Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then add one or two specific supporting reasons. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors by using simple sentence structures and correct verb forms.

例: I prefer casual clothes because they are comfortable and make me feel confident. For example, I like well-fitted jeans and simple shirts that let me move freely and look neat when I go out.

提案: Answer directly then give one clear condition and an example. Use linking words (but, however, when) to show contrast and keep sentences short to avoid confusion.

例: It depends on the situation. At home or when I am tired I choose comfortable casual clothes, but for events or work meetings I wear smart clothes, such as a shirt and trousers, to look professional.

提案: Give a short direct answer and explain with a concrete example. Avoid vague or repeated phrases and correct basic grammar (e.g., "it feels comfortable", "I wear T-shirts when").

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For instance, I often wear a cotton T-shirt when I go out with friends or relax at home in the evening.

提案: Answer directly and give specific times and reasons. Use clearer time expressions and correct small errors. Limit to two sentences: one topic sentence and one supporting detail with a specific time estimate.

例: Sometimes. If I am in a hurry I just grab something quickly, but for work or important meetings I spend about 20 to 30 minutes choosing an outfit to make sure it looks professional.

提案: Be specific and organized: state the difference clearly, then give two concise examples (weekday vs weekend). Correct word choice (e.g., "occasionally", "weekends") and avoid redundancy.

例: Yes. On weekdays I wear smart, professional clothes for work, such as shirts and slacks. On weekends I prefer casual outfits like jeans and T-shirts, or pajamas when I stay at home.

提案: Give a brief list and explain one preference with a clear reason. Use correct adjectives and phrases (e.g., "my favorite colors are", "I prefer blue because it makes me feel calm and confident").

例: My favorite colors are black, blue, green and purple. I especially prefer blue because it makes me feel calm and confident when I wear it.

× I would like to wear the casual clothes which makes me more comfortable as well as when I whenever I go outside there fills me more perfect to make me confident as well plus which could fit me properly and enhance my confidence.

✓ I like to wear casual clothes that make me more comfortable when I go outside, fit me properly, and enhance my confidence.

This sentence has multiple issues: incorrect relative clause and subject-verb agreement ('which makes' -> 'that make' because 'clothes' is plural) and awkward structure. Remove redundant words ('I would like to' -> 'I like to') to match habitual preference. Use 'that' for essential clauses and plural verb 'make'. Combine ideas with commas and parallel verbs ('fit' and 'enhance'). Suggestion: simplify and use parallel structure for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:27

× It depends upon the situation. Whenever I feel tired and want to sleep or just uh, like to rest in the in my house so I feel too very comfortable clothes or casual clothes or sometimes when I have an function or event or a business they used to.

✓ It depends on the situation. When I feel tired and want to rest at home, I prefer very comfortable or casual clothes. Sometimes, when I have a function or a business event, I wear smarter clothes.

Problems: incorrect preposition ('depends upon' -> 'depends on'), redundant and ungrammatical phrases, wrong word order and vague pronouns ('they used to'). Use present habitual tense and clear nouns ('function or a business event'). Simplify into two sentences and use correct articles ('a function'). Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, I do love to wear T-shirts a lot because it feels me so comfortable even during night times or the like out dating times I usually wear dating shots a lot because it feels me so comfy and I'm.

✓ Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they feel very comfortable. I also wear them at night or when I go out on dates because they are so comfy.

Errors: incorrect pronoun/object ('it feels me' should be 'they feel' referring to T-shirts), wrong noun ('dating shots' -> 'date outfits' or simply 'when I go out on dates'), and sentence fragment at the end. Use plural pronoun 'they' and correct verb 'feel'. Use gerund 'wearing' for habitual action. Remove trailing fragment. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Sometimes it depend upon the situation like whenever I feel so tired and just I don't have any time so I grab a tea, I need clothes to wear it or else if I am going for a business then I will particularly choose the perfect clothes and I need time for 2:00 to 3:00 minutes.

✓ Sometimes it depends on the situation. If I am very tired and have no time, I quickly grab clothes to wear. But if I am going to a business meeting, I choose my outfit carefully and need two to three minutes to do so.

Errors: subject-verb agreement ('depend' -> 'depends'), incorrect preposition ('upon' -> 'on'), awkward phrases ('grab a tea' unclear), and wrong time expression ('2:00 to 3:00 minutes' -> 'two to three minutes'). Clarify meaning ('business meeting') and use correct time wording. Split into sentences for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:27

× Yes definitely. I definitely wear different type of clothes because on weekdays when I go to work I wear a little bit of professionalism type of work clothes and on victims if I'm going out I will wear 2 dresses which is which looks me smart and beautiful or else if I will be in pajamas.

✓ Yes, definitely. I wear different types of clothes: on weekdays I wear slightly more professional work clothes, and on weekends if I go out I wear outfits that make me look smart and attractive; otherwise I stay in pajamas.

Problems: plural form needed ('different type' -> 'different types'), wrong word 'victims' should be 'weekends', and poor verb and pronoun use ('which looks me' -> 'that make me look'). Use 'outfits' and parallel structure. Replace 'beautiful' with 'attractive' or 'nice' for natural collocation. Grammar problem type ID:1

× My most favorite colors are purple, black. Black is the common one and the green color. I mostly pre prefer blue also because blue gives me this and my mind stays table and confident.

✓ My favorite colors are purple, black, and green. Black is the most common. I also prefer blue because it calms me and makes me feel stable and confident.

Errors: redundant 'most favorite' -> 'favorite', punctuation and article issues ('the green color' -> 'green'), misspelling 'pre prefer', and unclear phrase 'gives me this and my mind stays table' -> 'calms me and makes me feel stable'. Correct word choice and sentence flow. Grammar problem type ID:22