Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, umm), and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, because). Keep to 2–4 sentences and correct minor grammar (e.g. "I prefer to wear professional clothes for school or work").

例: I usually wear casual clothes because they are comfortable. However, for school or work I prefer professional clothes, such as a shirt and trousers, because they look more presentable.

提案: Provide a direct topic sentence with correct grammar and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain reasons and give a brief example. Fix verb forms ("I prefer to wear" and "they make me").

例: I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes because they help me relax. For example, when I meet friends or stay at home I usually choose a loose T‑shirt and jeans.

提案: Answer directly and clearly: say why you like T‑shirts and give one specific detail about styles or colors. Avoid unfinished sentences and unclear phrases, and use correct plural and possessive forms.

例: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they are comfortable and easy to match. I have several in different sizes and colors, but my favourites are black and white because they go with most outfits.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with a brief reason and a specific time estimate. Use natural vocabulary for appearance ("look presentable" "check my appearance") and avoid repetition.

例: Yes, I do, especially for important events or interviews. I usually spend about one to two hours choosing clothes because I want to look presentable and feel confident.

提案: Respond directly and clearly, using correct grammar and linking words (for example, whereas). Give concise contrast between weekdays and weekends and finish the sentence properly.

例: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I wear presentable clothes for work and school, whereas at weekends I usually choose casual clothes when I meet friends.

提案: Give a direct answer and clear reasons without hesitation. Avoid fillers and awkward phrases; use natural expressions to explain why you prefer dark colours (e.g. "they suit my complexion" or "they look smart").

例: I prefer dark colours, especially black, because they suit my complexion and look smart. Dark clothes are also easy to match with other items.

× Actually, I like to wear casual clothes. Uh, it depends for the event.

✓ Actually, I like to wear casual clothes. Uh, it depends on the event.

Wrong preposition: 'depends for' is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'depends on'. Use 'depends on' when something is determined by a condition. Suggestion: learn common verb+preposition collocations (depends on, rely on).

× For example, if I go to school, I prefer to wear umm, professional, uh, dress.

✓ For example, if I go to school, I prefer to wear professional clothes.

Incorrect noun form and article usage: 'professional dress' is acceptable but with fillers it sounds unnatural; 'professional clothes' is more natural for general clothing. Remove filler words. Suggestion: choose appropriate countable/uncountable nouns and avoid fillers in prepared responses.

× Or for example to job.

✓ Or for example, to go to work.

Missing verb and incorrect noun: 'to job' is not grammatical. Use 'go to work' or 'to a job'. Suggestion: include the verb 'go' and use 'work' as uncountable when describing going to place of employment.

× If I'm walking with my friend or staying at home, I like simple clothes.

✓ If I'm walking with my friends or staying at home, I like simple clothes.

Number agreement: 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' if implying general outings; if singular, keep 'my friend'. Also 'simple clothes' is acceptable. Suggestion: ensure noun number matches intended meaning.

× I prefer wear comfortable and casual clothes because it make me more comfortable and relaxing, especially if I have if I have for example meet with my friend or staying at home.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because they make me feel more comfortable and relaxed, especially if I, for example, meet with my friends or stay at home.

Multiple errors: missing 'to' after 'prefer' (verb pattern), subject-verb agreement ('it make' should be 'they make'), adjective/adverb choice ('relaxing' -> 'relaxed' to describe feeling), tense/form of verbs ('meet' and 'stay' should be base form). Suggestion: learn verb patterns (prefer to do), match subjects with plural pronouns, and use 'feel + adjective' for states.

× This is my preferred preferred kind of clothes.

✓ This is my preferred kind of clothing.

Repetition and word choice: duplicate 'preferred' and 'clothes' is better replaced with 'clothing' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: avoid repetition and prefer 'clothing' as an uncountable noun in this context.

× Yes, of course I like wearing T-shirt and I have four kind of T-shirt big size and small size and MO more different colors and my favorite colors in T-shirt is black and white T-shirt and also I like this kind because it make me.

✓ Yes, of course I like wearing T-shirts and I have four kinds of T-shirts in big and small sizes and more different colors. My favorite T-shirt colors are black and white, and I also like this style because it suits me.

Plural and agreement errors: use plural 'T-shirts' and 'kinds of T-shirts'; 'size' should be 'sizes'; 'MO' appears to be typo for 'more'; subject-verb agreement 'colors ... is' should be 'are'; 'it make me' unclear—use 'it suits me'. Suggestion: ensure plurals for multiple items, correct verb agreement, and avoid typos.

× Yes, I spend a lot of time to choose my clothes especially if I have important event or I have interview.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing my clothes, especially if I have an important event or an interview.

Incorrect verb pattern: after 'spend time' use verb+ing ('choosing'), not 'to choose'. Article errors: 'important event' and 'interview' need 'an'. Suggestion: remember 'spend time doing' and use indefinite articles before singular countable nouns.

× I spend between one hour to two hours because I need to see my my appearance and verify if I am look very beautiful or no.

✓ I spend between one and two hours because I need to check my appearance and see if I look good or not.

Range expression 'between X and Y' not 'between X to Y'. Redundancy 'my my'. 'Verify if I am look' is ungrammatical; use 'see if I look...'. 'Very beautiful' unnatural for describing appearance casually; 'look good' preferred. Suggestion: use correct range connectors and simpler expressions for checking appearance.

× Actually it depend for my program.

✓ Actually, it depends on my schedule.

Wrong verb agreement 'depend' should be 'depends' and wrong preposition 'for' should be 'on'. 'Program' likely meant 'schedule' or 'plans'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and use correct prepositions; choose the most natural noun ('schedule').

× For example in weekend I meet my friends so I wear I wear casual clothes and weekdays I have a job and school.

✓ For example, on weekends I meet my friends so I wear casual clothes, and on weekdays I have work and school.

Article and preposition errors: use 'on weekends' and 'on weekdays'. Redundant 'I wear I wear'. 'a job and school' better as 'work and school'. Suggestion: use time prepositions 'on' for days/weekends and avoid repetition.

× This way I choose to wear a presentable clothes and.

✓ This way I choose to wear presentable clothes.

Article error and sentence fragment: 'a presentable clothes' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a' and complete sentence (removed trailing 'and'). Suggestion: match articles to noun number and avoid sentence fragments.

× I like wear black colors or a dark colors because, uh, it, it make me, uh, it make me very deep and also this kind of color, uh, it, uh, it will be good with my skin because I'm white this way.

✓ I like to wear black or dark colors because they make me look serious, and these colors go well with my fair skin.

Verb pattern: 'like wear' should be 'like to wear' or 'like wearing'. Article/plural errors: 'black colors' -> 'black or dark colors'; 'a dark colors' incorrect. Subject-verb agreement: 'it make me' -> 'they make me'. Word choice: 'very deep' unnatural; 'serious' or 'mature' better. 'I'm white this way' awkward; use 'I have fair skin'. Suggestion: use correct verb patterns, match number agreement, and choose natural adjectives for appearance.

× I think that the dark color is good for me.

✓ I think that dark colors are good for me.

Article and number: use plural 'dark colors' with no definite article for general statement; 'is' should be 'are' to agree with plural. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general preferences and match verb number.