Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use specific supporting details with correct words (e.g., "comfortable and practical"), and a linking phrase before the example. Also correct word choice (e.g., "versatile" instead of "recital").

例: I prefer wearing casual clothes because they are comfortable and practical. For example, when I go out I usually wear jeans and a T-shirt because they are versatile and allow me to move easily.

提案: Give a direct answer and avoid unclear words. Use one clear sentence stating your preference, then add a reason with a linking word. Replace unclear vocabulary and correct grammar (e.g., "rather wear comfortable, casual clothes").

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because they allow me to move freely and feel relaxed during the day.

提案: Avoid redundancy and tighten the response. Use one topic sentence then a specific supporting reason with a linking word. Remove filler words like "actually" and repeating phrases.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to put on, especially when I'm in a hurry.

提案: Answer directly about time spent choosing clothes. Be coherent: say whether you spend much time and give a brief reason with one or two specific details (shopping habits, trying on, exchanging). Avoid unrelated phrases and repetition.

例: No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes. I usually pick comfortable items quickly, but when shopping I try things on and exchange them if they don't fit.

提案: Give a clear direct answer about difference in styles, then give specific supporting details. Avoid repeating words and finish sentences. Mention examples of weekday/weekend activities if relevant to explain choices.

例: No, I don't usually wear different styles on weekdays and weekends. I tend to wear the same jeans and T-shirts most days because they're practical for both work and free time.

提案: State your preference clearly and give a realistic, specific reason. Avoid exaggerated claims about others' reactions and correct grammar ("they admire me"). Use linking words for clarity.

例: I prefer white clothes because they look fresh and clean. For instance, I often choose a white shirt when I want a neat, smart appearance.

× Actually I prefer I prefer wear casual dresses because they're comfortable and practical.

✓ Actually I prefer wearing casual dresses because they're comfortable and practical.

The verb 'prefer' when followed by another verb typically takes the -ing form (gerund): 'prefer wearing' rather than 'prefer wear'. Remove the duplicated phrase 'I prefer' for fluency.

× For example when I go out I usually I like wearing jeans and T-shirt because they're they're very recital and easy to move.

✓ For example, when I go out I usually like wearing jeans and a T-shirt because they're very practical and easy to move in.

Remove duplicated words and use the correct article 'a' with 'T-shirt'. 'Recital' is incorrect; the intended adjective is 'practical'. Also include the preposition 'in' after 'easy to move' to complete the expression.

× Actually I would rather very comfortable like Kishore dresses because they're more comfortable and freely move.

✓ Actually I would rather wear very comfortable clothes because they're more comfortable and allow me to move freely.

'Would rather' should be followed by a base verb (wear). 'Kishore dresses' is unclear; replace with 'clothes'. Use 'allow me to move freely' or 'let me move freely' for correct verb and adverb order.

× Yeah, actually I am keen on wearing T-shirts because they're comfortable and they're so because they're easy to wear.

✓ Yeah, actually I am keen on wearing T-shirts because they're comfortable and easy to wear.

Remove redundancy: 'they're so because' is incorrect and repetitive. 'Keen on' is correctly followed by the -ing form 'wearing'.

× Actually I am a close colleague and I wanna go shopping.

✓ Actually I am very close with my colleagues and I want to go shopping.

'A close colleague' changes meaning; likely intended 'close with my colleagues'. Also use 'want to' instead of colloquial 'wanna' in formal responses.

× I usually choose comfortable comfortable clothes and I I like try some clothes if I don't like I exchange other one.

✓ I usually choose comfortable clothes and I like trying on some items; if I don't like them I exchange them for others.

Use the -ing form 'trying on' after 'like'. Remove duplication. Use plural pronouns 'them' and correct phrase 'exchange them for others'.

× Actually, I I I don't usually wear different clothes because I only use the same dresses.

✓ Actually, I don't usually wear different clothes because I usually wear the same outfits.

Reduce repetitions. Use 'wear the same outfits' rather than 'use the same dresses' for natural present-tense expression.

× I I when I go shopping I usually buy jeans and T-shirts the same color and I wear the.

✓ When I go shopping I usually buy jeans and T-shirts in the same colors and wear them.

Remove extra pronoun, reorder to place time clause first, and complete the sentence by using 'wear them'. Use 'in the same colors' for natural phrasing.

× I actually I prefer white clothes because it's very attractive and when I go out wearing white clothes, people at people look at me and they they admire.

✓ I actually prefer white clothes because they are very attractive, and when I go out wearing white clothes, people look at me and admire me.

Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'clothes' and plural verb 'are'. Remove duplicated words. Add object 'me' after 'admire' for complete meaning.