Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct, correct grammar, avoid repetition and keep within 3–4 sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence (what you like), then give 1–2 specific supporting details. Correct word choice (e.g. "IELTS", "wear").

例: I usually wear comfortable, sporty clothes. For example, I often wear hoodies and jerseys because they are easy to move in when I study or exercise. I prefer simple, practical outfits rather than formal clothes.

提案: Reduce fillers ("umm"), avoid repeating the same idea, and combine reasons with linking words (e.g. "because", "so"). Keep it concise: topic sentence + two brief reasons with an example.

例: I prefer comfortable, sporty clothes because I study for long periods and also work out regularly. For instance, I often choose sweatpants and a hoodie so I can sit comfortably and go to the gym without changing.

提案: Use correct verb forms ("wear" not "wearing") and cleaner sentence structure. Give a clear topic sentence then a short reason using a linking phrase like "because" or "so".

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts at home because they are comfortable and allow me to move freely. For example, I wear T-shirts when I exercise or relax on the sofa.

提案: Clarify your ideas and correct word order. Start with a direct answer, then give a coherent reason. Avoid vague phrases; explain what you mean by "fashion" or "vision."

例: Yes, I often spend time choosing outfits because I am interested in fashion and like to coordinate colours and styles. For example, I pick accessories and shoes carefully to match the rest of my clothing.

提案: Make the answer concise and fix grammar. Use linking words ("because", "for example") and give one or two clear occasions that explain the difference between weekday and weekend clothes.

例: Yes, I wear different styles. On weekdays I dress casually and comfortably for studying, but on weekends I sometimes dress up when I go out with friends or attend events like weddings.

提案: Avoid fillers, be specific and concise. Give a clear reason for your preference and contrast briefly with others using a linking word like "although" or "while."

例: I prefer sky blue because it feels calming and easy on my eyes. Although many people in Korea prefer neutral colours like black, white, or grey, I choose blue because it relaxes me.

× Recently I've been starting to study IL tests so I usually use wearing comfortable and sporty style clothes like hoodie and hoodie and jersey.

✓ Recently I started studying IELTS tests, so I usually wear comfortable, sporty clothes like hoodies and jerseys.

The original mixes 'I've been starting' (awkward present perfect progressive) and incorrect verb + -ing use 'use wearing'. Use simple past 'started' or present perfect 'I've started' with the gerund 'studying'. Also 'use wearing' is ungrammatical; the verb should be 'wear'. Plural forms 'hoodies' and 'jerseys' are required. Suggestions: use 'I started studying' or 'I've started studying' and 'I usually wear'.

× I prefer to wear, umm, sporty and comfortable clothes because I have to study from now and I have to work out. So yeah, I like to wear comfortable clothes.

✓ I prefer to wear sporty, comfortable clothes because I study now and I work out. So yeah, I like to wear comfortable clothes.

'I have to study from now' is unnatural and mixes modal/tense meaning. If describing current habitual activities, use simple present 'I study' and 'I work out'. If obligation is intended, 'I have to study and work out' is acceptable. Suggestions: decide whether it's habit (use simple present) or obligation (use 'have to').

× Yeah, I like to wearing T-shirts when I I'm in my home, my places, because it is comfortable to moving my body more easily.

✓ Yeah, I like wearing T-shirts when I'm at home or in my place because they make it easier for me to move my body.

After 'like' use the gerund 'wearing' (not 'to wearing'). 'I I'm' is a typo; use 'I'm'. Preposition should be 'at home' or 'in my place'. 'It is comfortable to moving' mixes infinitive and gerund; correct is 'they make it easier for me to move' or 'it is comfortable and allows me to move more easily.' Suggestion: use 'I like wearing' and 'they make it easier to move.'

× Yeah, I usually spend a lot of time to choose my outfit because I like fashion and my in my one of the interests in my it is vision.

✓ Yeah, I usually spend a lot of time choosing my outfit because I like fashion; one of my interests is fashion and style.

Use 'spend time choosing' (correct verb + -ing and preposition usage) rather than 'spend a lot of time to choose.' The latter is incorrect. The second clause is garbled; correct structure is 'one of my interests is fashion' or 'I am interested in fashion and style.' Suggestion: use clear subject + verb order and 'spend time + -ing.'

× Yeah, I think I usually wear different style of clothes on weekend because I I sometime I dating my with my friends and I have to go wedding or something.

✓ Yeah, I think I usually wear different styles of clothes on weekends because sometimes I go on dates with my friends and I have to go to weddings or similar events.

Use plural 'styles' and 'weekends'. 'Sometime I dating my with my friends' is ungrammatical; correct is 'sometimes I go on dates with my friends.' Also 'go wedding' needs preposition 'to' and plural 'weddings' if general. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements and correct verb forms: 'sometimes I go on dates' and 'go to weddings.'

× Umm, I think I like sky blue because it makes my eyes more comfortable and my mind more comfortable. But most of people who live in Korea, they like black and white or Gray.

✓ Umm, I think I like sky blue because it makes my eyes and my mind feel more comfortable. But most people who live in Korea prefer black, white, or gray.

Use 'feel more comfortable' rather than 'makes my eyes more comfortable.' 'Most of people' should be 'most people.' Avoid redundant pronoun 'they' after the relative clause. Use consistent verb 'prefer' for general tendency. Capitalization: 'Gray' should be lower-case 'gray.' Suggestion: use 'most people' and concise phrasing 'prefer black, white, or gray.'