/specific nouns correctly.

× I think T-shirt is very comfortable for me.

✓ I think T-shirts are very comfortable for me.

Use plural 'T-shirts' with general statements about a type of clothing and match verb 'are.' This is a present tense/number issue (singular vs general plural).

× I can wear T-shirts in everywhere that I go.

✓ I can wear T-shirts everywhere I go.

Use correct preposition pattern: 'everywhere' does not need 'in.' Remove 'that' for natural clause: 'everywhere I go.' This fixes sentence structure and preposition misuse.

× Like when I go to university I can wear T-shirts or I I stay at home or. I go to sleep. I can wear T-shirt too.

✓ For example, when I go to university I can wear T-shirts; when I stay at home or go to sleep I can wear T-shirts too.

Original has repetition ('I I'), fragments, and poor punctuation. Combine clauses with proper conjunctions or punctuation and use plural 'T-shirts' for general statements.

× Yes I do, I usually spend many time to choose the cost.

✓ Yes, I do. I usually spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

'Many time' is incorrect; use 'a lot of time.' 'To choose the cost' is wrong; likely meant 'choosing clothes.' Also split into two sentences and fix gerund 'choosing.'

× I usually go to shop close with my friends so I I usually try before I buy some clothes.

✓ I usually go to shops near me with my friends, so I try clothes on before I buy them.

Original misuses 'go to shop close' and repeats 'I I.' Use plural 'shops' and 'near me' or 'nearby.' Use phrasal verb 'try on' for clothes and replace 'some clothes' with 'them.'

× I think it's really important for me.

✓ I think it's really important to me.

Slight phrasing: 'important to me' is more natural than 'important for me' in this context. Tense is present; change improves collocation.

× If I try and I like it I will I will buy it.

✓ If I try it on and I like it, I will buy it.

Use 'try it on' for clothes and remove duplicated 'I will.' Maintain correct conditional structure: present + future. Add commas for clarity.

× But if I try and I think it's not appropriate for me, I will. I will not buy it.

✓ But if I try it on and I think it's not appropriate for me, I will not buy it.

Remove sentence fragment and combine clauses. Use 'try it on' and keep 'will not buy it' as the future result of the present condition.

× For me it's quite different because on the weekday I go to university for study for so I will rather close like formal than the weekend.

✓ For me it's quite different because on weekdays I go to university to study, so I prefer to wear formal clothes, unlike on the weekend.

Original has wrong words and structure: 'will rather close like formal' is incorrect. Use 'prefer to wear formal clothes' and plural 'weekdays.' Clarify contrast with 'unlike on the weekend.'

× In the weekend I usually go to exercise so I will. Wear the spot like is very it can learn or walk or jogging, yes.

✓ On the weekend I usually exercise, so I wear sports clothes; they are good for running, walking, or jogging.

Original is fragmented and uses wrong nouns 'spot.' Correct phrasing is 'exercise,' 'sports clothes,' and list activities clearly. Remove stray words and join clauses properly.

× Actually, I, when I think about the clothes that I have, I, the most of them uh, have the old uh, tone like the bald white, uh, cream yes, but actually the color that I like is blue, but I think my skin tone is not.

✓ When I think about the clothes I have, most of them are in pale tones like off-white and cream, but the color I like is blue, although I don't think it suits my skin tone.

Very disfluent speech with filler words; needs reordering and correct adjectives: 'pale tones,' 'off-white.' Use 'most of them are' for subject-verb agreement and 'suits' for fitting with 'skin tone.' Combine ideas into coherent sentence.

× I probably have written light tone, so I usually wear the warm tone or a tone.

✓ I probably have a rather light skin tone, so I usually wear warm tones or earth tones.

Original is unclear ('written light tone'). Use 'a rather light skin tone' and correct noun 'tones.' Provide specific options like 'warm tones' or 'earth tones.' This fixes sentence structure and word choice.