Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer clearer and more grammatical: start with a direct topic sentence, correct vocabulary (e.g. "sportswear" or "exercise outfit"), use one or two supporting details with linking words, and avoid unnecessary words. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

例: I prefer wearing sportswear because I go to the gym almost every day. For example, exercise clothes are comfortable and let me move freely while I work out, so they are my usual choice.

提案: Answer directly and fix grammar: use a clear topic sentence, explain reason with a linking word (because/so) and give a brief example. Avoid fillers and incomplete sentences.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because they allow me to move easily. For instance, I usually choose loose tops and trainers when I go out or run errands.

提案: Make the response concise and correct mistakes: state a clear opinion, provide one specific reason and an example, and avoid repetition. Use linking words for clarity.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. I wear a black T-shirt to work every day because it is part of my uniform, but I also own many colorful T-shirts that I wear at weekends.

提案: Provide a direct answer then a short supporting detail with correct vocabulary and linking words. Correct phrases like "selecting clothes" and use proper tense and plurality.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I wear a uniform to work. However, on weekends I do spend some time picking outfits when I go out with friends.

提案: Be specific and correct vocabulary: name the uniform items correctly, use plural/singular properly (jeans), and link ideas with "however" or "but". Keep sentences concise and avoid hesitation sounds.

例: Yes. On weekdays I wear my work uniform, which is a plain black T-shirt and black trousers. On weekends I wear casual clothes like colourful T-shirts and jeans when I visit cafés.

提案: Resolve the contradiction and be concise: state your true preference clearly, explain why or give an example. Correct vocabulary (colour, clothes, shopping) and avoid hesitations.

例: My favourite colour is yellow, and I often choose yellow T-shirts or a yellow jacket when I go shopping because it brightens my mood.

× I would like to weather exercise outfit because I love to go to the gym and exercise like every day, so the gym course allow me to move more easily and it's comfortable for me.

✓ I would like to wear a workout outfit because I love to go to the gym and exercise almost every day, so gym clothes allow me to move more easily and they are comfortable for me.

Original uses incorrect verbs and forms: 'weather' should be 'wear' (wrong word), 'exercise outfit' is unnatural—'workout outfit' or 'gym clothes' is better, 'like every day' should be 'almost every day' (adverb placement/choice), and 'course' wrong word for 'clothes'. 'Allow' must agree with plural subject 'clothes' so use 'allow' and 'it's' should be plural 'they are'. Suggest avoiding literal translations and use correct noun phrases and verb forms. Grammar problem type ID:8

× I would say that I prefer wear comfortable clothes rather than the smart skirt because umm, I think that the comfortable clothes around me to move more easily and.

✓ I would say that I prefer to wear comfortable clothes rather than a smart skirt because I think comfortable clothes allow me to move more easily.

Missing infinitive marker 'to' after 'prefer' and incorrect or missing verbs: use 'prefer to wear'. 'The smart skirt' should be 'a smart skirt' (article). 'The comfortable clothes around me to move' is ungrammatical; replace with 'allow me to move'. Remove trailing conjunction. Suggest using 'prefer to + verb' and clear subject-verb structure. Grammar problem type ID:2

× Yes I do. I'm a big fan of T-shirts, especially like the black one because I use I have to wear the black T-shirt to go to work every single day. But actually I have a large number of colorful T-shirt as well. It's around me too.

✓ Yes, I am. I'm a big fan of T-shirts, especially the black ones because I have to wear a black T-shirt to go to work every single day. But actually I also have a large number of colorful T-shirts.

Awkward phrases: 'especially like the black one' should be 'especially the black ones' to match plural 'T-shirts'. Remove redundant 'I use'. 'A large number of colorful T-shirt' needs plural 'T-shirts'. 'It's around me too' is unclear and unnecessary; remove it. Ensure plural agreement between noun and determiner. Grammar problem type ID:13

× No, I don't actually, because I have to wear my uniform for my workplace to go to work every day, so it's not necessary to spend time selecting the course. But on my weekend I spend some time to select to go outside with friend.

✓ No, I don't, because I have to wear my uniform for work every day, so it's not necessary to spend time choosing clothes. But on weekends I spend some time choosing what to wear when I go out with friends.

'Workplace to go to work' is redundant; use 'for work'. 'Selecting the course' is wrong word choice; should be 'choosing clothes'. 'On my weekend' should be 'on weekends' and 'select to go outside with friend' should be 'choosing what to wear when I go out with friends' with plural 'friends'. Fix verb forms: use gerund 'choosing' after spend time. Clarify sequence and plurality. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, of course, uh, on weekday I have to wear the uniform to go to work so it's like a bag T-shirt and back dresser. But on weekend I can wear the colourful T-shirt or the Jean and go to the cafe that.

✓ Yes, of course. On weekdays I have to wear a uniform to go to work so it's something like a baggy T-shirt and black trousers. But on weekends I can wear colourful T-shirts or jeans and go to a cafe.

Use plural 'weekdays'/'weekends'. 'The uniform' can be 'a uniform' depending on context. 'Bag T-shirt and back dresser' are incorrect word choices: likely meant 'baggy T-shirt and black dress/trousers'; choose 'baggy T-shirt and black trousers'. 'Jean' should be plural 'jeans'. Remove trailing 'that'. Ensure noun plurals agree with verbs. Grammar problem type ID:27

× MMM, my favorite color of curd would be yellow. Uh, actually I'm not a big fan of yellow, but I'm just delighted I always choose the yellow T-shirt or the yellow jacket when I go to the shopping.

✓ My favourite colour would be yellow. Actually I'm not a big fan of yellow, but I am often delighted and always choose a yellow T-shirt or a yellow jacket when I go shopping.

'color of curd' is incorrect—use 'colour'. 'Would be' is acceptable but simpler 'is' or 'would be' both okay; keep 'would be' if hypothetical. 'Go to the shopping' should be 'go shopping' (no article). 'I always choose the yellow T-shirt' should use 'a yellow T-shirt' to indicate one of many. Improve adverb placement: 'always' before verb or after auxiliary. Clarify 'delighted' placement. Fix spelling to British/American consistently ('colour/favourite'). Grammar problem type ID:13}]}