Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct and relevant: name the types or styles you like and explain briefly why. Avoid unclear phrases and irrelevant brand mention unless explained. Use one topic sentence and one supporting sentence with a linking word.

例: I like modern casual clothes such as oversized hoodies and relaxed jeans because they are comfortable and easy to mix and match. For example, when I visit Canada I buy a few branded pieces that are not available here so I can update my wardrobe.

提案: Answer directly and expand with a specific reason and a linking word. Replace vague phrases like 'in style' with clearer explanation of comfort or suitability for activities.

例: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes because they suit my daily activities and let me move freely. For instance, I usually wear sweatpants and loose tops when I study or run errands.

提案: Organize your answer: start with a clear statement about T-shirts, then contrast with other preferred tops using linking words. Correct pronoun errors (use 'I' not 'they') and avoid repetition.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are practical for everyday use. However, I often choose cute tops such as crop tops or tank tops for social occasions, while a simple T-shirt and sweatpants are my go-to for relaxed days.

提案: Provide a clear topic sentence and then give a concise reason and a contrasting detail with linking words. Mention a specific routine or example to be more concrete.

例: Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I have a large wardrobe and many options. Nevertheless, I often end up repeating a few comfortable outfits, such as my black jeans and white tee, because they are practical.

提案: Give a direct answer then expand with a specific example and correct tense/grammar. Use linking words to show contrast between weekdays and weekends.

例: Not really; I usually wear the same casual style every day. However, on Sundays I dress more formally for church, whereas on weekends I prefer very casual clothes like a T-shirt and sweatpants.

提案: Start with a clear statement of preferred colours, then explain reasons and give examples. Avoid filler phrases and repeated ideas; use linking words for coherence and correct capitalization.

例: I prefer dark colours, especially black, gray and dark blue, because they suit my style and are easy to coordinate. For example, I often pair a dark blue jacket with black jeans for a simple, cohesive look.

× I love already.

✓ I already love them.

The original sentence lacks a clear object and has incorrect word order. 'Already' should come before the main verb or after the auxiliary; adding 'them' clarifies what is loved (clothes/brands) and fixes sentence structure. Suggestion: place adverbs in their usual positions and include the object when needed.

× I also love Randy Melville but there isn't really shops like that here in the Philippines so whenever I go to Canada I buy a lot.

✓ I also love Randy Melville, but there aren't really shops like that here in the Philippines, so whenever I go to Canada I buy a lot.

The error is plural agreement with the verb 'be' for 'shops' (there are). This falls under 'There be issue' and subject-verb agreement. Use 'aren't' with the plural noun 'shops'. Also punctuation improvements clarify sentence flow.

× It's easier to wear in style rather than smart clothes.

✓ It's easier to dress in a casual style than in smart clothes.

The verb collocation is incorrect: we 'dress' or 'wear' clothes, but not 'wear in style'. Use parallel structure 'in a casual style' and compare with 'smart clothes'. This corrects tense/verb usage and improves clarity.

× I prefer to wear cute tops like crop tops, tank tops, spaghetti straps but they also love wearing T-shirts on a normal day like something quick to wear with like a simple T-shirt and pants or sweatpants.

✓ I prefer to wear cute tops like crop tops, tank tops, and spaghetti-strap tops, but I also like wearing T-shirts on a normal day when I want something quick to put on, like a simple T-shirt with pants or sweatpants.

Multiple errors: inconsistent pronoun ('they' vs 'I'), missing conjunctions, and incorrect noun form 'spaghetti straps' should be 'spaghetti-strap tops'. Corrected to use first person consistently and clearer phrasing. Use parallel lists and cleaner connectors.

× Yes, I would say it takes a lot of time for me to choose my clothes since I have a big closet, but I usually just wear the same thing again and again.

✓ Yes, I would say it takes me a long time to choose my clothes since I have a big closet, but I usually just wear the same things over and over.

Improve idiomatic phrasing: 'takes me a long time' is more natural than 'takes a lot of time for me'. 'Same things over and over' is idiomatic for repetition. This fixes sentence structure and word choice.

× Not really, the only time I would say that I change my style is when I go to church on Sundays. I wish I wear more casual clothes like T-shirt and sweatpants.

✓ Not really. The only time I would say I change my style is when I go to church on Sundays. I wish I wore more casual clothes, like T-shirts and sweatpants.

'I wish' should be followed by a past tense form to express a present unreal desire ('I wish I wore...'). Also pluralize 'T-shirts' and add commas for clarity.

× If you look up my glasses, you would see mostly dark colors.

✓ If you look at my clothes, you would see mostly dark colors.

'Look up my glasses' is incorrect; likely intended 'look at my clothes'. 'Look at' is the correct preposition and 'clothes' fits context. This fixes incorrect preposition and wrong noun.

× You wouldn't see something pastel or bright colors or neon colors.

✓ You wouldn't see pastel, bright, or neon colors.

Combine adjectives correctly and remove 'something' which is unnecessary. Use parallel adjective list for clarity.

× I wear a lot of dark clothes because it suits me, but it does make me sound emo.

✓ I wear a lot of dark clothes because they suit me, but they do make me seem emo.

'Clothes' is plural, so use 'they suit' not 'it suits'. Also 'make me seem emo' is more natural than 'make me sound emo' when referring to appearance; adjust verb agreement accordingly.

× But if you look at my style, it's not emo. It's usually just black or Gray and dark blue. I wear a lot of dark blue.

✓ But if you look at my style, it's not emo. It's usually just black, gray, and dark blue. I wear a lot of dark blue.

Main issue was capitalization of 'Gray' and punctuation: use commas in a list and consistent lowercase for color names. Sentence structure is fine otherwise; these small corrections improve correctness and readability.