Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (verb forms and articles), and give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid vague phrases like "promotional look." Use linking words if adding reasons.

例: I usually wear casual but stylish clothes, mainly T-shirts and jeans. I prefer this style because it feels comfortable and makes me look confident when I meet people.

提案: Answer directly with a clear preference, correct word choice (use "casual" not "cashier"), and give one specific reason with correct grammar and a linking word to connect ideas.

例: I prefer comfortable casual clothes rather than smart clothes because they make me feel relaxed, and I can move freely when I spend time with friends.

提案: Keep it natural and avoid exaggeration. Use correct nouns and adjectives, and give a concise reason. One or two sentences are enough.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts; they are comfortable and suit my style. For informal parties I often choose a nice T-shirt because it makes me feel confident.

提案: Start with a direct topic sentence, correct grammar (articles, plurals), and give specific details about when and why you take time choosing clothes. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect reasons.

例: Yes, I often spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to pick something suitable for the occasion. For example, I compare options at the shop to find the right color and fit.

提案: Give a clear contrast and use correct vocabulary ("casual" instead of "cashier"). One or two specific examples of weekday and weekend outfits will help. Use a linking phrase like "while" or "whereas."

例: Yes. On weekdays I wear professional clothes like shirts and trousers for work, whereas on weekends I choose casual clothes such as jeans and a T-shirt because they are more comfortable for meeting friends.

提案: Answer directly and give specific reasons with correct grammar. Explain briefly why the color appeals to you (e.g., suits your skin tone, looks professional). Avoid unclear phrases like "gives me more look."

例: I prefer blue because it suits my skin tone and looks smart. I also feel more confident wearing blue, especially for formal events.

× Most of the times I wear T-shirts and jeans.

✓ Most of the time I wear T-shirts and jeans.

Use 'time' not 'times' after 'most of the' when referring to frequency. 'Most of the time' is the fixed expression meaning usually.

× The most significant reason is it gave me a promotional look or it improve my confidence level.

✓ The most significant reason is that it gives me a more professional look and improves my confidence.

The sentence mixes past tense 'gave' with present context 'is'. Use present tense 'gives' and 'improves' to match 'is' and habitual meaning. Also use 'more professional' instead of 'promotional' for appearance and correct subject-verb agreement ('it improves').

× I do prefer cashier clothes since it would give confidence, it improve my give more comfortable and also cash casual clothes is my favorite.

✓ I prefer casual clothes because they make me feel more confident and comfortable; casual clothes are also my favorite.

'Do prefer' is unnecessary; simple present 'prefer' suffices. 'Would' is not appropriate for general statements—use present 'make'. 'It' should be plural 'they' to agree with 'clothes'. 'Improve' must be 'make' or 'increase' with correct subject-verb agreement. 'Cashier' is incorrect word choice; use 'casual'. Also correct 'is' to 'are' for plural 'clothes'.

× it improve my give more comfortable and also cash casual clothes is my favorite.

✓ they make me more comfortable and casual clothes are my favorite.

Subject-verb agreement error: plural subject 'they' (clothes) requires plural verbs ('make', 'are'). 'Improve' is incorrect with 'give more comfortable'; use 'make me more comfortable'.

× T-shirt is one of my favorite clothes.

✓ T-shirts are one of my favorite types of clothing.

'T-shirt' singular conflicts with 'one of my favorite clothes' which implies a plural category. Use plural 'T-shirts' or rephrase as 'a T-shirt is one of my favorite items of clothing'. Also 'clothing' is a better uncountable noun.

× Whenever I get a chance to go for a party I would prefer to wear T-shirts because it gives me a good looking and I'm very handsome in T-shirts.

✓ Whenever I get a chance to go to a party I prefer to wear T-shirts because they make me look good and I feel handsome in them.

Use simple present 'prefer' for habitual actions, not 'would prefer'. 'Go for a party' should be 'go to a party'. 'It gives me a good looking' is ungrammatical; use 'they make me look good'. Use plural pronoun 'they/them' to agree with 'T-shirts'.

× I do spend a lot of time to choose a clothes because it depends on person, two person.

✓ I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes because it depends on the person and the occasion.

Use the gerund 'choosing' after 'spend time'. 'To choose a clothes' is incorrect: 'clothes' is plural and does not take 'a'. 'Depends on person, two person' is unclear; common phrase is 'depends on the person and the occasion'.

× Whenever I go for a for clothing, I'm very confused for taking any clothes because there are wide varieties of clothes available in in the shop.

✓ Whenever I go shopping for clothes, I am very confused about which clothes to choose because there is a wide variety of clothes available in the shop.

'Go for a for clothing' is incorrect; 'go shopping for clothes' or 'go shopping' is natural. Use 'confused about which clothes to choose' instead of 'confused for taking any clothes'. 'Wide varieties' should be 'a wide variety' or 'many varieties'. Remove duplicate 'in in'.

× On my weekends I do prefer cashier clothes because I'm going outside with my friends at that time.

✓ On weekends I prefer casual clothes because I go out with my friends then.

Use 'weekends' not 'my weekends' (both acceptable but 'on weekends' is more natural). 'Do prefer' unnecessary. 'Going outside' should be 'go out'. Replace 'cashier' with 'casual'.

× Cashier clothes is very comfortable for me to wear.

✓ Casual clothes are very comfortable for me to wear.

Plural noun 'clothes' requires plural verb 'are'. Also correct word choice 'casual' instead of 'cashier'.

× I like to wear blue because blue is my favorite color.

✓ I like to wear blue because it is my favorite color.

Repetition of 'blue' is unnecessary. Use pronoun 'it' to avoid repetition and make the sentence smoother.

× The second reason is that blue gave me more confidence and it gives me more look.

✓ The second reason is that blue gives me more confidence and makes me look better.

Use present tense 'gives' to match general statement. 'Gave' is past tense and incorrect here. 'Gives me more look' is unidiomatic; use 'makes me look better'.