Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid redundancy and fix verb forms and possessive/subject agreement.

例: I prefer comfortable clothes. For example, I often buy soft cotton shirts from Lazada and Shopee because they feel nice and last well.

提案: Use correct singular/plural forms and avoid filler words. Give a clear topic sentence, explain reason with one linking phrase, and provide a short specific example with correct vocabulary.

例: I prefer smart clothes because they boost my confidence and make me feel professional. For instance, I always wear a suit or smart blouse to office meetings to make a good impression.

提案: Answer directly and correct grammar and word choice. Replace informal contractions and incorrect phrases. Keep to two or three sentences and give a specific reason and brief example.

例: I don't usually wear T-shirts because I find them too casual and messy for my taste. For example, I prefer a polo shirt or a smart top even when I go out to buy food.

提案: Make sentences grammatical and coherent. Begin with a clear answer, then explain with one or two specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct plural/singular forms.

例: Yes, I spend quite a lot of time choosing clothes, especially for work. Because I need professional outfits, I check the fabric quality and price before I buy them.

提案: Give a concise direct response and correct grammar. Use linking words to explain reason and give a brief specific detail about what 'smart casual' means to you.

例: No, I usually wear the same smart-casual style on both weekdays and weekends because I like to look neat. For example, I often wear chinos and a button-down shirt on any day.

提案: Be more concise and fix subject-verb agreement. State the preference, give a clear reason with linking word, and add one short specific example.

例: I prefer black because it matches everything and makes choosing outfits easier. For example, I often wear a black shirt and black trousers to simplify my morning routine.

× Actually, I don't really mind what clothes I'm gonna wear as long as the clothes are comfortable, which is why I always buy my clothes in Lazada and Shopee because the material it's so nice and soft.

✓ Actually, I don't really mind what clothes I'm going to wear as long as they are comfortable, which is why I always buy my clothes on Lazada and Shopee because the material is so nice and soft.

Uses informal contraction 'gonna' and incorrect 'it's' referring to material; also 'what clothes I'm going to wear' requires going to (future) rather than 'gonna' in formal speech; 'the clothes are' can be shortened to 'they are'; use preposition 'on' for online platforms; use 'is' not 'it's' to avoid redundancy. Suggestion: use 'going to' or simple present, replace 'the clothes' with 'they', and use correct preposition 'on' for websites.

× Uh, personally, I would choose to wear a smart clothes rather than casual clothes because it boosts my confidence and I feel so good when I wear smart clothes.

✓ Uh, personally, I would choose to wear smart clothes rather than casual clothes because they boost my confidence and I feel so good when I wear smart clothes.

'Clothes' is plural and cannot take the singular article 'a'. Use no article: 'smart clothes'. Also 'it boosts' incorrectly uses singular pronoun; use 'they boost' to agree with plural noun. Suggestion: remove 'a' before plural nouns and ensure pronoun-number agreement.

× For example, when I'm going to join a meeting in my office, I always make sure that I wear smart closets.

✓ For example, when I attend a meeting at my office, I always make sure that I wear smart clothes.

'Join a meeting' is acceptable but 'attend a meeting' is more natural; 'in my office' -> 'at my office' is more natural for events occurring there; 'closets' refers to furniture, not clothing. Suggestion: use 'attend' and 'clothes' (not 'closets') and 'at' for location.

× I don't really like to wear T-shirts even though that the T-shirt is comfortable because I think it looks messy and I want to look professional all the time.

✓ I don't really like to wear T-shirts even though T-shirts are comfortable because I think they look messy and I want to look professional all the time.

Mixes singular and plural: 'the T-shirt is' should match 'T-shirts'. Use plural consistently: 'T-shirts are' and pronoun 'they' to refer back. Also remove unnecessary 'that'. Suggestion: keep number consistent and avoid extraneous words.

× So for example, even when I go to buy some food, I make sure that I'm not gonna wear AT shirt.

✓ So for example, even when I go to buy some food, I make sure that I'm not going to wear a T-shirt.

'gonna' is informal; use 'going to' in formal speech. 'AT shirt' seems to be a typo for 'a T-shirt'; needs article 'a' before singular countable noun. Suggestion: use 'a T-shirt' and 'going to'.

× Yes, I do spend a lot of times choosing a clothes, especially if the clothes is for. My office I'm going to make sure that the clothes have a good quality and affordable.

✓ Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes, especially if the clothes are for my office. I make sure that the clothes are good quality and affordable.

Use 'a lot of time' (uncountable) not 'times'; 'a clothes' is incorrect—'clothes' is plural and does not take 'a'; 'clothes is' should be 'clothes are'; phrase 'for. My office' is fragmented and should be 'for my office'. 'Good quality' is an adjective phrase; 'affordable' modifies clothes, so use 'are good quality and affordable'. Suggestion: fix countability and subject-verb agreement and sentence segmentation.

× Personally I think I'm wearing the same style of outfits either it is weekend or weekday because normally I always love to wear a smart casual in everywhere I go.

✓ Personally, I think I wear the same style of outfits whether it is the weekend or a weekday because I normally like to wear smart casual everywhere I go.

Use simple present 'I wear' for habitual actions instead of 'I'm wearing'; 'either ... or' used incorrectly—use 'whether ... or'; 'a smart casual' is wrong: 'smart casual' is an uncountable style phrase without 'a'; 'in everywhere' should be 'everywhere'. Suggestion: use simple present for habits, 'whether', and correct noun phrases.

× I would say black because it match with every color so I think it is so much easier and I save a lot of times choosing an outfit so I'm just going to go for black.

✓ I would say black because it matches every color, so I think it is much easier and I save a lot of time choosing an outfit, so I just go for black.

'it match' should be 'it matches' to agree with singular subject; 'match with' usually is 'match' or 'match with' but 'matches every color' is natural. 'so much easier' -> 'much easier'; 'a lot of times' -> 'a lot of time' (uncountable). 'I'm just going to go for black' can be simplified to 'I just go for black' for habitual preference. Suggestion: correct subject-verb agreement and use proper quantifier forms.

× Even my trouser I also choose black.

✓ Even my trousers I also choose black.

Use plural 'trousers' (one item typically plural in English) and ensure word order: 'I also choose black for my trousers' or 'Even my trousers are black'. Suggestion: use plural 'trousers' and natural word order: 'I also choose black for my trousers.'