Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the sentence grammatically correct, be concise, and add one specific detail. Use a clear topic sentence and a supporting detail with a linking word. For example, correct article/noun usage and mention a reason or situation.

例: I usually wear jeans and a T-shirt because they are comfortable and easy to move in when I go out or study.

提案: Answer directly (no 'yes' to a choice question), correct article usage, and give a brief reason using a linking word. Avoid hesitation and redundancy.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart outfits because they help me feel relaxed while working or meeting friends.

提案: Expand slightly: give a short reason or an example in one additional sentence to make the answer more informative and natural. Use a linking word to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I do because they are versatile; for instance, I often pair a plain T-shirt with jeans for a quick outfit.

提案: Be direct and natural: avoid awkward phrasing. Give a brief supporting detail with a linking word explaining how you choose clothes to show clarity and coherence.

例: No, I don't. I usually decide quickly because I plan my outfits the night before or stick to simple combinations.

提案: Provide a clear contrast between weekdays and weekends using linking words (e.g., 'whereas' or 'but'), and fix small errors and repetition. Give a concise example of weekend style.

例: Yes, I do. On weekdays I usually wear a T-shirt and jeans for comfort, whereas on weekends I prefer a smarter or more fashionable outfit for social events.

提案: Use natural phrasing for colours and add a short reason or example. Avoid the extra word 'colour' after the colour and give a specific context where you wear that colour.

例: I like white because it looks clean and goes well with many items; for example, I often wear a white shirt to brighten up my outfit.

× I usually wear a jeans with the T-shirt.

✓ I usually wear jeans with a T-shirt.

'Jeans' is a plural noun used without an article in general statements; using 'a jeans' is incorrect. Also use 'a T-shirt' (singular) or just 'T-shirts' for general preference. Suggestion: say 'wear jeans' or 'wear a pair of jeans' if you want a singular form.

× Uh, yes I do. I prefer to wear a casual clothes.

✓ Uh, yes I do. I prefer to wear casual clothes.

'Clothes' is plural, so the singular adjective phrase 'a casual' is wrong. Remove the article 'a' and use the adjective 'casual' before the plural noun: 'casual clothes'.

× No, I don't. Uh, I spend a short time of choosing clothes.

✓ No, I don't. Uh, I spend a short time choosing clothes.

The phrase 'a short time of choosing clothes' is unidiomatic. Use 'spend a short time choosing clothes' or 'spend little time choosing clothes'. Remove 'of' after 'time' when followed by a verb in -ing.

× Yes I do. I usually wear a a T-shirt with jeans on a weekday.

✓ Yes, I do. I usually wear a T-shirt with jeans on weekdays.

There is a repeated 'a a' which should be a single 'a'. Also 'on a weekday' suggests one specific day; to indicate routine use the plural 'on weekdays' or 'on a weekday' with article 'a' but typical answer uses 'on weekdays'. Ensure comma after 'Yes'.

× I like white colour.

✓ I like the colour white.

In English the typical word order is 'the colour white' or simply 'I like white'. Also include the definite article 'the' with 'colour' when specifying the colour. Alternatively say 'I like white'.