Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Good short direct answer. To improve, add one specific supporting detail (e.g., activities for which baggy clothes are suitable) and use a linking word to make it slightly more informative while staying concise.

例: I like to wear baggy clothes because they are comfortable, especially when I'm studying or hanging out with friends.

提案: The answer is repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Improve by giving a clear topic sentence, using a linking word, providing one concise reason, and correcting grammar (agreement, word choice). Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

例: I prefer casual clothes because they suit my lifestyle; for example, when I go out with friends I can move freely and feel relaxed in jeans and a T-shirt.

提案: Clear answer but contains redundancy and a minor grammar mistake. Improve by removing repeated words, using a linking word, and adding a brief specific detail about style or material.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially in summer, because loose cotton ones let me move freely and stay cool.

提案: Answer gives a reason but has grammatical errors and could be more precise. Improve by correcting verb agreement, simplifying phrasing, and giving a short example of where you look for such items.

例: Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I like T-shirts with graffiti prints, which are hard to find, so I often search online or visit specialty shops.

提案: Reasonable response but slightly wordy and awkward phrasing. Improve by using a linking word, clearer contrast between weekdays and special occasions, and one specific example of 'something more'.

例: No, I usually wear the same casual clothes during the week, but for special occasions with friends I might dress smarter, for example by wearing a shirt and chinos.

提案: Content is relevant but repetitive and contains small errors. Improve by naming specific shades, using a linking word to explain why, and avoiding repeated phrases.

例: I prefer dark colours like navy blue and black because they flatter my skin tone and make me feel confident.

× I prefer casual and comfortable clothes over the smart one because casual one suits me and I feel more comfortable in them rather than wearing smart one.

✓ I prefer casual and comfortable clothes over smart clothes because casual clothes suit me and I feel more comfortable in them than in smart clothes.

The student mixed singular and plural forms (one vs clothes). Use consistent plural 'clothes' rather than 'one'. Also use 'suit' to agree with plural subject and 'than in smart clothes' for correct comparative structure. Suggestion: keep 'clothes' plural and match verbs and pronouns accordingly.

× Let's just take an example like whenever I go with my friends, I mostly very comfortable when over the smart one because I feel freely in them.

✓ For example, whenever I go out with my friends, I am usually much more comfortable wearing casual clothes than wearing smart clothes because I feel free in them.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing auxiliary verb 'am'. 'Mostly very comfortable when over the smart one' is ungrammatical. Use 'usually much more comfortable' and compare 'wearing casual clothes than wearing smart clothes'. Also use 'feel free' not 'feel freely'. Suggestion: include correct auxiliary verbs and logical comparative phrasing.

× Yes, I like to wear T-shirts, especially in the summer season and I prefer the baggy ones them in which I can move freely and feel comfortable in them.

✓ Yes, I like to wear T-shirts, especially in summer, and I prefer the baggy ones because I can move freely and feel comfortable in them.

The phrase 'the baggy ones them in which' repeats pronouns and misuses 'in which'. Remove the extra 'them' and use 'because' to show reason. 'In summer' is more natural than 'in the summer season'. Suggestion: avoid redundant pronouns and use clear relative structures.

× Yes, I do spend a lot of time on choosing clothes because I prefer the clothes on which the graffiti is printed on and most of the stores doesn't have them.

✓ Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I prefer clothes with graffiti printed on them and most stores don't have them.

Remove unnecessary preposition 'on' after 'spend time' (use 'spend time choosing'). Use 'with' to describe clothes that have graffiti and 'printed on them' without extra 'on'. Also change 'doesn't have' to 'don't have' to agree with plural 'stores'. Suggestion: learn common verb+gerund collocations and correct preposition usage.

× No, I usually wear the same type of clothes but on special occasions like I have to go somewhere with my friends so I'll then wear something more than casual.

✓ No, I usually wear the same type of clothes, but on special occasions, such as when I go out with my friends, I will wear something smarter than casual.

The original mixes informal 'like I have to go somewhere' with awkward placement of 'then'. Use 'such as when I go out with my friends' and 'I will wear something smarter than casual' for clear future intention. 'Smarter' is a better comparative adjective than 'more than casual'. Suggestion: use 'will' for future plans and clearer comparative adjectives.

× I prefer to wear dark colors because it suits my skin tone like such as blue color or black color.

✓ I prefer to wear dark colors because they suit my skin tone, such as blue or black.

Use plural pronoun 'they' to agree with 'dark colors'. Remove redundant words 'color' after color names and avoid 'like such as' (choose one: 'such as' is correct). Suggestion: ensure pronoun agreement and avoid redundant phrasing.

× It suits me very well and I feel more vibrant in them.

✓ They suit me very well and I feel more vibrant in them.

'It' incorrectly refers to plural 'dark colors'; use 'they' for agreement. The rest is fine. Suggestion: match pronouns to the number (singular/plural) of their antecedents.