Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không đúng (ví dụ: "call figure"). Cần trả lời trực tiếp, nói rõ loại quần áo, lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: thoải mái, dễ phối đồ, chất liệu). Dùng tối đa 3–4 câu, nối ý bằng từ liên kết như "because" hoặc "and".

例: I usually wear casual clothes, especially blue T-shirts. I prefer them because they are comfortable and easy to match with jeans. Also, I like cotton T-shirts because they are breathable and eco-friendly.

提案: Câu trả lời rời rạc, có câu chưa hoàn chỉnh (dừng sau "because"). Cần có câu chủ đề rõ ràng, giải thích cụ thể lý do và dùng từ liên kết hợp lý. Tránh các từ mơ hồ như "friendly" nếu không giải thích.

例: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes rather than smart clothes. I find casual clothes more comfortable for daily activities and they suit my lifestyle. For formal events I can wear smarter outfits, but mostly I choose comfort.

提案: Câu trả lời ngắn gọn và rõ ràng nhưng có thể mở rộng bằng một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: chất liệu, hoạt động khi mặc). Sử dụng từ nối để làm rõ ý hơn nếu thêm câu hỗ trợ.

例: Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts, especially when I go out with friends. I usually choose soft cotton T-shirts because they are comfortable for walking and relaxing.

提案: Câu trả lời chứa lỗi từ vựng ("chew" sai nghĩa) và thiếu cụ thể. Cần nói rõ quá trình lựa chọn: vì sao mất thời gian, bạn xem xét điều gì (màu sắc, kiểu dáng, chất liệu). Dùng 2–3 câu hoàn chỉnh.

例: Yes, I usually spend some time choosing clothes because I care about style and fit. I often compare colours and materials to make sure the outfit looks good and is comfortable.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và ngữ pháp sai ("I'd rather that", thiếu chủ từ trong mệnh đề phụ). Cần trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No) rồi giải thích lý do với chi tiết: thói quen công việc, hoạt động cuối tuần. Dùng liên từ như "because" để nối ý.

例: No, I usually wear the same casual style on weekdays and weekends because I prefer comfort. Even on weekends I like relaxed clothes for running errands or meeting friends.

提案: Trả lời lặp lại và có lỗi ngữ pháp (câu bắt đầu bằng "Because" tách rời; thiếu chủ ngữ: "I think it is"). Nên trả lời tổng quát về màu sắc ưa thích, giải thích vì sao bằng một hoặc hai lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: dễ phối, phù hợp với da).

例: I like blue clothes, especially blue T-shirts, because blue suits my skin tone and is easy to match with other items. I also feel that blue looks calm and friendly.

× I like wearing a blue T-shirt and a call figure is cheap and environmental friendly.

✓ I like wearing a blue T-shirt because it is cheap and environmentally friendly.

The original sentence misuses 'call figure' (nonsense) and 'environmental friendly' should be the adverbially formed adjective 'environmentally friendly' modifying the state; also two clauses should be connected with 'because' to show reason. Use 'it' as the subject for the clause. Suggestion: replace the unclear phrase with 'because it is' and use the correct form 'environmentally friendly'.

× I really like wearing comfortable and casual clothes because. It's friendly and I don't like wearing smart clothes.

✓ I really like wearing comfortable and casual clothes because they are comfortable, and I don't like wearing smart clothes.

The original has an incomplete 'because.' followed by 'It's friendly' which is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Because' must be followed by a clause explaining the reason. Also refer to 'clothes' with plural pronoun 'they' and avoid vague 'friendly'. Suggestion: complete the because-clause and use 'they are comfortable' to state the reason.

× Yes, I think so because I can chew a beautiful T-shirts and a coat.

✓ Yes, I think so because I can choose a beautiful T-shirt and a coat.

The verb 'chew' is incorrect contextually; likely intended 'choose'. Also 'T-shirts' is plural while article 'a' requires singular 'T-shirt'. Fix verb and number agreement: 'choose a beautiful T-shirt and a coat'.

× No, I'd rather that because is really annoying, especially at weekends.

✓ No, I wouldn't; that's really annoying, especially at weekends.

'I'd rather that because is...' is ungrammatical. Use a clear negative response such as 'No, I wouldn't' to answer preference questions, and refer to 'that' with 'that's' (that is) followed by the adjective 'annoying'. Suggestion: use 'No, I wouldn't; that's really annoying'.

× I like a blue T-shirt. Because I think is so friendly with everyone.

✓ I like a blue T-shirt because I think it looks friendly with everyone.

Sentence fragmentation: starting with 'Because' creates a sentence fragment. Also 'I think is so friendly with everyone' lacks subject 'it' and uses 'friendly' awkwardly to describe appearance; better is 'it looks friendly with everyone' or 'it is friendly-looking'. Suggestion: combine into one sentence, include subject 'it', and use 'looks friendly' for appearance.