Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Améliorez la fluidité et la précision grammaticale. Évitez les hésitations répétées (« uh ») et corrigez la structure verbale (par ex. « it makes »). Donnez une phrase d'ouverture claire puis un détail spécifique sur pourquoi c'est confortable (matière, coupe, activités). Limitez-vous à 2–3 phrases.

例: I usually wear sportswear because it is very comfortable and allows me to move freely. For example, breathable fabrics and a loose fit make it easier for me to study and exercise without feeling restricted.

提案: Clarifiez votre idée : la réponse actuelle est contradictoire (« comfortable and casual » vs « appear officially »). Exprimez clairement votre préférence et fournissez une raison précise et logique. Évitez hésitations et gardez la réponse en 1–2 phrases concises.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I value comfort for everyday activities, and I reserve smart clothes for special occasions or formal events.

提案: Rendez la réponse légèrement plus développée et naturelle en donnant un exemple précis (matière ou situation). Évitez les phrases finales inutiles comme « Yeah, that's it ». Utilisez un lien entre idées si vous ajoutez un détail.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially in summer, because lightweight cotton keeps me cool. I often choose plain cotton tees for studying or casual outings.

提案: Évitez répétitions et hésitations. Donnez une réponse directe puis précisez les circonstances où vous prenez plus de temps (événements, couleur, fit). Utilisez un mot de liaison (e.g., "however") pour la cohérence.

例: Not really; however, I sometimes spend more time choosing a T-shirt if I need it for a special event or to match a specific outfit.

提案: Corrigez les erreurs de vocabulaire et la grammaire (« official outfit » → "formal clothes", « sport well » → "sportswear"). Réduisez répétitions et organisez en deux phrases claires reliant semaine/weekend.

例: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear formal clothes because I attend classes and work, while on weekends I prefer sportswear and light, casual outfits.

提案: Corrigez l'accord et la formulation (« black and blue clothes »). Évitez hésitations et fournissez une raison précise ou un souvenir lié aux couleurs pour enrichir le contenu.

例: I like black and blue clothing because black looks smart and blue feels calming. Since childhood I've been drawn to these colours, and I often choose navy shirts for both casual and formal wear.

× I usually like to wear sportswear because I feel comfortable in it and uh, it uh, it make the, the work easy for me.

✓ I usually like to wear sportswear because I feel comfortable in it and, uh, it makes the work easy for me.

The subject 'it' requires the verb in third person singular form 'makes'. Use 'makes' instead of 'make'. Also remove duplicated fillers and extra articles for clarity. Suggestion: practice subject-verb agreement with he/she/it subjects and simple present verbs.

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because, uh, to, to appear officially.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because I want to appear professional.

Sentence had an incomplete clause 'because, to appear officially' which is ungrammatical. Replace with a finite verb clause 'because I want to appear professional' to express purpose or reason. Use 'professional' rather than 'officially' for describing appearance. Suggestion: use 'because I want to...' or 'so that I can...' to express reasons.

× Yes, I like to wear T-shirts and especially in the summer because it's not heavy and I feel comfortable. Yeah, that's it.

✓ Yes, I like to wear T-shirts, especially in the summer, because they are light and I feel comfortable.

T-shirts is plural, so use 'they are' instead of 'it's'. Also 'not heavy' is better expressed as 'light'. Adjust pronoun and verb to agree with plural noun. Suggestion: match pronouns and verbs to noun number.

× Not really, but sometimes I take a lot of time to to choose the the T-shirt or or the clothes in general.

✓ Not really, but sometimes I take a long time to choose a T-shirt or clothes in general.

Remove duplicated words ('to to', 'the the', 'or or') and use 'a long time' instead of 'a lot of time' for this context. Use 'a T-shirt' or 'T-shirts' consistently. Suggestion: read sentences aloud to catch repetitions and prefer 'a long time' for duration.

× Yes, of course on the weekdays I, I wear a official outfit because, uh, I study and I work, but on the weekends I, I just wear a sport well, and something light.

✓ Yes, of course on weekdays I wear an official outfit because I study and work, but on weekends I just wear sportswear and something light.

Use 'an' before vowel-sound adjective 'official'. Remove unnecessary commas and repetitions. 'Sport well' is incorrect; use 'sportswear'. Use plural 'weekdays/weekends' without 'the' in this general sense. Suggestion: choose correct articles 'a/an' and correct vocabulary ('sportswear').

× I like a black and a blue clothes. I don't know why, but uh, since I was uh, young, I liked uh, these two colors.

✓ I like black and blue clothes. I don't know why, but since I was young, I have liked these two colors.

Do not use 'a' before color nouns modifying 'clothes' (plural). Use present perfect 'have liked' to indicate a preference continuing from the past to now. Also remove filler words. Suggestion: use 'black and blue clothes' and use present perfect for continuing states.