Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer more concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific details (when, why, examples). Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words like "because" or "especially" correctly.

例: I prefer comfortable clothes because they help me relax. For example, in summer I usually wear lightweight black or blue T-shirts and loose shorts, which are cool and easy to move in.

提案: Answer directly with a clear preference, then explain with specific situations. Keep sentences shorter and correct tense and pronoun use. Use linking words like "however" or "but" to contrast.

例: I generally prefer comfortable, casual clothes, but I wear smart outfits for special occasions. For instance, I wear dresses or formal shirts when I attend weddings, while I wear jeans and a T-shirt for shopping or at home.

提案: Give a clear reason and one specific detail or example. Correct collocations (e.g., "T-shirts are comfortable") and avoid awkward phrasing.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable. For example, I have several black and blue T-shirts in different designs that I wear almost every day.

提案: Organize the answer: state frequency (sometimes), then give 2 clear reasons (quality and budget) with a brief process. Avoid long run-on sentences and incorrect tense. Use linking words like "because" and "so".

例: Sometimes I spend a long time choosing clothes because I check the quality and whether the price fits my budget. I also try items on to see if they suit me and sometimes ask friends for their opinion before buying.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your usual practice, then give contrasting examples for weekdays and weekends using linking words like "however" or "when". Be specific about what "western clothes" means and avoid vague phrases.

例: Usually I wear similar clothes on weekdays and weekends because I value comfort. However, if I go out for an event or shopping on the weekend, I might dress in a Western-style outfit like a dress or jeans and a nice top to look more presentable.

提案: Answer directly with specific colours and a reason why they suit you. Avoid vague endings like "or more". Keep it to one or two sentences.

例: I prefer colors that suit my skin tone, especially black and blue because they look flattering and are easy to match with other items.

× I like to wear comfortable clothes in which I can feel relaxed, especially in summers on my daily basis in my favorite color black or sometime in blue.

✓ I like to wear comfortable clothes in which I can feel relaxed, especially in summer for my daily routine, in my favorite color black or sometimes blue.

Replace 'summers' with 'summer' (uncountable season) and 'on my daily basis' with 'for my daily routine' to use a natural prepositional phrase. Use 'sometimes' instead of 'sometime'. These changes correct preposition and noun usage and improve fluency.

× Well, it depends on the time period. On occasions I used to wear fancy clothes in which I can look beautiful but on the other side comfortable clothes I wear on my daily basis especially at home or sometimes whenever there is need to me to go outside in market to purchase anything.

✓ Well, it depends on the occasion. On special occasions I wear fancy clothes to look beautiful, but otherwise I wear comfortable clothes in my daily routine, especially at home or when I need to go to the market to buy something.

'Used to' implies a past habitual action; here a general present habit is intended, so use present simple 'wear'. Change 'on occasions' to 'on special occasions'. Replace 'in which I can look beautiful' with 'to look beautiful' and 'whenever there is need to me to go outside in market to purchase anything' with 'when I need to go to the market to buy something' to correct tense and preposition errors and improve clarity.

× Yes, I like to wear T-shirts as this type of clothes are also counter in comfortable clothes and I have a pair of T-shirts in similar color but in different designs which I wear on my daily basis.

✓ Yes, I like to wear T-shirts because this type of clothing is also considered comfortable, and I have several T-shirts in similar colors but different designs that I wear in my daily routine.

Replace 'as' with 'because' for clarity, 'clothes' with 'clothing' or 'type of clothing' and 'are also counter in comfortable clothes' with 'is also considered comfortable' to correct noun and preposition use. Use 'a pair of T-shirts' -> 'several T-shirts' and 'similar color' -> 'similar colors'. Change 'which I wear on my daily basis' to 'that I wear in my daily routine'.

× Sometimes I took much time to purchase clothes because I have to check the quality and the budget of my pocket that is it pocket friendly or not. And after that I selected some pieces too weird that am I looking good or not and took some compliments from my near ones and after that I purchased.

✓ Sometimes I take a long time to buy clothes because I have to check the quality and whether it is within my budget. After that I choose some pieces and check whether they look good on me, ask for compliments from my relatives or friends, and then I buy them.

Use present simple 'take' for habitual actions instead of past 'took'. Replace informal phrases 'budget of my pocket' with 'within my budget'. 'Selected some pieces too weird that am I looking good or not' is ungrammatical; replace with 'choose some pieces and check whether they look good on me'. 'Near ones' -> 'relatives or friends'. Maintain consistent present tense for habits.

× Even talk about weekdays and weekends, I usually wear similar clothes. It depends on my choice. Whenever there is need for me to go outside at that time I choose to wear western clothes in which I can look beautiful but on the other side otherwise I usually wear clothes in which I can feel relaxed.

✓ Whether it's weekdays or weekends, I usually wear similar clothes. It depends on my choice. When I need to go outside, I choose to wear western clothes to look attractive, but otherwise I usually wear clothes in which I feel relaxed.

Replace 'Even talk about' with 'Whether it's' and 'Whenever there is need for me to go outside at that time' with 'When I need to go outside' to correct structure and prepositions. Use 'to look attractive' instead of 'in which I can look beautiful' for natural phrasing. Remove redundant 'on the other side otherwise'.

× Those colors which suit on me, I choose to wear that one only. Either it's black, blue or more, etcetera.

✓ I choose to wear only the colors that suit me, such as black, blue, and others.

Remove incorrect preposition 'suit on me' -> 'suit me'. Replace 'that one only' with 'only the colors' and 'Either it's black, blue or more' with 'such as black, blue, and others' for grammatical correctness and natural expression.