Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Améliorez la précision et la structure. Donnez une phrase thème claire et une ou deux raisons spécifiques en utilisant des mots de liaison. Évitez les erreurs grammaticales (« oversizing » → « oversized »). Par exemple, commencez par « I prefer... » puis ajoutez pourquoi (confort, style) et un détail concret.

例: I prefer oversized clothes because they are comfortable and relaxed. For example, I often choose oversized sweaters for cold days because they keep me warm and allow me to layer clothes easily.

提案: Améliorez la fluidité et la grammaire. Répondez directement with a topic sentence, then add a specific reason with a linking word (e.g. because, so). Corrigez les erreurs (« causal » → « casual », « That's make » → « That makes ») et évitez la répétition.

例: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes because they suit my daily activities. For instance, I wear casual outfits when I work or study since they allow me to move freely and stay focused.

提案: Améliorez la compréhension et la politesse. Si vous ne comprenez pas, dites-le brièvement puis demandez une clarification de façon naturelle. Utilisez une structure simple et proposez une réponse si vous comprenez la question ensuite.

例: Could you please repeat the question? If you mean T-shirts in general, then yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to match with jeans.

提案: Rendez la réponse plus informative et naturelle. Après la réponse courte, développez avec une raison ou un exemple précis et utilisez un lien (for example, because). Évitez les erreurs mineures de forme (« go to shopping » → « go shopping »).

例: Yes, I do. I usually spend a long time choosing clothes because I like to compare styles and check the quality. For example, I often try on several items and look closely at fabric before buying.

提案: Améliorez la grammaire et la précision temporelle. Répondez directement then clarify with specific comparison using linking words (however, although). Use correct tense (present simple for habitual actions).

例: No, I usually wear the same style on weekdays and weekends because I prefer comfort. However, on special occasions at the weekend I might dress up a bit more.

提案: Évitez les répétitions et soyez plus précis. Donnez une phrase d'introduction puis expliquez brièvement pourquoi vous aimez ces couleurs, en utilisant un mot de liaison (because, since). Corrigez la répétition (« blue blue » → « blue »).

例: I like white, black and blue clothes because they are versatile and easy to match. For example, black and white look formal, while blue gives a relaxed, casual feel.

× I love oversizing clothes.

✓ I love oversized clothes.

The adjective form 'oversized' should be used to describe clothes; 'oversizing' is a verb/gerund and is incorrect here. Use past-participle adjectives like 'oversized' to modify nouns. Suggestion: use 'oversized' when describing garments.'

× As I tell you in the previous question, I like causal clothes and comfortable clothes and oversized clothes. That's make me more comfortable.

✓ As I told you in the previous question, I like casual and comfortable clothes, especially oversized clothes. That makes me more comfortable.

Multiple issues: 'As I tell you' should be past tense 'As I told you' to match the time frame (Grammar problem type 6 Present tense issue and 5 Past tense issue but primary is tense). 'causal' is a misspelling; correct word is 'casual' (adjective). Use parallel adjective structure ('casual and comfortable clothes'). 'That's make' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; use 'That makes'. Suggestion: use past tense 'told' for referring to earlier utterance, correct spelling 'casual', and ensure subject and verb agree.'

× Sorry, I don't know what does it mean? Morning T-shirt, can you speak more than please?

✓ Sorry, I don't know what that means. What do you mean by 'morning T-shirt'? Could you explain, please?

Direct question word order 'what does it mean' is incorrect within an indirect statement; use 'I don't know what that means'. Also unclear phrasing 'Morning T-shirt, can you speak more than please?' is ungrammatical; rephrase to ask for clarification: 'What do you mean by...?' and polite request 'Could you explain, please?'. Suggestion: use indirect question structure for embedded questions and standard phrasing to ask for clarification.'

× Yes I do. I spend a lot of time choosing clothes when I go to shopping.

✓ Yes I do. I spend a lot of time choosing clothes when I go shopping.

The correct phrase is 'go shopping' without the preposition 'to'. 'Go to shopping' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: use 'go shopping' for the activity of shopping.'

× Actually, no. I wore the same styles of clothes during the weekends.

✓ Actually, no. I wear the same styles of clothes on weekends.

The question asks about habitual behavior (present tense). Using past tense 'wore' is incorrect; use present 'wear'. Also use 'on weekends' rather than 'during the weekends' for general habitual statements. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and 'on weekends' for time expression.'

× I like white, black and blue blue clothes.

✓ I like white, black and blue clothes.

Redundant word 'blue blue' repeats the adjective. Remove the duplicate. Suggestion: list colors separated by commas and avoid repetition.'