Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn đã lặp lại câu hỏi của giám khảo thay vì trả lời. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó nếu cần bổ sung 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: phong cách, lý do, tình huống mặc). Giữ không quá 5 câu và dùng liên từ khi bổ sung.

例: I prefer casual clothes like jeans and hoodies because they are comfortable and easy to move in. For work I sometimes choose smarter outfits, but most days I stick to relaxed styles.

提案: Câu trả lời hiện tại thiếu rõ ràng, nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ không phù hợp. Hãy mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng (chọn một trong hai: casual hoặc smart), rồi giải thích lý do và đưa ví dụ cụ thể. Dùng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'so' để nối ý.

例: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes because I spend a lot of time commuting and I value mobility. For example, I usually wear jeans and a sweatshirt when I go out, which keeps me relaxed and practical.

提案: Bạn lại lặp lại câu hỏi. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp (yes/no) và bổ sung lý do ngắn gọn cùng một ví dụ cụ thể về khi bạn mặc T-shirt.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are versatile and breathable. I often wear them on weekends or when I exercise.

提案: Câu trả lời không phải là trả lời mà chỉ lặp lại với lỗi. Hãy trả lời rõ ràng (có/không) và nêu nguyên nhân cùng ví dụ; dùng liên từ để liên kết.

例: No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I usually prepare my outfit the night before. For special occasions I plan more carefully, though.

提案: Lặp lại câu hỏi và có lỗi. Trả lời trực tiếp, so sánh hai tình huống (weekdays vs weekends) và nêu một ví dụ cụ thể; dùng từ so sánh như 'whereas' hoặc 'while'.

例: Yes, I wear different styles: during weekdays I dress more formally for work, whereas on weekends I prefer casual and comfortable outfits like T-shirts and trainers.

提案: Lặp lại câu hỏi. Trả lời nêu một hoặc hai màu bạn thích, giải thích lý do và cho ví dụ cụ thể; tránh lan man và dùng từ vựng liên quan màu sắc.

例: I like neutral colours such as navy and grey because they are easy to match with other items. For instance, a navy sweater works well with both jeans and chinos.

× Do you prefer to work comfortable and go short clothes almost more clutter.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes; I rarely wear short or cluttered clothes.

The original sentence has incorrect verb choice ('work' instead of 'wear'), wrong adjective forms, and unclear phrase 'almost more clutter'. Use 'prefer to wear' for clothing preference, 'comfortable and casual' as parallel adjectives, and clarify frequency with 'rarely' or 'sometimes'. Ensure verbs agree and word order is natural. ID:26

× Do you like wearing T-shirts?

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts.

The student's reply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. The structure 'like wearing' is correct; provide an affirmative answer. Ensure responses match the question's expected form. ID:8

× Do you spend a lot of time to close?

✓ Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?

The error uses the infinitive 'to close' which is incorrect. After 'spend time' use the -ing form: 'spend time choosing'. Also 'close' was likely a misspelling of 'clothes'. ID:26

× Do you wear different style of clothes on weekend and weekend?

✓ Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?

Use the plural 'styles' to match 'different', and use 'weekdays and weekends' to contrast workdays with weekends. Also correct repetition 'weekend and weekend' to 'weekdays and weekends'. ID:1

× What color color do you like?

✓ What colour do you like?

The student repeated the word 'color' twice. Remove the redundancy. Also note British spelling 'colour' may be used depending on context. The question should be 'What colour do you like?'. ID:26

× What kind of clothes do you like to wear?

✓ I like to wear comfortable, casual clothes.

The student's reply repeated the examiner's question rather than answering. Provide a first-person answer using 'I like to wear...'. Ensure subject-verb agreement if using third person (not needed here), and give a complete response. ID:2

× Do you like wearing T-shirts?

✓ Yes, I do. I often wear T-shirts because they are comfortable.

Again the student repeated the question. A proper short answer uses 'Yes, I do' (auxiliary 'do' for present simple) and can be followed by a reason. Ensure subject-verb agreement in the added clause ('they are comfortable'). ID:2