Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response grammatically correct, concise and add a brief specific reason or example. Avoid repetition. Use one strong topic sentence and one supporting detail with a linking word.

例: I usually prefer baggy clothes because they are comfortable and easy to move in. For example, I often wear loose jeans and oversized hoodies at home because they help me relax and sit for long periods without feeling restricted.

提案: Organize the answer into one clear topic sentence that states your preference and one or two supporting reasons. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and avoid filler. Use a linking word to contrast (e.g., "however", "but").

例: It depends on the situation: at home I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me relax, but when I go out I usually choose smart outfits so I can look presentable. For instance, I wear sweatpants at home but a neat shirt and jeans when meeting friends.

提案: Keep it concise and avoid repetition. Give a brief specific detail about when or which kinds of T-shirts you prefer to make the answer more informative.

例: Yes, I do, especially in summer because T-shirts keep me cool and comfortable. For example, I often wear lightweight cotton T-shirts when I go to the park or run errands.

提案: Provide a clearer, complete answer with one topic sentence and a specific example. Avoid hesitations and finish your sentence. Use linking words to explain when you spend more time choosing clothes.

例: I sometimes spend a lot of time choosing clothes, especially for special occasions. For example, I take longer picking an outfit for festivals or parties because I want to look appropriate and match the event's style.

提案: Answer the question directly, stating whether you wear different styles and why. Keep sentences complete and relevant. Provide one brief contrasting detail about weekdays vs weekends using linking words like "usually" or "sometimes".

例: Not really — I usually wear simple, basic clothes both on weekdays and weekends because I prefer comfort and low maintenance. However, I sometimes dress up a bit on weekends when I go out with friends.

提案: Clarify which colours you like and give a concise reason. Remove unclear words and finish your thought. Provide a specific example of clothing items in that colour.

例: I prefer black because it looks neat and doesn't show dirt easily. For example, I often choose a black jacket or black jeans for daily wear since they are practical and easy to match.

× I usually prefer baggy clothes because it is comfortable and easier easier to wear.

✓ I usually prefer baggy clothes because they are comfortable and easier to wear.

The subject 'baggy clothes' is plural, so the plural pronoun 'they' and plural adjective form 'are' should be used rather than singular 'it'. Also 'easier' is repeated; remove the duplicate. Suggestion: match pronouns and verb forms to the number of the noun and avoid repetition. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× It depend. Depends upon where am I if I'm out.

✓ It depends upon where I am.

The correct verb form for third-person singular subject 'it' is 'depends'. Also the word order in an indirect statement should be 'where I am', not the question order 'where am I'. Suggestion: use correct third-person singular verb form and standard subject-verb order in statements. Grammar problem type ID: 27

× If I'm at home I prefer to eat comfortable side comfortable or or casual clothes because they help me relax and but if I'm going outside I usually pre.

✓ If I'm at home, I prefer to wear comfortable or casual clothes because they help me relax, but if I'm going out I usually dress more smartly.

The original has several issues: 'prefer to eat' is incorrect (wrong verb), repeated words, mixed conjunctions and an incomplete clause 'I usually pre'. Correction uses 'wear' instead of 'eat', removes repetitions, fixes conjunction use ('but') and completes the contrast clause. Suggestion: choose the correct verb for clothing (wear/dress), avoid repetition, and complete clauses for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I usually very smart or desire clothes so I can look at that trip.

✓ I usually wear very smart or designer clothes so I can look presentable for a trip.

The sentence lacks the main verb 'wear' and misuses 'desire' instead of 'designer' and 'look at that trip' is incorrect. Adding 'wear' fixes the structure; 'designer' is likely intended, and 'look presentable for a trip' conveys the meaning. Suggestion: include the main verb, choose correct adjectives, and use appropriate prepositional phrases. Grammar problem type ID: 2

× Absolutely yes. Especially especially during summer. I love to. I love to wear the T-shirt because it helps to keep me fresh and cool.

✓ Absolutely, especially during summer. I love to wear T-shirts because they help keep me cool and fresh.

Repeated words ('especially especially') and fragmented sentence 'I love to.' should be combined. Use plural 'T-shirts' or 'a T-shirt' consistently and plural pronoun 'they' to agree. Also 'helps to keep me fresh and cool' is better as 'help keep me cool and fresh'. Suggestion: avoid repetition, combine fragments, and ensure subject-pronoun agreement. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× Yeah, yeah, kinda. Because it is really hard for me to choose what to wear. During festivals and what to wear during.

✓ Yeah, kind of. It's really hard for me to choose what to wear during festivals.

Fragments and repetition make the original unclear. Combine ideas into one complete sentence and place the time phrase 'during festivals' at the end. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments and repeat fillers; produce a single complete sentence conveying the idea. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× To be honest, I really don't spend a lot of money on on clothes and my art food. It's simple and basic. So I.

✓ To be honest, I don't spend much money on clothes; my wardrobe is simple and basic.

The original has duplication 'on on', unclear phrase 'my art food', and incomplete sentence 'So I.' Remove duplication, replace unclear phrase with 'my wardrobe', and combine into a complete sentence. Suggestion: use clear nouns for meaning and avoid leaving sentences unfinished. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I love black Cottage, regards, it doesn't get dirty. It turned out dirty quickly and. Also sweets.

✓ I love black clothes because they don't show dirt easily and they don't get dirty quickly.

The original includes unintelligible fragments ('Cottage, regards', 'Also sweets') and inconsistent tense 'It turned out dirty quickly'. Replace with clear phrasing: 'black clothes' (plural), and 'don't show dirt easily'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and coherent expression. Suggestion: use precise vocabulary and complete clauses; avoid unrelated fragments. Grammar problem type ID: 13