Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clear and concise: start with a topic sentence stating your usual clothing, then give one or two specific examples. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use correct vocabulary (trousers, shirt, casual, smart, embellished) and correct word order. Aim for 2–4 sentences and link ideas with simple connectors (for example, but, so).

例: I usually wear trousers and a shirt at home because I like to be comfortable. When I go out, I prefer smarter clothes, such as a tailored shirt and jacket, especially for meetings. However, for casual outings I choose simple jeans with minimal accessories.

提案: Good idea and clear preference. Improve by removing hesitations and repeating the main reason once. Provide one linking word (because, so) and a concise supporting example. Keep within 2–3 sentences.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me move freely and stay relaxed throughout the day. For example, I usually choose soft shirts and jeans instead of formal shirts for daily activities.

提案: Use correct vocabulary and avoid literal or inaccurate verbs. Say 'absorb sweat' or 'keep me cool' instead of 'suck the sweating.' Expand slightly with one brief reason or example. Keep it natural and short.

例: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they absorb sweat and keep me cool. For example, I wear cotton T-shirts when I exercise or run errands.

提案: Avoid repetition and correct awkward phrasing ('comfortable clothes' not 'comfortable up clothes'). Give one reason and a brief example of your routine to support the answer. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I usually pick comfortable items quickly. For instance, I have a few go-to shirts and jeans that I wear most days.

提案: Be direct and structured: start with a clear statement, then explain conditions when you change style. Avoid unclear phrases like 'select simple expression' or 'descend in the function.' Use concrete examples (work, events, parties). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

例: It depends. On weekdays I usually wear casual or smart-casual clothes for work, but at special events or parties I choose more stylish outfits, such as a nicer shirt and jacket.

提案: Clarify the intended meaning: say 'I like most colors, but my favorites are white and black.' Avoid unclear words like 'old.' Provide a brief reason why you prefer those colors (versatile, easy to match).

例: I like most colours, but my favourites are white and black because they are versatile and easy to match with other items.

× Usually I wear trouser and shirt at home, but uh, whenever I go out of my home then I wear a shell workmans and or a trouser shirt uh, but they are uh, too stylish, uh, and embellished by accessories.

✓ Usually I wear trousers and a shirt at home, but whenever I go out I wear a shell, workman-style clothes, or a trouser shirt; they are a bit too stylish and embellished with accessories.

The sentence contains singular/plural and article errors. 'Trouser' should be plural 'trousers' when referring to pants in general (problem type 1). 'Shirt' when referring to a single item worn with trousers needs the article 'a' (article error, treated under plural/singular here). The phrase 'embellished by accessories' uses an incorrect preposition; 'embellished with accessories' is correct (preposition issue, problem type 11). Also the structure is awkward and run-on; I simplified clauses and used commas and a semicolon to improve clarity. Suggestion: use plural nouns for garments normally worn in pairs (trousers), include articles for singular countable nouns, and use 'with' after 'embellished'. Please avoid filler words like 'uh' in formal speech.

× Uh, mostly I love to wear comfortable clothes because, uh, I feel so relaxed all the day and uh, for example, I like wearing soft shirts and jeans rather than formal shirts since they let me move freely and feel relaxed or.

✓ Mostly I like to wear comfortable clothes because I feel relaxed all day; for example, I prefer soft shirts and jeans to formal shirts since they let me move freely and feel comfortable.

The sentence has awkward tense and word choice issues (present tense usage, problem type 6). 'I love to wear' is acceptable but 'I like' is more natural here. 'All the day' is nonstandard; use 'all day'. The sentence ended with 'or', which is incomplete. I replaced 'rather than' with 'to' after 'prefer' and removed extra fillers. Suggestion: use 'all day' for duration, avoid trailing conjunctions, and choose consistent verbs like 'prefer' when comparing.

× Yes, I love to wear T-shirts because, uh, they suck the sweating.

✓ Yes, I love to wear T-shirts because they absorb sweat.

This sentence uses an incorrect verb phrase and noun form. 'Suck the sweating' is ungrammatical. Use 'absorb sweat' or 'wick away sweat' to describe fabrics removing moisture (problem type 8: verb + -ing form and general verb choice). Also 'sweating' should be the noun 'sweat'. Suggestion: use common collocations for clothing functions: 'absorb sweat' or 'wick away sweat'.

× No, usually not, because I always choose comfortable up clothes. Uh, that's why I never spend too much time on choosing clothes.

✓ No, usually not, because I always choose comfortable clothes. That's why I never spend much time choosing clothes.

The phrase 'comfortable up clothes' is incorrect; 'comfortable clothes' is correct (quantifier/article/word choice, problem type 14 and 22). 'Spend too much time on choosing clothes' is wordy; more natural is 'spend much time choosing clothes' or 'spend too much time choosing clothes' depending on intended emphasis. Suggestion: remove unnecessary words like 'up' and avoid redundant prepositions.

× No, actually it depends on the situations or if there are any events then I select simple expression or stylish. But that makes me descend in the function. But in the daily view, uh, I prefer to all those and sorts.

✓ No, it depends on the situation; if there are events I choose either simple or stylish outfits. However, that can make me feel out of place. In daily life, I prefer a mix of different styles.

This response has multiple sentence structure and vocabulary errors (problem type 26). 'Depends on the situations' should be 'depends on the situation' (singular general noun). 'Select simple expression or stylish' is unclear; corrected to 'choose either simple or stylish outfits'. 'That makes me descend in the function' is nonsensical; I interpreted as 'feel out of place' and corrected accordingly. 'In the daily view' should be 'in daily life' and 'I prefer to all those and sorts' is ungrammatical; I changed to 'I prefer a mix of different styles'. Suggestion: use clear nouns like 'situation' and standard phrases like 'feel out of place' and 'daily life'.

× I love all the colors old but white and black are my favorite colors.

✓ I like all colors, but white and black are my favorites.

The original has an incorrect word 'old' and redundant phrasing (problem type 13). 'Love all the colors old' is incorrect; use 'like all colors' or 'I love all colors'. Also 'favorite colors' can be plural but 'my favorites' is more concise. Suggestion: remove unnecessary or incorrect words and avoid redundancy.