Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Keep your answer concise and correct vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and fix grammatical errors (e.g., 'baby pants' unclear; use 'casual clothes' or 'jeans'). Add one specific detail about materials or occasions and use a linking word.

例: I prefer casual clothes, such as jeans and simple T-shirts, because they suit my lifestyle and are comfortable. For example, I often wear a cotton T-shirt and jeans when I go out with friends, since they are easy to move in.

提案: Answer directly, avoid repetition and correct grammar (remove duplicate words). Give a reason plus a specific example using a linking word like 'because' or 'so'.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because they fit my daily routine. For instance, I often choose a hoodie and sneakers for going to university or meeting friends.

提案: Use correct sentence structure and avoid awkward phrases. Combine short sentences into one or two clear sentences and give a concrete reason and short example. Fix grammar: 'It makes me feel', 'these clothes', 'go out with my friends'.

例: Yes, I do. T-shirts make me feel comfortable and relaxed, so I wear them almost every day; for example, I often wear a T-shirt when I ride my bike or hang out with friends.

提案: Be concise and correct verb forms. Start with a clear topic sentence and give a specific example of when you take more time (e.g., weddings). Use linking words like 'because' or 'especially'.

例: Yes, sometimes I spend a lot of time deciding what to wear, especially for special occasions. For example, I choose carefully for weddings because I want to look appropriate and comfortable.

提案: Answer directly and avoid unnecessary words. Use a clear contrast if needed and provide a short reason. Correct prepositions ('wear' without 'in') and keep to two sentences max.

例: No, I don't. I usually wear the same casual clothes, like pants and T-shirts, on both weekdays and weekends because comfort is my priority unless it's a special occasion.

提案: Use precise vocabulary and avoid filler sounds. State preferences clearly, give a reason and a brief example. Correct awkward phrasing ('look me at track' unclear).

例: I mostly prefer neutral colors such as black and white because they are versatile. For example, I buy black T-shirts often since they match many outfits and are easy to maintain.

× I usually wear normal clothes like baby pants and normal tee shirts because it is very suitable for me with my lifestyle and it's comfortable for going out or hanging out with my friends.

✓ I usually wear ordinary clothes like jeans and T-shirts because they suit my lifestyle and are comfortable for going out or hanging out with my friends.

The sentence uses incorrect and unclear quantifiers/word choices ('baby pants', 'normal tee shirts') and has agreement issues between plural nouns and verbs. Replace 'baby pants' with an appropriate clothing item (jeans) and 'normal tee shirts' with 'T-shirts'. Use plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'are' to agree with 'clothes'. Also replace 'it is very suitable for me with my lifestyle' with 'they suit my lifestyle' for natural phrasing.

× I usually prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes over smart clothes because comfortable clothes are are suitable for my lifestyle.

✓ I usually prefer comfortable, casual clothes over smart clothes because comfortable clothes are suitable for my lifestyle.

There is a repeated word 'are are' and unnecessary 'to wear' after 'prefer'. 'Prefer' can be followed directly by a noun phrase. The correction removes the duplication and adjusts word order. Note: 'prefer' with 'to' + verb is also possible, but here comparing clothing types, the noun phrase is better.

× That's why I pick pick this one and whenever I have to go out.

✓ That's why I choose this style whenever I have to go out.

The verb 'pick' is repeated and 'this one' is vague. 'Whenever I have to go out' should attach to the main clause; using 'choose this style' is clearer and grammatically correct. 'Choose' fits habitual preference better than 'pick'.

× Yes I do. I like wearing T-shirts every day. It's feel me so comfortable and relaxing with this clothes.

✓ Yes, I do. I like wearing T-shirts every day. They make me feel very comfortable and relaxed.

'It's feel me' is ungrammatical: 'feel' needs a subject performing the action; 'T-shirts' is plural so use 'they make me feel'. 'Relaxing' is an adjective here but 'relaxed' describes the speaker's state. Also 'this clothes' mixes singular demonstrative with plural noun; use 'these clothes' or better restructure the sentence.

× I can go everywhere without with my friends and I also can ride my bike.

✓ I can go anywhere with my friends, and I can also ride my bike.

The phrase 'without with' is incorrect; choose either 'without' or 'with' as needed. 'Go everywhere' is acceptable but 'go anywhere' is more natural. Place 'also' before the verb for natural adverb placement.

× Yes I do. Sometimes I spend spent a lot of time choosing clothes which one I have to buy or wear at this occasion like a like in a wedding, I feel most difficult at that time to choosing clothes.

✓ Yes, I do. Sometimes I spend a lot of time choosing which clothes I should buy or wear for occasions like weddings; I find it most difficult to choose clothes for those events.

The sentence mixes present and past forms ('spend spent') and has awkward relative clause 'which one I have to buy or wear'. Use 'spend' (present habit) with 'choosing' (gerund). Replace 'at this occasion like a like in a wedding' with 'for occasions like weddings'. Use 'find it difficult to choose' for natural expression.

× No I don't, I usually wear in normal clothes like pants and T-shirts on weekdays and weekends.

✓ No, I don't. I usually wear ordinary clothes like pants and T-shirts on weekdays and weekends.

The verb 'wear' should not be followed by the preposition 'in' in this context. Use 'wear ordinary clothes' without 'in'. Also add punctuation and replace 'normal' with 'ordinary' for naturalness.

× I think almost every day I wear normal clothes and T-shirts except special occasion.

✓ I think almost every day I wear ordinary clothes and T-shirts except on special occasions.

Use the plural 'occasions' or add the preposition 'on' with 'special occasion'. 'Except on special occasions' is the correct idiomatic phrase.

× I like close clothes color like, uh, black and uh, white mostly.

✓ I like clothing colors such as black and white mostly.

'Close clothes color' is ungrammatical. Use 'clothing colors' or 'colour of clothes' and 'such as' to introduce examples. Remove filler 'uh' for clarity.

× I mostly prefer to buy black T-shirts rather than any other colors because I like most these colours and, and look me at track.

✓ I usually prefer to buy black T-shirts rather than other colors because I like them most and they suit me for track use.

'Mostly prefer' is redundant; 'usually' or 'prefer' is enough. 'Any other colors' can be simplified to 'other colors'. 'I like most these colours' has incorrect word order; use 'I like them most'. 'Look me at track' is unclear—interpret as 'they suit me for track use' or 'they look good when I run/at the track' and correct accordingly.