Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a clear direct topic sentence, avoid repetition and unclear words, and add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Keep it under 5 sentences. For example, say you like T-shirts because they are comfortable and suitable for warm weather, and provide a brief specific detail about activities you do in them.

例: I prefer wearing T-shirts. They are very comfortable and keep me cool in summer, so I usually wear them when I work or exercise. For instance, when I run or do office tasks at home, a T-shirt helps me move freely and stay relaxed.

提案: Answer directly and give clear reasons with linking words. Avoid unclear vocabulary and irrelevant words. State preference, then give one or two concise reasons relating to comfort and job needs.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes. Because I work long hours in the office, I need clothes that allow me to sit and move easily. For example, I often choose soft trousers and a T-shirt so I can focus on work without feeling restricted.

提案: Respond clearly and avoid repeating the same idea. Provide a specific reason or short example to support your opinion using a linking word like 'because' or 'for example'.

例: Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts because they are simple and versatile. For example, I can wear a T-shirt for casual outings, exercise, or layered under a jacket for work.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence and one clear reason. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas and be specific about your routine when choosing clothes.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I usually pick simple and smart outfits. For instance, I keep a few reliable shirts and trousers so I can dress quickly in the morning.

提案: Answer directly and explain the specific differences in styles with one or two clear examples. Use linking words like 'because' and keep sentences short and coherent.

例: Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends because my weekday clothes are more work-appropriate. For example, on weekdays I wear collared shirts and trousers for the office, while on weekends I prefer jeans and T-shirts for relaxation.

提案: State your preference clearly and give one or two specific reasons or an example of when you wear that colour. Avoid adding irrelevant noises or fragments.

例: I like black clothes the most because they look neat and go with everything. For example, I often wear a black shirt to work because it appears professional and is easy to match with different pants.

× Actually I like to wear T-shirt because of T-shirt is my favorite hoe and the summer season I clothing my T-shirt is a very good condition and I have com compatible run compatible workload to prepare.

✓ Actually, I like to wear T-shirts because they are my favorite. In summer, wearing T-shirts is comfortable and they are in good condition for my work and daily activities.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure errors: run-on sentences, unclear phrases ('hoe', 'com compatible run compatible workload'), and incorrect word order. Split into two clear sentences and replace incorrect words. Use the plural T-shirts and the pronoun they to refer to T-shirts. Clarify meaning by stating comfort in summer and suitability for work. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, of course I prefer to hold comfortable clothes because of my eye working in my office.

✓ Yes, of course I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because I work in an office.

Incorrect verb 'hold' and awkward phrase 'my eye working'. Use 'wear' for clothing and a clear subject-verb clause 'I work in an office'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× This is a very comfortable floor in my oil and also is not clothed because of.

✓ They are very comfortable for my job and suitable for the office environment.

Nonsense words 'floor', 'oil', and 'not clothed' cause confusion. Replace with appropriate adjectives and nouns: 'comfortable for my job' and 'suitable for the office'. Ensure adjectives modify the correct nouns. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Smirnoff is our very important of our human life that's why I.

✓ Comfortable clothing is important in our daily lives, which is why I prefer it.

The original sentence uses an unrelated brand name 'Smirnoff' and is incomplete. Provide a complete clause explaining why comfortable clothing is preferred. Correct sentence structure and complete the thought. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Of course, I really love wearing T-shirt.

✓ Of course, I really love wearing T-shirts.

Use the plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally about the item. Singular would refer to a single garment rather than the category. Grammar problem type ID:1

× T-shirt are in our most popular clothes because of its very humble and wiring a fine wear wiring wearing T-shirt we are properly working, very good condition, very good job of course.

✓ T-shirts are among our most popular clothes because they are simple and comfortable. Wearing T-shirts helps me work comfortably and perform well.

Multiple issues: subject-verb agreement fixed by 'T-shirts are'. Pronoun reference corrected to 'they'. Remove repeated and unclear words and split into coherent sentences. Clarify cause and effect. Grammar problem type ID:27

× It's really not I'm not spending time lots of time choosing thought.

✓ I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

Redundant and mixed negatives create confusion. Use a simple negative present tense: 'I don't spend a lot of time...' to match the context. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I choose compatible and smart wire.

✓ I choose suitable and smart clothes.

Wrong word 'wire' instead of 'wear' or 'clothes'. Use adjectives 'suitable' and 'smart' with the noun 'clothes'. Grammar problem type ID:13

× When I shook then I will take a cloth smartly and properly.

✓ When I shop for clothes, I choose them carefully and appropriately.

'Shook' is wrong verb; use 'shop'. Tense should be present habitual, so use 'I choose' rather than 'I will take'. Clarify action and use correct adverbs. Grammar problem type ID:26

× That's why not time always.

✓ Therefore, I do not spend much time on it.

Original fragment is unclear. Provide a full sentence explaining the result: limited time spent on choosing clothes. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Actually, yes, I say yes because of, uh, weekdays and weekend difference type of our, uh, work.

✓ Yes, because my weekday and weekend activities are different.

Remove filler words and restructure to a concise sentence explaining the reason: different activities on weekdays and weekends. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Uh, Vijesh, I preferly not working in our office time.

✓ On weekends, I prefer not to work in the office.

'Preferly' is not a word; use 'prefer'. Correct word order and preposition: 'prefer not to work in the office' and specify timeframe 'on weekends'. Grammar problem type ID:20

× That's why I try to similar and weekend is our update I special.

✓ That's why I try to dress more casually on weekends because they are special for me.

Original sentence is incoherent. Clarify intention: dressing casually on weekends and state why (weekends are special). Use correct verbs and adjectives. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Actually I like black, black colour cloth.

✓ Actually, I like black; black-colored clothes.

Use plural 'clothes' or 'clothing' when speaking generally. 'Black colour cloth' is ungrammatical; use 'black-colored clothes'. Grammar problem type ID:1

× Black is my favorite colour then. SCSM's.

✓ Black is my favorite color.

Remove extraneous fragment 'then. SCSM's' which is meaningless. Provide a simple, complete sentence. Also use American 'color' or keep 'colour' depending on variety; here simplified to 'color'. Grammar problem type ID:26