Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: ปรับประโยคให้ชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น พูดประโยคหัวข้อก่อนแล้วตามด้วยเหตุผลและตัวอย่างสั้น ๆ หลีกเลี่ยงคำเติมเสียง (uh) และข้อผิดพลาดไวยากรณ์ เช่น tense และคำคุณศัพท์ ใช้คำเชื่อมถ้าต้องขยายความ เช่น because, so, and for example.

例: I prefer fashionable but loose clothes because they make me feel comfortable. For example, I often wear a relaxed blazer with jeans when I go out with friends.

提案: แก้ประโยคให้สมบูรณ์และถูกไวยากรณ์ พูดตรง ๆ ว่าเลือกแบบไหน และให้เหตุผลที่ชัดเจน หลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่เกี่ยวข้องหรือผิดความหมาย เช่น 'lyrics' และจัดเรียงคำให้ถูกต้อง (a comfortable outfit / comfortable clothes)

例: I prefer comfortable clothes because they help me relax and move easily. For instance, I usually choose soft trousers and a cotton top for daily activities.

提案: ทำประโยคให้เป็นธรรมชาติและถูกไวยากรณ์ กล่าวตอบตรง ๆ แล้วให้เหตุผลสั้น ๆ ใช้ linking word เช่น because และหลีกเลี่ยงคำเติมเสียง (uh) รวมทั้งปรับรูปคำ (like wearing T-shirts / they feel loose and comfortable)

例: Yes, I enjoy wearing T-shirts because they are loose and comfortable. When I hang out with friends, T-shirts let me relax and move freely.

提案: แก้โครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้อง เริ่มด้วยประโยคหัวข้อแล้วตามด้วยเงื่อนไขหรือข้อยกเว้น ใช้ tense และรูปแบบคำที่ถูกต้อง (I don't spend a lot of time… / if I'm going to a formal event, I will take time…)

例: I don't spend much time choosing clothes for everyday wear, but if I'm going to a formal event, I take more time to pick an appropriate outfit.

提案: ทำให้ประโยคเชื่อมกันอย่างลื่นไหล เริ่มด้วยประโยคหัวข้อแล้วอธิบายสาเหตุและตัวอย่าง ใช้ linking words เช่น because หรือ so และแก้าคำที่ผิด (We wear uniform)

例: Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends because I have to wear a uniform at work or school during weekdays. At weekends, I usually wear loose clothes like T-shirts and jeans.

提案: ชัดเจนเรื่องคำศัพท์ที่ใช้อธิบายความรู้สึกต่อสี (เช่น 'calm' แทน 'green') และแก้ไวยากรณ์ (I usually wear white clothes / white makes me feel calm and relaxed) ให้เหตุผลสั้น ๆ หรือยกตัวอย่างเพื่อเสริมเนื้อหา

例: I usually wear white clothes because white makes me feel calm and gives a casual, clean look. For example, I often choose a white shirt with jeans for a simple outfit.

× I like to wear uh. Fashion outfit and loose outfit because that made me feel comfortable.

✓ I like to wear fashionable outfits and loose outfits because they make me feel comfortable.

The student used 'Fashion outfit' incorrectly; 'fashionable' is the adjective form and 'outfit' should be plural to match general preference (Singular and plural and adjective use). 'That made me feel' is past tense and uses a singular demonstrative; change to 'they make me feel' to match plural subject and present tense. Suggestion: use adjective forms and match plural nouns with plural pronouns; keep tense consistent. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I like wearing comfortable. I always wear a comfortable clothes because. Made I feel lyrics.

✓ I like wearing comfortable clothes. I always wear comfortable clothes because they make me feel relaxed.

The phrase 'wearing comfortable' misses the noun; use 'comfortable clothes'. 'a comfortable clothes' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a'. 'Made I feel lyrics' is ungrammatical and likely intended as 'they make me feel relaxed'—use present tense and correct pronoun. Suggestion: ensure noun follows adjective and articles match noun number; use clear verb and appropriate adjective 'relaxed'. Grammar problem type ID:14

× Sure, I like to wearing T-shirt because uh it's feel loose and relax it when I use time with my friends.

✓ Sure, I like wearing T-shirts because they feel loose and relaxed when I spend time with my friends.

Mix of 'to wearing' is incorrect; use 'like wearing' or 'like to wear' (verb + -ing form vs infinitive). 'It's feel' should be 'they feel' to match plural 'T-shirts'. 'relax it' is wrong; use adjective 'relaxed'. 'use time with my friends' should be 'spend time with my friends'. Suggestion: choose either 'like wearing' or 'like to wear', make subject and verb agree, and use correct verbs for activities. Grammar problem type ID:8

× I not spend a lot of time to you choosing clothes every day, but if I going to a formal events, I will took a time to choose the cross.

✓ I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes every day, but if I am going to a formal event, I will take time to choose the clothes.

'I not spend' is missing auxiliary 'do' and negation form; correct is 'I don't spend'. 'to you choosing' is incorrect word order; use 'choosing'. 'if I going' needs auxiliary 'am' for present continuous. 'formal events' should be singular 'a formal event' or plural consistently; 'I will took' uses past tense 'took' instead of future 'take'. 'choose the cross' likely meant 'clothes'. Suggestion: use correct auxiliary verbs, correct verb forms (base form after will), and correct noun spelling. Grammar problem type ID:9

× I always wear different style of clothes on weekdays. Where are uniform. And at weekends I always wear loose clothes such as T-shirt or jeans.

✓ I always wear different styles of clothes on weekdays where I wear a uniform. At weekends I always wear loose clothes such as T-shirts or jeans.

Use plural 'styles' to match 'different'. 'Where are uniform' is ungrammatical and should be 'where I wear a uniform'. 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when referring generally. Suggestion: make noun number consistent and form complete clauses. Grammar problem type ID:1

× I always. Wear a white clothes, in my opinion white color make me feel green and casual style I always.

✓ I always wear white clothes. In my opinion white makes me feel calm and gives me a casual style.

'a white clothes' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a' or change to 'a white outfit'. 'white color make' needs subject-verb agreement: 'white makes'. 'make me feel green' is incorrect adjective choice; likely 'calm' or 'relaxed'. Sentence order is awkward; separate into two sentences. Suggestion: match articles to noun number, ensure subject-verb agreement, and choose appropriate adjectives. Grammar problem type ID:22