Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your reply more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific supporting reasons, and use linking words. Reduce filler phrases and correct minor grammar (e.g., "I feel very relaxed when I wear casual clothes").

例: I prefer casual clothes, especially jeans, because they are comfortable and practical for daily activities. For example, jeans and a T-shirt let me move easily when I commute or meet friends, so I usually choose them for most occasions.

提案: Answer directly, then add a brief qualifying detail. Remove hesitations like "uh" and use a linking word to show contrast (e.g., "however" or "but").

例: I generally prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they make me feel relaxed. However, I wear smart clothes for special events such as parties or work meetings to look more professional.

提案: Keep the answer natural and add a specific reason or example for your preference. Use one linking phrase to connect the reason (e.g., "because" or "for example").

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to wash. For example, I often choose bright colors like blue or red to feel cheerful during the day.

提案: Give a concise topic sentence and one clear reason or brief example. Fix grammar (e.g., "I am quick at deciding") and avoid informal phrasing like "whatever it is in front of me."

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I'm quick at deciding. For instance, each morning I pick a practical outfit the night before, so I can dress quickly and not waste time.

提案: Structure the response with a clear topic sentence, then support with specific reasons. Remove hesitation and use a linking word (e.g., "whereas" or "while") to contrast weekdays and weekends.

例: Yes, I wear different styles: while I wear smart clothes during weekdays for work, I choose casual outfits on weekends because they are comfortable and suitable for exercising or relaxing.

提案: Be concise and clear. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases (e.g., "they track me a lot"). State preferred colors and give a brief reason or example why you like them. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., "bright colours" and "they attract me").

例: I prefer bright colours such as red, green, blue and orange because they lift my mood and help me stand out. For example, I often wear a bright blue shirt when I want to look energetic at social events.

× I would like to wear casual clothes like I'm very comfortable in jeans because whenever I have to go anywhere, I feel very relaxed when I have feeling when I am wearing casual clothes.

✓ I like to wear casual clothes; I feel very comfortable in jeans and relaxed whenever I go anywhere in casual clothes.

The original sentence repeats ideas and has awkward phrasing ('like I'm very comfortable', 'I have feeling when I am wearing'). This is a sentence structure problem (ID 26). Improve by removing redundancy, combining clauses with clear connectors, and using consistent present simple tense for habits: 'I like to wear', 'I feel'. Keep sentences concise and avoid repeating 'feeling' and 'when'.

× I prefer casual clothes over smart clothes because uh, I feel very relaxed when I am in casual clothes. But uh, it depends because uh, whenever I have to attend any party, I have to wear smart clothes.

✓ I prefer casual clothes to smart clothes because I feel very relaxed in casual clothes, but it depends: whenever I have to attend a party, I wear smart clothes.

The main issues are preposition and tense choices. 'Prefer ... over' is acceptable, but 'prefer ... to' is more common; this is a preposition nuance (ID 11) and present tense consistency (ID 6). Also 'have to wear' can be simplified to habitual present 'wear' for routines. Remove filler words and keep present simple for preferences and habitual actions.

× I love to wear bright colors like red, green, orange, blue. These are my favorite colors.

✓ I love wearing bright colors such as red, green, orange and blue; these are my favorite colors.

Using 'love to wear' is acceptable, but 'love wearing' is more natural when speaking of general preferences (ID 10). Also use 'such as' for examples and join the list with 'and'. This improves fluency and naturalness.

× No I in this matter I am very quick decision making and I don't waste time on deciding what to wear or what to not wear. I just pick my clothes and wear it whatever it is in front of me.

✓ No. In this matter I make decisions very quickly, and I don't waste time deciding what to wear. I just pick my clothes and put them on, whatever is in front of me.

The original has incorrect word order, awkward noun phrases ('quick decision making'), and wrong verb forms ('wear it whatever it is'). This is sentence structure (ID 26) and subject-verb issues (ID 27). Use 'make decisions quickly' and 'put them on' for clarity; remove redundant phrasing.

× Yes, because I'm working as a professional and that's why I have to wear smart clothes in the weekdays. But on weekends I usually prefer casual clothes because they are comfortable and I love to do exercise on those days. So I wear casual clothes on the weekends and smart clothes on, umm weekdays.

✓ Yes, because I work as a professional, I have to wear smart clothes on weekdays. On weekends I usually prefer casual clothes because they are comfortable and I like to exercise on those days. So I wear casual clothes on weekends and smart clothes on weekdays.

Use simple present 'I work' for permanent jobs rather than continuous 'I'm working' (ID 6). Also article and preposition fixes: 'on weekdays/weekends' not 'in the weekdays' (ID 11 and 22). Use 'like to exercise' or 'exercise' instead of 'love to do exercise' for natural phrasing.

× As I have told you in my previous questions that I love bright colours, uh, like red, green, blue, orange. I like pride colours and uh, they track me a lot.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I love bright colors such as red, green, blue and orange. I like bright colors and they attract me a lot.

The original uses awkward pronouns and incorrect word choice: 'pride colours' and 'they track me a lot' are incorrect. This is incorrect use of pronouns/word choice (ID 12 and 13). Replace with 'bright colors' and the verb 'attract' to express preference. Also simplify 'As I have told you in my previous questions' to 'As I mentioned earlier' for natural speech.