Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more fluent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler sounds, correct grammar (e.g. 'that fit my body shape' not 'match for my body proportion') and keep to 2–4 supporting sentences. Use linking words if giving reasons.

例: I prefer clothes that fit my body shape and feel comfortable. For example, I like fitted tops that flatter my figure, but I always choose soft fabrics so I can move easily. Because comfort is important to me, I avoid stiff or restrictive styles.

提案: Give a clear direct answer then explain briefly with specific examples. Improve sentence structure and use linking words like 'because' and 'however' to connect ideas.

例: I usually prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I do a lot of outdoor activities. For instance, I wear sportswear when I go jogging or hiking. However, I will wear smart clothes for formal events or meetings.

提案: Answer directly and avoid hesitation. Use correct comparisons ('prefer T-shirts to tank tops') and be specific about situations when you choose alternatives. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to style. But when the weather is very hot, I prefer tank tops or sandals because they keep me cooler.

提案: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a direct answer then give a brief reason and a specific detail (how long, what you do). Avoid repeating phrases.

例: Yes, I often spend a long time choosing clothes because I struggle to match items. For example, I usually take over 30 minutes picking an outfit for work because I want everything to look coordinated.

提案: Structure your answer: give a clear yes/no, then explain with specifics. Correct verb forms and give complete examples (e.g. what you wear on weekends). Avoid trailing off at the end.

例: Yes, I wear different styles. On weekdays I wear my white school uniform, but on weekends I usually wear casual clothes like jeans and a T-shirt, or sometimes slightly formal outfits if I'm going out.

提案: Give a clear opening sentence and then explain with reasons. Use correct grammar (plural/singular, articles) and link ideas with 'but' and 'because'. Be specific about examples of outfits and why black is practical.

例: My favorite color is pink, but most of my clothes are black. I usually choose black because it is neutral and easy to match with different pants or skirts, so it makes dressing simpler.

× I like clothes, that is uh. I like clothes that is a perfectly match for my body proportion and also it hug my body and I were uh, comfortable clothes specially and.

✓ I like clothes that are a perfect match for my body proportions and that also hug my body, and I prefer comfortable clothes especially.

Errors: incorrect pronoun and verb agreement ('that is' with plural 'clothes'), singular/plural ('a perfectly match' should be 'a perfect match'), verb form ('it hug' should be 'that also hug' to agree with plural 'clothes'), wrong tense/pronoun ('I were' incorrect). Suggestion: use relative clauses correctly with plural agreement, choose correct adjective form ('perfect' not 'perfectly'), and use consistent verbs and pronouns. Break long sentence into clearer parts.

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes specially when I think that I have something to do sporty like I will be in activities in open area and for smart clothes it depends on my occasion or my activities if it's applicable.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes, especially when I think I will be doing something sporty, like outdoor activities. Whether I wear smart clothes depends on the occasion and my plans.

Errors: incorrect adverb 'specially' should be 'especially'; awkward phrasing 'something to do sporty' and missing continuous verb form 'will be doing'; 'in activities in open area' should be 'outdoor activities'; run-on sentence. Suggestion: use 'especially', use future continuous for planned actions ('will be doing'), and split into two sentences for clarity.

× Well, I like wearing T-shirts because I, uh, prefer, prefer T-shirts than Sando, but sometimes when the weather is hot, I like, uh, sandals or sleeveless more.

✓ Well, I like wearing T-shirts because I prefer T-shirts to tank tops, but sometimes when the weather is hot, I prefer sandals or sleeveless tops.

Errors: incorrect comparative construction 'prefer... than' should be 'prefer X to Y'; unclear word 'Sando' likely intended 'sando' or 'sandal'—context suggests 'tank top' or 'sando' meaning sleeveless shirt; 'sleeveless' needs a noun ('sleeveless top'). Suggestion: use 'prefer X to Y' and include correct noun phrases.

× Well, that's my problem to myself, because I spent a lot of time choosing my clothes because I don't know what to wear. I don't know what the matchmaking in my clothes, then yeah, I take more than 30 minutes. I'm choosing what I'm going to work for that day.

✓ Well, that's my problem: I spend a lot of time choosing my clothes because I don't know what to wear or how to match my clothes. I often take more than 30 minutes deciding what to wear for work that day.

Errors: inconsistent tense ('spent' past vs present habitual 'I spend'); redundant phrasing; 'matchmaking in my clothes' is incorrect—use 'how to match my clothes'; 'I'm choosing what I'm going to work for that day' is ungrammatical—use 'deciding what to wear for work that day'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and clearer vocabulary ('match', 'deciding').

× Or I were different style of clothes on weekdays and weekends. Yes, when it is weekdays I wear umm my uniform, my complete white uniform because I have a class. When weekends, well in Sunday I wear a formal or casual clothes because it has.

✓ I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I wear my full white uniform because I have classes. On weekends, for example on Sunday, I wear formal or casual clothes depending on the occasion.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'I were' should be 'I wear'; 'different style' should be 'different styles'; 'when it is weekdays' should be 'on weekdays'; 'my complete white uniform' better as 'my full white uniform' or 'my complete white uniform' but 'I have a class' should be plural 'I have classes'; final clause 'because it has' is incomplete—use 'depending on the occasion'. Suggestion: use correct present tense and plural forms, and complete clauses.

× One of my favorite color is pink, but I notice that all my color, all the clothes that I have is color black. I don't know why because I think it's easy to match with the pants or the skirt or whatever I want to do because it has neutral color.

✓ One of my favorite colors is pink, but I notice that most of my clothes are black. I don't know why; I think black is easy to match with pants, skirts, or whatever else I want to wear because it is a neutral color.

Errors: 'One of my favorite color' should be plural 'colors'; 'all my color, all the clothes that I have is color black' is ungrammatical—use 'most of my clothes are black' or 'all my clothes are black'; verb agreement with plural 'clothes' requires 'are'; 'because it has neutral color' should be 'because it is a neutral color'. Suggestion: fix quantifier usage and subject-verb agreement, and use clear noun phrases ('most of my clothes').