Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Говоря о предпочтениях, говорите ясно и последовательно. Избегайте запинок и повторов; структурируйте ответ: тема + 1–2 конкретных деталей. Используйте подходящие связки (for special occasions, on ordinary days). Не превышайте 3–4 предложений.

例: I usually wear formal clothes like dresses and heels for special occasions. On ordinary days I prefer comfortable, casual clothes such as jeans and T-shirts because they are practical and easy to move in.

提案: Избегайте повторов и колебаний («definitely», «like», «uh»). Дайте чёткий топик-сентенс и одну причину с примером. Используйте связки: however, but, because.

例: It depends on the occasion: for everyday activities I prefer comfortable clothes because they are easy to wear. However, for parties or formal events I choose smart outfits to look more polished.

提案: Ответ хороший, но уберите заполнители («um», «like») и сократите повторы. Дайте 1–2 конкретные причины или пример использования T-shirt.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable and easy to style. For example, I often wear a T-shirt with jeans when I meet friends on weekends.

提案: Избегайте стереотипных фраз и неясных слов («it's bends»). Дайте чёткую причину и пример: говорите, почему занимает много времени, и опишите ситуацию. Используйте корректную грамматику (I spend a lot of time choosing clothes).

例: Yes, I often spend a long time choosing clothes because I have many options and want to pick the right outfit. For instance, I may spend 20–30 minutes deciding between a casual dress and jeans for a lunch with friends.

提案: Ответ неоднозначен из-за противоречий. Дайте прямой ответ и одну поясняющую деталь about mood or activity. Избегайте слов-паразитов и повторов.

例: Usually no, I wear similar styles on weekdays and weekends, but sometimes my mood makes me try a different look, for example wearing a more relaxed outfit for a weekend outing.

提案: Сформулируйте мысль ясно: назовите предпочтения и объясните причину без запинок. Уберите повторения и неуверенные окончания. Укажите 1–2 цвета и почему вы их выбираете.

例: I don't have a single favorite color, but I usually prefer neutral tones like black or white because they are easy to style and suit my complexion.

× So on special occasions or events I would like to I like to.

✓ On special occasions or events, I like to wear formal clothes.

The original sentence has redundant and disfluent phrasing ('I would like to I like to') and missing object. Simplify and provide the verb 'wear' to complete the idea. Use comma after introductory phrase and keep present simple for habitual preference.

× I usually wear formal clothes like dresses and heels or if it's like an ordinary day I prefer to wear a comfortable and casual clothes like jeans or T-shirts.

✓ I usually wear formal clothes like dresses and heels, but on an ordinary day I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes like jeans or T-shirts.

Use of 'a' before plural 'clothes' is incorrect; remove the article. Add conjunction 'but' to contrast clauses and comma for clarity. Use 'comfortable, casual clothes' and plural consistent with 'jeans' and 'T-shirts'.

× As I said before, it depends on the occasion or event. If it's like just the an ordinary simple day without any events, I would like definitely, uh, I would prefer definitely to wear comfortable instead of casual clothes.

✓ As I said before, it depends on the occasion. If it's just an ordinary, simple day without any events, I would definitely prefer to wear comfortable clothes rather than smart clothes.

Remove extra articles ('the an') and filler words. 'Prefer to wear comfortable instead of casual clothes' is contradictory; likely intended contrast is 'comfortable rather than smart'. Place adverb 'definitely' before the verb. Use 'clothes' without extra article.

× But if it's like a a party, I would like to wear smart clothes.

✓ But if it's a party, I would like to wear smart clothes.

Remove duplicated article 'a a' and unnecessary filler 'like'. Keep simple present conditional phrasing.

× Actually, yes, I prefer T-shirts because they are really comfortable to wear and my whole wardrobe is like full, umm, I have a lot of T-shirts, I can say.

✓ Actually, yes. I prefer T-shirts because they are really comfortable, and my wardrobe is full of them; I have a lot of T-shirts.

Combine ideas into clear clauses: 'wardrobe is full of them' is the correct collocation. Remove filler 'like' and 'umm' and split into two sentences for clarity.

× And in an ordinary day I would like to wear T-shirts, yeah.

✓ On an ordinary day I like to wear T-shirts.

Use present simple 'I like' for habitual actions rather than 'would like' which implies desire in a specific instance. Use 'on an ordinary day' idiomatic phrase.

× Yes, because I'm a girl and sometimes I want to wear casual, sometimes I want to wear like formal and it's bends.

✓ Yes, because I'm a girl: sometimes I want to wear casual clothes, sometimes formal ones, and my preferences change.

Original has awkward 'it's bends' (nonsense) and overuse of 'like'. Replace with clear phrase 'my preferences change'. Use 'formal ones' to avoid repetition.

× I spend a lot of time to choose something because I I have a lot of clothes and I can choose anything between them because I don't know.

✓ I spend a lot of time choosing what to wear because I have a lot of clothes and I can't decide between them.

Use gerund 'choosing' after 'spend time'. Remove duplicated 'I'. Use 'decide between them' instead of 'choose anything between them' for correct collocation and clarity.

× Actually no I don't wear like different styles but I think it depends on my mood if I want to wear something different like not my style.

✓ Actually no, I don't usually wear very different styles, but it depends on my mood if I want to try something different from my usual style.

Use 'usually' for habitual negation. Replace 'like' fillers and clarify 'different from my usual style'. Maintain present simple for habitual situations.

× So I would like to try it. I will definitely try it but I think no.

✓ I would like to try it; I will definitely try it, but at the moment I don't.

Clarify contradiction: 'I think no' is corrected to 'I don't' to indicate current tendency. Use semicolon or commas to connect related ideas and keep future 'will' for intention.

× I don't have a favorite color I think, but I prefer to wear like something not very bright and colorful, something like white or black because it's easy to style and it really it really how to say for my face, it's really.

✓ I don't have a favourite color, but I prefer to wear colors that are not very bright, like white or black, because they're easy to style and suit my face.

Remove filler 'like' and repeated phrases. Use 'colors that are not very bright' and 'suit my face' as correct collocation. Add comma after introductory clause and fix subject-verb agreement with plural 'they're'.