Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct topic sentence that correctly states the style you prefer, use correct grammar and avoid repetition. Keep it concise and add one brief reason or example. Use linking words if you add details.

例: I like wearing hip-hop style clothes. For example, I often wear baggy jeans and oversized hoodies because they feel comfortable and match the music I listen to.

提案: Use the correct tense and article forms; answer directly then add a short reason with a linking word. Keep it to one or two sentences and avoid extra words.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they make me feel relaxed when I study or go out. For instance, I usually wear a T-shirt and jeans on most days.

提案: Give a clear affirmative response with correct word order and grammar, then add a simple supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid saying 'of course' plus ungrammatical phrasing.

例: Yes, I do. I find T-shirts very comfortable, so I wear them almost every day when I am at home or meeting friends.

提案: Answer the question directly with a complete sentence and correct grammar. If you add an explanation, use linking words and clear phrasing. Avoid fragments.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I prefer simple outfits. Usually I just pick a T-shirt and jeans and go.

提案: Provide a clear, fluent response without hesitation or repetition. State whether styles differ and give one brief specific detail, using linking words to connect ideas.

例: No, I usually wear the same style on weekdays and weekends. I mainly wear T-shirts, but I change the color depending on my mood.

提案: Answer directly using correct sentence structure and list colours naturally. You can add a short reason or favourite colour with a linking phrase.

例: I like red, blue and green T-shirts. I especially like blue because it looks calm and matches most of my jeans.

× I want to wear a clothes for a hip hop like a hip hop.

✓ I want to wear clothes for hip hop, like hip hop style.

The noun 'clothes' is plural and does not take 'a'. Use 'clothes' without an article. Also 'for a hip hop' is incorrect; say 'for hip hop' or 'hip hop style'. Remove the redundant 'a hip hop'. Suggestion: Use 'clothes' without 'a' and say 'hip hop style' for clarity.

× I preferred for a casual clothes because I am very comfortable.

✓ I prefer casual clothes because I am very comfortable in them.

The student used past tense 'preferred' though asking about present preference; use present simple 'prefer'. 'For a casual clothes' is ungrammatical: 'clothes' is plural and does not need 'a'. Add 'in them' to clarify 'comfortable in clothes'. Suggestion: Use present simple for general preferences and remove the article before plural 'clothes'.

× Yes, of course I comfortable to wear a T-shirt every day.

✓ Yes, of course I am comfortable wearing a T-shirt every day.

The sentence lacks the verb 'am' for the subject 'I' and uses incorrect structure 'comfortable to wear'. Use 'comfortable' with 'be' + gerund: 'am comfortable wearing'. Also 'a T-shirt every day' is acceptable. Suggestion: Include the correct form of 'be' and use gerund after 'comfortable'.

× No, I'm very comfortable. To choosing a clothes.

✓ No, I'm very comfortable. I don't spend much time choosing clothes.

'To choosing a clothes' is ungrammatical. Use a full clause: 'I don't spend much time choosing clothes.' Remove the article 'a' before the plural 'clothes'. Suggestion: Use a negative clause with infinitive or gerund: 'I don't spend much time choosing clothes.'

× No, no, it's the same every day. I, I, I clothes, uh, T-shirt, but different color everyday when I use.

✓ No, it's the same every day. I wear T-shirts, but I use different colors each day.

The original is disfluent and missing verbs. Insert verb 'wear' and correct plural 'T-shirts'. 'Different color' should be plural 'different colors' or 'a different color' and 'everyday' (adjective) should be 'each day' or 'every day'. Suggestion: Use 'I wear T-shirts' and 'different colors each day' for clarity.

× I like a color of the T-shirt is red, blue and green.

✓ I like the colors of the T-shirts: red, blue, and green.

'I like a color of the T-shirt is ...' is ungrammatical. Use 'I like the colors of the T-shirts' or 'My favorite T-shirt colors are ...'. Also use plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. List items with commas and include 'and' before the final item. Suggestion: Say 'My favorite T-shirt colors are red, blue, and green.'