Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cümlenizi daha akıcı ve doğal yapmak için kelime seçimlerinizi ve sözdiziminizi düzeltin; örneğin bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın, nedenini açıklayın ve gerekirse bir örnek ekleyin. Ayrıca 'close dress' yerine 'long dress' veya 'covered dress' gibi uygun ifadeler kullanın.

例: I usually wear modest, long dresses because I am a hijabi. For example, I often choose ankle-length dresses in neutral colors like white or beige.

提案: Cümleyi daha net ve akıcı hale getirmek için gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın ve bağlaçlar kullanarak nedenlerinizi düzenleyin. 'For example' ekledikten sonra kısa ve tam bir örnek verin ve cümleleri birbirine bağlayın.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I wear them every day and they are practical. For example, I often wear jeans and a loose top for both work and free time because they are easy to move in.

提案: Tekrarları azaltın ve tek bir akıcı cümleyle fikrinizi belirtin; ardından bağlaçla örnek verin. Tekil/çoğul uyumuna dikkat edin ('it's' yerine 'they're' ya da 'a T-shirt is').

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, I usually wear a plain T-shirt with jeans when I go to school.

提案: Daha doğal bir yapı için 'all my clothes' gibi doğru kelime sırasını kullanın ve nedeninizi açıklayan bir cümleyle genişletin. Kapanış ifadeleri ("That's all. Thank you.") sınavda gereksiz olabilir, bunları kaldırın.

例: Not really. I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I like most of what I own, so deciding is usually quick.

提案: Cümlenizi düzgün ve tam yaparak daha fazla detay verin; nedenini açıkça belirtin ve bir karşılaştırma sunun. 'A little bit clothes' yerine 'few clothes' veya 'limited wardrobe' kullanın.

例: Not really. I wear the same style during the week and at weekends because I have a fairly small wardrobe, so I don't change my outfits much.

提案: Daha doğal bir İngilizce için dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin ('they make me feel' yerine) ve nedenleri biraz daha ayrıntılı verin. Tekrarlayan kısa cümleler yerine bağlaç kullanın.

例: I like yellow and pink because they make me feel cheerful and warm; I think those colors suit my style and look cute.

× I like to wear. White dress.

✓ I like to wear a white dress.

The original has a sentence fragment and missing article. Combine into one sentence and add the indefinite article 'a' before a singular countable noun: 'a white dress'. Also lowercase 'white'.

× I'd actually close dress because I am hijabi.

✓ I'd actually choose close-fitting dresses because I am hijabi.

The student likely meant 'choose' not 'close' and needs an adjective phrase 'close-fitting' to describe dresses; use plural 'dresses' for general preference. 'Hijabi' can remain as an identifier. Verb choice and noun form were incorrect.

× Uh, I prefer to wear comfortable uh because I wear them daily and they are simple and practical.

✓ Uh, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because I wear them daily and they are simple and practical.

The noun 'clothes' was omitted after 'comfortable'. Include the noun to complete the noun phrase. Also remove filler 'uh' where possible.

× For example, I usually choose jeans they are comfortable for for work and free time.

✓ For example, I usually choose jeans because they are comfortable for work and free time.

Two independent clauses were run together without a conjunction or punctuation; add 'because' to show reason and remove duplicated 'for'.

× I like wearing T-shirts because it's comfortable and basic.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and basic.

T-shirts is plural, so refer with 'they are' rather than 'it's'. Pronoun-antecedent agreement required.

× Uh, for example, when I go to school I usually wear T-shirts.

✓ For example, when I go to school, I usually wear T-shirts.

Add a comma after the introductory phrase for clarity and remove filler 'Uh'. The tense and verb usage are otherwise correct.

× Actually no, because I like my all clothes so this is easy for me.

✓ Actually no, because I like all my clothes, so choosing is easy for me.

Word order 'my all clothes' is incorrect; use 'all my clothes'. The sentence also lacked a clear subject for 'is easy'—specify 'choosing' to make the sentence clear and grammatical.

× That's all. Thank you.

✓ That's all, thank you.

The original is acceptable in speech; combined punctuation improves flow. No major grammatical error.

× Actually I wear same dresses because I have a. A little bit clothes.

✓ Actually I wear the same dresses because I have very few clothes.

'Same dresses' needs 'the' to indicate specific set; 'a little bit clothes' is ungrammatical—use 'very few clothes' or 'few clothes' for countable items. Remove stray period.

× I like yellow and pink clothes because they are make me feel comfortable and lovely.

✓ I like yellow and pink clothes because they make me feel comfortable and lovely.

Remove extraneous 'are' before 'make'. Subject-verb agreement: 'they make' is correct.

× And also cute.

✓ They also look cute.

Fragment 'And also cute.' lacks a verb. Make it a full clause such as 'They also look cute.'