Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more fluent and avoid filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details (materials, brands, or situations) using linking words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

例: I prefer sporty, comfortable clothes. For example, I often choose sweatshirts and joggers because they’re breathable and easy to move in. I also tend to pick darker colours like navy or black because they’re low-maintenance and match easily.

提案: Answer directly and correct lexical errors (e.g., 'cattle' → 'formal' or 'smart'). Use a clear topic sentence, give a specific reason and use a linking word. Avoid fragmented phrases.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart or formal outfits. Because I work from home most days, comfort matters more than appearance, so I usually wear jeans or tracksuit bottoms. However, I will dress smartly for interviews or special events.

提案: Be more precise and reduce hesitations. Describe the T-shirt clearly and add one reason why you like it using a linking word. Use correct vocabulary for details (e.g., 'logo' instead of 'stitching').

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. My favourite one is black with a vertical logo down the front, and I wear it because it’s comfortable and matches most of my outfits.

提案: Keep the answer concise and fluent. Provide a short reason and an example using linking words. Remove repeated words and filler sounds.

例: No, I don’t spend much time choosing clothes. Usually I just grab something from my closet quickly because I’m often in a hurry in the morning. For instance, I normally pick the same pair of joggers and a T-shirt.

提案: Answer directly and give a short contrast if needed. Use linking words to organise supporting details and avoid repetition and fillers.

例: Not really — I wear similar clothes during the week and at weekends. Since I value comfort, I usually stick to jogging trousers and gym shirts whether I’m working or relaxing. Only on special occasions do I choose something smarter.

提案: Provide a clearer preference and expand with a reason or example. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more decisive rather than contradictory.

例: I tend to wear black most often because it’s versatile and hides stains, but I also enjoy brighter colours in the summer. For example, I might choose a blue or green T-shirt when I go out with friends.

× I am preferring comfortable over cattle clothes.

✓ I prefer comfortable clothes over formal clothes.

The verb 'prefer' is a stative verb and is not usually used in the continuous present ('am preferring'). Use the simple present 'prefer' for general preferences. 'Cattle clothes' is incorrect vocabulary; likely intended 'casual' or 'formal' — context suggests 'formal' or 'smart' clothes. Replace with 'formal clothes' or 'smart clothes' to be clear.

× For me it's more about. Being comfortable then looking good I guess.

✓ For me, it's more about being comfortable than looking good, I guess.

Sentence fragments and punctuation are incorrect. Combine the clauses into one sentence. Use 'than' for comparison, not 'then'. Lowercase 'being' is part of the same clause. Add commas for clarity.

× Yes, I like UMM to wear AT shirt.

✓ Yes, I like to wear a T-shirt.

The phrase contains disfluent 'UMM' and incorrect word order 'to wear AT shirt'. Use the infinitive 'to wear' with the article 'a' and standard form 'T-shirt'. Remove filler sounds in formal responses.

× My favorite T-shirt is black and has a stitching which is saying D vertical.

✓ My favorite T-shirt is black and has stitching that says a vertical letter D.

Preposition and relative clause are awkward. 'Has a stitching which is saying' is incorrect — use 'has stitching that says'. Reword to clarify 'vertical' modifies 'letter D'. Articles adjusted: remove unnecessary 'a' before 'stitching' or keep 'has stitching'; either is acceptable.

× I try to wear it every day.

✓ I try to wear it every day.

This sentence is grammatically correct in simple present to express habitual action. No change needed.

× No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing my clothes.

✓ No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing my clothes.

Sentence is correct: simple present negative is appropriate for habitual actions. No change required.

× Usually when I wake up, I just pick whatever umm is in my closet.

✓ Usually, when I wake up, I just pick whatever is in my closet.

Remove filler 'umm' and add commas around the time clause for clarity. The rest of the sentence is fine.

× And yeah, that that's I'm pretty fast umm with that clothing and style decision.

✓ And yeah, I'm pretty fast with clothing and style decisions.

Original has redundancy ('that that's') and filler 'umm'. Reorder to a natural subject-verb structure and use plural 'decisions' to match general meaning.

× I I am usually wearing the same types of clothes, umm, throughout the whole week.

✓ I usually wear the same types of clothes throughout the whole week.

Use simple present 'usually wear' for habitual actions instead of present continuous 'am usually wearing'. Remove filler 'umm' and duplicate 'I'.

× So as I mentioned, it's mostly comfortable clothes or jogging trousers or gym shirts.

✓ So, as I mentioned, it's mostly comfortable clothes, like jogging trousers or gym shirts.

Add a comma after introductory clause and use 'like' to introduce examples. Commas improve readability. The original is mostly acceptable but benefits from this slight restructuring.

× Just uh yeah, I just want to be comfortable all the time.

✓ I just want to be comfortable all the time.

Remove filler 'uh yeah' and redundant 'just' at start; keep a single 'just' for clarity. The simple present expresses the general desire appropriately.

× I like to wear black clothes, but honestly I think I like all colors the same.

✓ I like to wear black clothes, but honestly I think I like all colors equally.

Use the adverb 'equally' instead of adjective 'the same' to describe how much the speaker likes colors. 'The same' is not incorrect but 'equally' is more natural here.