Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and use concise, natural language. Avoid filler words (umm) and repetition. Provide one or two specific details (e.g., types of shirts, preferred fabric) and use a linking phrase if adding information.

例: I prefer simple, casual clothes — usually a plain shirt and jeans. For example, I often wear cotton T-shirts because they are breathable and easy to wash.

提案: Start with a direct answer, then give a clear reason using linking words (because, so). Remove hesitations and repetition. Add a specific example to support your preference.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I value ease of movement and simplicity. For instance, I often choose a plain polo and chinos when I go out because they look neat but still feel relaxed.

提案: Answer directly and connect reason with a linking word. Reduce fillers and be specific about how T-shirts help (material, fit). Mention an example or occasion.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are lightweight and comfortable in hot weather. For example, I wear cotton T-shirts almost every day during the dry season because they keep me cool.

提案: Use a clear topic sentence and follow with a brief explanation. Avoid fragmented sentences. Give a concrete time estimate or example to make the answer specific.

例: Sometimes, but usually not long — I spend about five to ten minutes choosing an outfit. I pick clothes I feel comfortable in, like a T-shirt and jeans, unless I have a special event.

提案: Answer directly and provide a supporting detail with a linking word. Remove fillers and clarify what "basic" means (e.g., casual or semi-formal).

例: No, I usually wear the same casual style on both weekdays and weekends because I prefer comfort. For example, during the week I wear T-shirts and jeans, and I keep the same style at the weekend unless I go to a formal event.

提案: Give a clear opening sentence and then specific examples. Use linking words (for example, sometimes) and avoid hesitations. Mention favorite colours and when you choose them.

例: It depends on my mood. For example, I usually wear blue or black for everyday outfits because they are versatile, but I choose brighter colours like red or yellow when I want to feel more energetic.

× Something like umm simple 1 like. Shirt and shirt and then jeans.

✓ Something simple, like a shirt and jeans.

The student repeated 'shirt' and omitted the article for singular noun. Use singular countable noun with an article ('a shirt') and pair with plural 'jeans'. Remove extra words and filler for clarity.

× I prepare to wear comfortable clothes and casual clothes and as what I said earlier.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes, as I said earlier.

'Prepare to' is incorrect here; the student means preference. Use 'prefer to' for habitual preference. Also simplify repetition ('comfortable, casual clothes') and use 'as I said earlier' for reference.

× I prefer wearing simple and casual clothes since umm.

✓ I prefer wearing simple, casual clothes.

Sentence ended with 'since umm' incomplete. Remove unfinished filler. 'Prefer wearing' is acceptable present tense for habits; tidy punctuation and list adjectives with commas.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. It is more comfortable.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. They are more comfortable.

'T-shirts' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they' and verb 'are'. Using 'it is' causes number disagreement.

× And you know, I'm from the Philippines, so it's the umm, The weather here is so, you know, hot, so I like to wear comfortable clothes.

✓ I'm from the Philippines, and the weather here is very hot, so I like to wear comfortable clothes.

The original has awkward clause order and filler words. Combine clauses with 'and' and remove repeated fillers. Capitalization 'The' mid-sentence is incorrect. Use 'very hot' instead of 'so, you know, hot' for formality and clarity.

× Sometimes, but I always. Decided to wear I am comfortable with so I always choose to wear comfortable clothes like T-shirt.

✓ Sometimes, but I always decide to wear what I am comfortable with, so I choose comfortable clothes like T-shirts.

Original has sentence fragments and incorrect verb forms ('Decided' should be 'decide'). Reorder to form one coherent sentence: use present simple for habitual actions and plural 'T-shirts'.

× Umm, I think no. I always back to the basic or umm, what I'm comfortable with or what I have in my cabinet. So I usually not wear different styles.

✓ I don't think so. I always go back to the basics and wear what I'm comfortable with or what I have in my closet, so I usually don't wear different styles.

'I think no' is unnatural; use 'I don't think so'. 'Back to the basic' needs verb 'go back to the basics'. 'Cabinet' for clothes is better as 'closet'. Negation 'usually not wear' should be 'usually don't wear'. Use consistent present simple for habits.

× It depends on my mood or or what I saw in my cabinet that I'm feeling. Good with it, uh.

✓ It depends on my mood or on what I see in my closet that I feel good wearing.

Tense and preposition errors: use 'see' (present habitual) not 'saw' (past). Use 'on what' after 'depends'. 'Cabinet' -> 'closet'. Reorder 'feel good wearing' to be grammatical and concise.