Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the sentence grammatical, concise and slightly more detailed. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one brief reason or example. Avoid repetition and filler words.

例: I prefer wearing T-shirts and other lightweight summer clothes because they keep me cool. For example, I often choose cotton T-shirts when the weather is hot because they are breathable and easy to move in.

提案: Answer directly and clearly, then add a short explanation with a linking word. Use correct verb forms and avoid hesitations.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes in most situations because they feel more relaxed. However, for business or corporate events I wear smart clothes so I look professional.

提案: Keep the answer natural and concise: one clear topic sentence and one supporting detail. Remove fillers and use correct verb forms. Use a linking word to connect reason and examples.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts in my free time because they are comfortable and allow me to exercise easily. For instance, I wear T-shirts when I go jogging or cycling.

提案: Respond directly with correct tense and a brief explanation. Avoid unnecessary fillers and make the reason specific.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I plan my outfits in advance. For example, I pick my clothes the night before to save time in the morning.

提案: Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two specific contrasts. Use correct verb forms and reduce repetition. Use linking words like 'because' or 'however'.

例: Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I usually wear formal business clothes for work, whereas on weekends I prefer casual T-shirts and comfortable outfits for relaxing.

提案: Give a direct answer, then a short, specific reason. Use singular/plural agreement and natural phrasing. Avoid overgeneral claims about feelings without explanation.

例: I like green because it's my favorite color and it makes me feel calm and confident. For example, wearing a green shirt helps me feel more relaxed during presentations.

× I'm very like to wear the the T-shirt and of course the summer the summer clothes.

✓ I really like to wear T-shirts and, of course, summer clothes.

Errors: incorrect verb expression 'I'm very like to' (should use 'I like' or 'I really like'), duplicate word 'the the', incorrect article and plural for 'T-shirt' and repeated phrase 'the summer the summer clothes'. Suggestion: use 'I really like' to express preference, pluralize 'T-shirt' when speaking generally, remove duplicate words and unnecessary articles. Ensure concise noun phrases.

× I'm preferring to wearing the casual clothes or the former clothes. Umm, in the business or the corporate event.

✓ I prefer to wear casual clothes, or formal clothes for business or corporate events.

Errors: 'I'm preferring' is incorrect — stative verbs like 'prefer' use simple present 'I prefer'. 'to wearing' mixes infinitive and -ing; use 'to wear' or 'wearing' alone. 'Former clothes' is the wrong word for 'formal clothes'. 'in the business or the corporate event' needs plural and article correction: 'for business or corporate events'. Suggestion: use simple present for preferences, use correct infinitive form, choose correct adjective 'formal', and match singular/plural for 'events'.

× Yes, of course I'm like to wearing a T-shirt, uh, in the leisure time, so I will be feeling comfort and also easy to do the activities like bike or like umm jogging and so on.

✓ Yes, of course I like wearing a T-shirt in my free time, because I feel comfortable and it is easy to do activities like cycling or jogging.

Errors: 'I'm like to wearing' mixes 'be' + like with wrong form; correct is 'I like wearing' or 'I like to wear'. 'a T-shirt' is fine but 'in the leisure time' is unnatural — use 'in my free time'. 'I will be feeling comfort' uses wrong tense and noun/adjective: use 'I feel comfortable'. 'easy to do the activities like bike' incorrect verb/noun: use 'easy to do activities like cycling'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual preferences and correct verb forms and collocations ('feel comfortable', 'free time', 'cycling').

× So far I'm not spend a lot of time to choosing my clothes because I already, umm, arranged day by day.

✓ So far I do not spend a lot of time choosing my clothes because I already arrange them day by day.

Errors: 'I'm not spend' mixes present continuous with base verb; use 'I do not spend'. 'to choosing' incorrectly uses 'to' with gerund; use 'choosing' without 'to'. 'I already, umm, arranged day by day' mixes past 'arranged' with present meaning — use present 'arrange' and include object 'them'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions, correct verb forms and include necessary objects.

× Yes, of course I'm wearing a different style of clothes on weekdays and weekend.

✓ Yes, of course I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends.

Errors: 'I'm wearing' suggests a current action; for habitual routines use simple present 'I wear'. 'a different style of clothes' conflicts article and plural — use 'different styles of clothes' or 'a different style of clothing'. 'weekend' should be plural 'weekends'. Suggestion: use simple present for routines, match singular/plural and use appropriate noun 'clothing' or 'clothes' with correct articles.

× This is because on weekdays I will I will wearing the the business clothes or like a formal clothes and a casual clothes.

✓ This is because on weekdays I wear business clothes or formal clothes and casual clothes.

Errors: 'I will I will wearing' redundant and wrong tense; use simple present 'I wear' for habitual action. Duplicate 'the the'. 'a formal clothes' and 'a casual clothes' mix singular article with plural noun; remove 'a' and use plural 'clothes' or 'a formal outfit'. Suggestion: use simple present, remove duplicates and match articles with countability.

× But on the weekend I will wearing the T-shirt or more like comfort clothes that I.

✓ But on weekends I wear T-shirts or more comfortable clothes.

Errors: 'I will wearing' incorrect future continuous; use simple present 'I wear' for habitual actions. 'the T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. 'comfort clothes' incorrect adjective; use 'comfortable clothes'. Trailing 'that I' is incomplete. Suggestion: use simple present for routines, pluralize general items, use correct adjective 'comfortable', and complete the sentence.

× Of course green because of green is my favorite colors and also green can make us more comfort and will increase my confidence level.

✓ Of course green, because green is my favorite color and it makes me feel more comfortable and increases my confidence.

Errors: 'because of green is' incorrect structure; use 'because green is'. 'favorite colors' should be singular 'favorite color' when referring to one color. 'make us more comfort' uses wrong pronoun and noun/adjective — use 'makes me feel more comfortable'. 'will increase my confidence level' awkward; use 'increases my confidence'. Suggestion: fix clause order, match singular/plural, use correct pronoun and collocations ('feel comfortable', 'increase confidence').