Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Reduce hesitations and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific detail. Use linking words if adding details. For example, say why you prefer cotton and mention an example garment.

例: I prefer simple, comfortable clothes made of cotton. For instance, I often wear cotton shirts and loose trousers because they breathe well in hot weather.

提案: Use present tense and correct phrasing. Start directly, then give a reason with a linking word. Avoid contractions that are unclear.

例: I usually prefer smart clothes because I go to the office every day. For example, I wear a blouse and tailored trousers to look professional.

提案: Combine the short answers into a single coherent response and add a specific detail. Use a linking word to connect your reason to the statement.

例: Yes, I wear T-shirts most of the time because the weather in the Philippines is very hot, so T-shirts keep me cool and comfortable.

提案: Give a clearer structure: start with a direct answer, then explain briefly how you choose clothes. Use more natural phrasing and one linking word.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes. Usually I pick something quickly from my closet based on how I feel that day.

提案: Clarify and correct vocabulary: 'scrub suit' typically refers to medical wear—if you mean casual outfit, say so. Use linking words to contrast weekday and weekend styles and give specific examples.

例: Yes, I dress differently on weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I wear smart outfits like dresses and sneakers for work, while on weekends I prefer casual clothes such as jeans and a T-shirt.

提案: Use correct word order and article use. Give a short topic sentence and then list a few colours naturally, perhaps adding a reason.

例: I prefer neutral colours such as taupe, brown, beige and gray because they are easy to mix and look professional.

× I I like simple clothes that that comfortable to wear like cotton.

✓ I like simple clothes that are comfortable to wear, like cotton.

Repeated words ('I I', 'that that') are unintentional and should be removed. The clause 'that comfortable to wear' is missing the verb 'are' to link the subject 'clothes' to the adjective 'comfortable'. Add a comma before the example 'like cotton'. Suggestion: remove duplicates and include the linking verb 'are' for correct relative clause structure. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I prepared to wear smart clothes 'cause I'm always got to go to office.

✓ I prefer to wear smart clothes because I always have to go to the office.

'Prepared to wear' is incorrect for habitual preference; use 'prefer' or 'like to'. 'I'm always got to' mixes present continuous with past participle; the correct idiom is 'I always have to'. Also include the definite article 'the' before 'office'. Replace the contraction ' 'cause' with 'because' in formal speech. Grammar problem type ID:4

× Yes, I always wear T-shirts. Like our weather in Philippines, it's so hot.

✓ Yes, I always wear T-shirts. Because our weather in the Philippines is so hot.

Beginning a sentence with 'Like' to mean 'because' is colloquial; use 'Because' for clarity. Include the definite article 'the' before 'Philippines'. Use 'is so hot' (present tense) for general truth about the weather. Grammar problem type ID:6

× No, I choose whatever I want and get in my closet.

✓ No, I choose whatever I want from my closet.

The verb phrase 'get in my closet' is incorrect for selecting clothes; use 'from my closet'. 'Get' plus 'in' suggests entering the closet rather than picking items. Use 'choose' with 'from' to indicate selection. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Yes, I usually wear scrub suit on weekends. I prepare smart look like dresses and and sneakers.

✓ Yes, I usually wear a scrub suit on weekends. I prepare a smart look, like dresses and sneakers.

Countable singular noun 'scrub suit' requires the article 'a'. 'Prepare smart look' needs the article 'a' and better phrasing 'prepare a smart look'. Remove duplicate 'and'. Add a comma before the example list. Use plural 'sneakers' is fine. Grammar problem type ID:22

× I like colors that neutral like taupe, brown, beige, Gray.

✓ I like neutral colours, like taupe, brown, beige, and gray.

Use the adjective 'neutral' before 'colours' or say 'colours that are neutral' (missing 'are'). In British English 'colours' is common but 'colors' is acceptable; maintain consistency. Capitalization: 'Gray' should be lowercase unless start of sentence. Add 'and' before the final item in the list and a comma after 'beige'. Suggestion: 'I like neutral colors' or 'I like colors that are neutral'. Grammar problem type ID:13