Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve accuracy and clarity: correct small grammar errors (e.g., 'when you do a rent outside' → 'when I go out') and avoid redundancy. Keep answer within three sentences: give a clear topic sentence, one brief reason, and one specific example. Use a linking word to connect reason and example.

例: I usually wear jeans and T-shirts because they are very comfortable. For example, when I go out with friends or run errands, jeans and a T-shirt let me move easily and feel relaxed.

提案: Expand slightly with a supporting detail and a linking word to make the answer more complete. State your preference clearly, then give a reason or short example to justify it. Keep it concise (1–2 supporting sentences).

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they allow me to work and relax without feeling restricted. For instance, I often choose a T-shirt and jeans when I know I'll be walking or doing practical tasks.

提案: Correct word choice and improve coherence: replace unclear words ('very fair') with appropriate adjectives and link ideas. Provide one clear reason and a brief example. Avoid fragmented sentences.

例: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and keep me cool. For example, on warm days a cotton T-shirt helps me feel fresh and relaxed.

提案: Clarify and tighten the response: use a topic sentence, then a linked reason and a short specific detail. Remove vague or subjective words like 'very beautiful' unless explaining why. Correct small grammar issues.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I usually wear a T-shirt—it's comfortable and suits the hot weather in my country. This makes getting dressed quick and practical.

提案: Fix grammar and word choice ('normal days' → 'weekdays', 'scrap shirt uniform' unclear). Give a clear contrast between weekday/work clothes and weekend clothes, using a linking word. Provide one concise example of workplace clothing.

例: On weekdays I usually wear a T-shirt for casual days, but at work I wear a uniform shirt. For example, my work uniform is a plain collared shirt that looks more formal than my weekend clothes.

提案: Improve grammar and precision: say 'black and white because they match many colours of trousers.' Use a linking phrase to explain the reason and give a short example of outfit combinations.

例: I prefer black and white shirts because they go well with almost any colour of trousers. For instance, a white shirt looks good with blue jeans while a black shirt pairs nicely with grey or khaki pants.

× I like to wear jeans and T-shirt because it's very comfortable to wear, especially when you do a rent outside or just hang out with friends.

✓ I like to wear jeans and a T-shirt because they're very comfortable to wear, especially when you go out or just hang out with friends.

Errors: 'T-shirt' needs an article and plural agreement with 'jeans' requires plural pronoun; 'do a rent outside' is incorrect use of preposition and verb phrase. Use 'go out' for leaving the house or 'hang out with friends'. Suggestion: add 'a' before 'T-shirt', change 'it's' to 'they're' to match plural 'jeans and a T-shirt', and replace 'do a rent outside' with 'go out'.

× I always prefer to wear comfortable clothes.

✓ I always prefer to wear comfortable clothes.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No changes needed. Reason: subject, verb, and object are used properly and tense is appropriate.

× Oh, I love wearing T-shirt. It's very comfortable and it's very fair. I feel very fresh whenever.

✓ Oh, I love wearing T-shirts. They're very comfortable and they look nice. I feel very fresh whenever I wear one.

Errors: missing plural/article before 'T-shirt' and pronoun agreement ('it's' should be 'they're' for plural) and unclear adjective 'fair' (likely meant 'nice' or 'cool'); 'I feel very fresh whenever' is incomplete without 'I wear one' or similar. Suggestion: use plural 'T-shirts' or 'a T-shirt', match pronouns to number, replace 'fair' with appropriate adjective, and complete the clause 'whenever I wear one'.

× No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I know what to wear and it's always a T-shirt because I'm very comfortable with that. It's very beautiful, especially with the hot weather here in my country.

✓ No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I know what to wear and it's usually a T-shirt since I'm very comfortable with that. It's very suitable, especially in the hot weather here in my country.

Errors: 'it's always a T-shirt' is acceptable but 'usually' is more natural; 'because I'm very comfortable with that' duplicates 'because' leading to awkward structure. 'It's very beautiful' is odd for clothing preference; use 'suitable' or 'comfortable'. Preposition 'with the hot weather' should be 'in the hot weather'. Suggestion: use 'usually', avoid repeating 'because', choose appropriate adjective and correct preposition 'in'.

× Oh I usually I wear T-shirt on my normal days and when I'm at work I always wear my scrap shirt uniform.

✓ Oh, I usually wear a T-shirt on my normal days, and when I'm at work I always wear my scrap-shirt uniform.

Errors: duplicate 'I' after 'usually' is redundant; missing article before 'T-shirt'; 'scrap shirt uniform' is unclear — assumed intended 'scrap-shirt uniform' or 'scrubs' or 'shop shirt'. Suggestion: remove duplicate 'I', add 'a' before 'T-shirt', and clarify the type of uniform (use correct noun).

× The color that I like on my shirt is usually black and white, which is so you can partner it on every color of the pants.

✓ The colors I like for my shirts are usually black and white, which you can pair with any color of pants.

Errors: 'color that I like on my shirt' is wordy; use plural 'colors' and preposition 'for'. 'Which is so you can partner it on' is incorrect — use 'which you can pair with'. 'Every color of the pants' should be 'any color of pants' or 'any color pants'. Suggestion: use 'colors' for shirts, 'for' instead of 'on', 'pair with' instead of 'partner on', and 'any color of pants'.