Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, avoid fillers (uh) and unclear references (e.g., 'Mr. Morato'), and give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words for clarity.

例: I prefer to wear comfortable clothes. For example, I often choose soft jeans or loose T‑shirts because they let me move freely and feel relaxed during the day.

提案: Answer directly comparing the options, correct grammar (use 'to' not 'than' and match singular/plural), and give a brief reason with a linking word. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

例: I prefer comfortable clothes to smart clothes because they help me relax. For instance, when I feel stressed after work I choose soft fabrics that reduce irritation and help me unwind.

提案: Complete the sentence and add a specific reason or example. Avoid repetition and filler. Use one linking word to expand briefly.

例: Yes, I really like wearing T‑shirts because they are simple and comfortable. For example, I wear cotton T‑shirts at home and when I go out with friends because they are easy to wash and match with jeans.

提案: This answer is mostly clear but can be tightened: give a concise topic sentence then specific details (e.g., checking weather, coordinating colors). Use linking words to show cause.

例: Yes, I often spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I check the weather and try to coordinate outfits. For example, if it might rain I pick waterproof shoes and a jacket so I feel comfortable all day.

提案: Correct vocabulary errors ('goats' → 'go out' or 'types') and avoid fragmented sentences. Give one clear contrast between weekday and weekend choices and a reason, using linking words.

例: Yes, my style changes between weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I usually wear smart casual clothes for work, but at the weekend I choose relaxed outfits like hoodies and trainers because I want to feel comfortable.

提案: Make one clear topic sentence naming the preferred colours, then give one concise specific reason. Avoid repetition and unfinished clauses. Use linking words to connect ideas.

例: I prefer black and white clothes because they suit my skin tone and are easy to match. For example, a white shirt or a black jacket works well with most outfits and makes me feel confident.

× Since I was a child, uh, the clothes that I would like to wear every time is something that I'm comfortable wearing around, like when Mr. Morato.

✓ Since I was a child, the clothes that I like to wear all the time are the ones I feel comfortable wearing, like Mr. Morato.

Subject-verb agreement and present-tense consistency: 'would like to wear every time is' mixes conditional/modal with present meaning and uses singular verb 'is' with plural subject 'clothes'. Use present simple 'like' and plural verb 'are', and rephrase for clarity. Also remove filler 'uh' and awkward phrase 'wearing around'. Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual actions and ensure verb agrees with subject (clothes -> are).

× I always prefer comfortable clothes than uh, casual clothes or smart clothes because comfortable clothes is very important in everyday life especially when you are stressed out.

✓ I always prefer comfortable clothes to casual or smart clothes because comfortable clothes are very important in everyday life, especially when you are stressed out.

Incorrect comparator and subject-verb agreement: 'prefer ... than' is wrong; use 'prefer ... to'. 'Comfortable clothes is' uses singular verb with plural noun; use 'are'. Remove filler 'uh' and redundant repeated 'clothes'. Suggestion: Use 'prefer A to B' and match plural nouns with plural verbs.

× Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts because I am comfortable with T-shirts and.

✓ Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts because I am comfortable in them.

Awkward preposition and incomplete sentence: say 'comfortable in T-shirts' not 'comfortable with', and avoid trailing conjunction 'and' which leaves sentence incomplete. Use 'them' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: Use 'comfortable in' + plural pronoun 'them'.

× When choosing clothes, I really spend a lot of time because I don't know what fits the outfit and the weather.

✓ When choosing clothes, I really spend a lot of time because I don't know what will fit the outfit and the weather.

Tense consistency: 'don't know what fits the outfit and the weather' is acceptable but context of future choice suits 'will fit'. Using present may be acceptable; better use 'will fit' to indicate future suitability. Also 'fits the outfit and the weather' is slightly awkward; use 'will fit the outfit and the weather'. Suggestion: Use 'will fit' for decisions about suitability.

× Yes, I do wear different styles and goats on weekdays and weekends.

✓ Yes, I do wear different styles on weekdays and weekends.

Nonsensical word 'goats' is likely a mispronunciation or error; remove it. Keep sentence concise and grammatically correct. Suggestion: Proofread for mispronounced words and keep structure simple.

× If I like to wear something revealing or something comfortable.

✓ If I like to wear something revealing or something comfortable, it just depends on my mood.

Sentence fragment: starts with 'If' but lacks main clause. Add main clause to complete the conditional. Also adjust word order to sound natural. Suggestion: Complete conditionals with a result clause.

× Color clothes that I prefer is I really love black and white, but my clothes are not all white and black so I cannot wear it when I'm in a good mood I wear black and white because I prefer it and my skin color just stand out when I wear black and white so that's why I really love black and white but sometimes.

✓ The colors I prefer are black and white, but not all my clothes are only black and white. I can't always wear them; when I'm in a good mood I wear black and white because they make my skin tone stand out, so I really love black and white, but sometimes I choose other colors.

Multiple issues: subject-verb agreement ('colors ... are'), article and word order errors, run-on sentence and repetition, incorrect pronoun agreement ('it' for clothes), and verb agreement ('skin color just stand' -> 'skin tone stands' or 'they make my skin tone stand out'). Break into shorter sentences, use correct plural forms and pronouns, and avoid redundancy. Suggestion: Use concise sentences, match plurals, and replace 'color' with 'colors' or 'skin tone' for natural phrasing.