Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific examples and a brief reason. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases (e.g. "trouser weather", "fore running"). Use linking words like "and" or "also" only when needed.

例: I usually prefer comfortable clothes. For daily wear I choose trousers and T-shirts because they are easy to move in, and for special occasions I sometimes wear jeans with a shirt to look a bit smarter.

提案: Give a direct answer then contrast both options briefly. Use one linking word to show the exception and provide a specific example for special occasions. Avoid repeating the same idea.

例: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes for everyday life because they are practical and allow freedom of movement. However, for parties or formal events I choose smart casual, such as jeans with a shirt, to look neater.

提案: Answer clearly and give 1–2 concise reasons with correct grammar. Avoid unclear phrases and repetition. Use linking words like "because" to connect reason and keep sentences short.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and keep me cool. For example, I wear T-shirts when I study at home or go for a walk.

提案: Provide a clear topic sentence and a specific reason or example. Avoid filler words and repeated fragments. Use linking words such as "because" or "so" to explain your reason clearly.

例: Yes, I do. I like to have different outfits for different occasions, so I spend time choosing clothes to ensure I have variety—for example, casual T-shirts for home and jeans or a nicer shirt for going out.

提案: Start with a direct contrast between weekdays and weekends, then give specific examples and a short reason. Keep sentences concise and use linking words like "while" or "but" to show contrast.

例: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear trousers and a T-shirt because I need practical clothes for work or study, while at weekends I prefer shorts or jeans and a shirt when I go out to restaurants or travel.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then provide 1–2 specific reasons using correct grammar. Avoid vague comparisons like "than colour." Use linking words such as "because" or "also."

例: I prefer wearing white because it suits me and matches easily with other clothes. Also, white reflects sunlight in summer, which helps me stay cooler.

× I often wear comfortable clothes in my daily routine activities like trouser weather, T-shirt and on special occasions I like to wear a jeans with shirts and fore running. I like to wear comfortable clothes and for sports activities.

✓ I often wear comfortable clothes in my daily routine activities, like trousers and T-shirts, and on special occasions I like to wear jeans with shirts for running. I like to wear comfortable clothes for sports activities.

Errors: incorrect articles and singular/plural forms ('trouser weather' -> 'trousers', 'T-shirt' needs plural 'T-shirts' when general, 'a jeans' -> 'jeans' without article), and unclear phrase 'fore running' -> 'for running'. Suggestion: Use plural for general clothing items, omit the indefinite article with plural nouns like 'jeans', and correct preposition 'for'.

× Absolutely, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes in my daily routine activities, and I also prefer these clothes in sports activities and other games. And I also prefer casual or smart clothes in special occasions, like a pair of jeans with shirts on a party or other.

✓ Absolutely, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes in my daily routine and for sports and games. I also prefer casual or smart clothes on special occasions, such as a pair of jeans with a shirt at a party.

Errors: incorrect article usage ('in special occasions' -> 'on special occasions'; 'a pair of jeans with shirts' -> 'a pair of jeans with a shirt'; 'on a party' -> 'at a party'). Suggestion: Use correct prepositions for occasions, use singular article with 'a shirt', and use 'at' for events like parties.

× Absolutely, I often wearing T-shirts because it provides a lot of comfortable to me and feels very relaxed and freely and AT shirt is better than other clothes due to some facts and T-shirts T-shirt is also wearing.

✓ Absolutely, I often wear T-shirts because they are very comfortable and make me feel relaxed and free, and a T-shirt is better than other clothes in some situations.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'I often wearing' should be 'I often wear' (use base verb after adverb), subject-verb agreement with plural 'T-shirts' requires 'they are', incorrect noun/adj usage 'a lot of comfortable' -> 'very comfortable', awkward adverb 'freely' -> 'free', and redundant/unclear phrases removed. Suggestion: Use correct verb forms, match subject and verb number, and choose appropriate adjectives/adverbs.

× Yeah, absolutely. I spend a lot of time choosing a clothes because I need a lot of variety for myself. Like I need when like I when I bought some clothes like T-shirt and jeans. I need a lot of variety and my choice contains time. That's the reason I spend a lot of time choosing.

✓ Yeah, absolutely. I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I need a lot of variety for myself. For example, when I buy clothes like T-shirts and jeans, I look for many options. That's why I spend a lot of time choosing.

Errors: incorrect article with plural noun 'a clothes' -> 'clothes' (no article), tense inconsistency 'when I bought' -> 'when I buy' to match habitual present, repetition and unclear phrase 'my choice contains time' corrected to 'look for many options'. Suggestion: Do not use 'a' with plural nouns, and maintain consistent present tense for habits.

× I wear comfortable clothes in my daily routine in on weekdays like I wear trouser with T-shirt on weekdays and in weekends I wear shorts or sometime a pair of jeans with shirts to visit new places like restaurants and hilly regions and other places.

✓ I wear comfortable clothes in my daily routine on weekdays; for example, I wear trousers with a T-shirt on weekdays, and on weekends I wear shorts or sometimes a pair of jeans with a shirt to visit places like restaurants and hilly areas.

Errors: wrong preposition combination 'in on weekdays' -> 'on weekdays', singular/plural and article issues ('trouser' -> 'trousers', 'T-shirt' -> 'a T-shirt', 'sometime' -> 'sometimes', 'shirts' -> 'a shirt'), and word choice 'hilly regions' -> 'hilly areas' is clearer. Suggestion: Use 'on' with days, ensure correct pluralization and articles, and use adverb 'sometimes'.

× I prefer white colour to wear because it suits on me and easily suitable with any type of clothes or any combination. And in summer season white colour reflects heat and feels cold. Therefore I prefer white colour than colour.

✓ I prefer to wear white because it suits me and easily matches any type of clothing or combination. In summer, white reflects heat and feels cooler. Therefore I prefer white to other colors.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'suits on me' -> 'suits me', awkward phrasing 'white colour to wear' -> 'to wear white' or 'prefer white', incorrect comparative 'prefer white than colour' -> 'prefer white to other colors', and 'reflects heat and feels cold' should be 'reflects heat and feels cooler'. Suggestion: Use correct verbs and prepositions with 'suit', say 'prefer X to Y' for comparisons, and use clearer adjectives like 'cooler'.