Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating the kinds of clothes you like, avoid filler words (umm) and repetition, and add one or two specific reasons or examples. Keep answers under five sentences and use linking words if you add details.

例: I usually wear skirts and occasionally formal dresses. I like skirts because they are comfortable and easy to pair with different tops, while I choose formal dresses for special events or work functions.

提案: Answer directly and correct comparative phrasing. Use clear reasons and link them logically. Avoid repeating the same idea and keep to two or three sentences.

例: I prefer comfortable clothes rather than smart ones because they suit my everyday lifestyle. Comfortable outfits make me feel confident and relaxed, which is why they have become my signature style.

提案: Good direct answer. Improve by adding a specific example or context and a linking phrase to expand naturally. Avoid vague words like 'it' without clear reference.

例: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable and versatile. For example, I often wear a plain T-shirt with jeans for errands or a graphic T-shirt when I hang out with friends.

提案: Provide a clearer structure: state how much time you spend, then give specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., 'fit me') and avoid vagueness.

例: Yes, I often spend a long time choosing clothes because my wardrobe has many options. Therefore I sometimes struggle to decide what fits me best, and my choice usually depends on my mood that day.

提案: Answer directly then contrast weekdays and weekends using linking words like 'whereas' or 'in contrast'. Use correct collocations (e.g., 'suits my job', 'casual shirts at home') and avoid unnecessary details about wardrobe size.

例: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I wear formal clothes that suit my job, whereas on weekends I prefer casual shirts and comfortable outfits at home.

提案: Be concise and avoid contradictory statements. State your preference clearly and give brief reasons or situations when you choose those colours. Watch grammar and phrasing.

例: I like many colours, but if I had to choose one I prefer black or white because they are easy to mix and always look neat. For example, I often pick black for formal occasions and white for a fresh daytime look.

× I usually wear umm skirt, sometimes the name umm formal dresses and umm skirt.

✓ I usually wear skirts, sometimes formal dresses and skirts.

The student used singular 'skirt' where plural 'skirts' is needed because they are talking about habits/general clothing items. Use plural for countable nouns when referring to types or repeated items. Suggestion: say 'skirts' or 'a skirt' depending on meaning. Use consistent parallel structure: 'skirts, sometimes formal dresses and skirts.'

× I prefer to wear comfortable clothes than casual clothes.

✓ I prefer wearing comfortable clothes to casual clothes.

The verb 'prefer' is followed by 'to' when comparing preferences (prefer A to B) or by 'prefer doing A to doing B'. Using 'than' is incorrect after 'prefer'. Also use 'wearing' for natural collocation. Suggestion: use 'prefer A to B' or 'prefer to do A rather than do B.'

× It's because it is what my style is, It is what makes me feel that I am confident with and also that's my signature style.

✓ It's because that is my style; it makes me feel confident, and it's my signature look.

The original has awkward word order and unnecessary 'that' and 'with'. 'Feel confident' does not take a preposition 'with'. Also avoid comma splice and repeat 'it is'. Use concise clauses and correct collocation 'signature look/style.' Suggestion: link ideas with proper punctuation and use 'feel confident' without 'with.'

× Yes, I love to wear T-shirts. It's because it is so comfortable and besides, it is also my style.

✓ Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are so comfortable; besides, they suit my style.

Pronoun agreement: 'T-shirts' is plural, so use 'they are' not 'it is'. Also prefer 'wearing' for habitual actions. 'Besides' should connect clauses; use punctuation accordingly. Suggestion: match pronoun number to noun and use natural collocations 'they suit my style.'

× It's because in my drawer or in my cabinet there's a lot of choices.

✓ It's because in my drawer or cabinet there are a lot of choices.

When referring to 'choices' (plural), the verb after there should be 'are' not 'is/there's'. Also 'drawer or cabinet' is fine; remove extra 'in' for conciseness. Suggestion: use 'there are' with plural nouns and keep prepositions consistent.

× But I don't know what style should or fit to me or it depends on my mood.

✓ But I don't know which style should fit me; it depends on my mood.

Incorrect modal position and 'fit to me' is wrong; use 'fit me' (no 'to'). Use 'which' for choices. Also avoid 'should or fit' confusion. Suggestion: reorder to 'which style should fit me' or 'what style suits me.'

× Yes I do, I have a large wardrobe here in my room and when I am in weekdays I wear my formal dress which is suit to my job and also in weekends I wear the house shirts only.

✓ Yes, I do. I have a large wardrobe in my room, and on weekdays I wear formal clothes that suit my job; on weekends I only wear casual shirts.

Several issues: use 'on weekdays' and 'on weekends' (preposition use). 'Formal dress which is suit to my job' is ungrammatical — use 'that suit my job' or 'that are suitable for my job.' 'House shirts' is unclear; 'casual shirts' better. Also add commas and split sentences for clarity. Suggestion: use 'on weekdays/on weekends', 'suit' without 'to', and correct adjective choice.

× To be honest, I love all the colours, but if you choose me one specific color it should be black or white.

✓ To be honest, I love all colours, but if you had to choose one specific colour for me, it would be black or white.

Use conditional 'if you had to choose' or 'if you asked me to choose' to express hypothetical. Also 'it should be' is odd for personal preference; use 'it would be'. Maintain British spelling 'colours' consistently if desired. Suggestion: use conditional structure and 'would' for hypotheticals.

× It's because that's my favorite colour All in all colour.

✓ That's because they're my favourite colours overall.

Original repeats and ends with fragment 'All in all colour.' Use 'they're my favourite colours overall' for clarity and pronoun agreement. If referring to both black and white, use plural. Also correct punctuation and word order. Suggestion: avoid repeating words and use a complete clause.