Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar and fluency by using complete sentences and a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words to make it coherent (e.g., "because", "for example"). Avoid repetition.

例: I prefer casual clothes because they are comfortable and practical. For example, I often wear jeans and T-shirts when I go out, since they allow me to move easily and feel relaxed.

提案: Provide a concise topic sentence stating your preference and then give a specific reason. Correct pronoun and verb forms and avoid fragmented sentences. Use a linking phrase like "because" or "as" to connect ideas.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because they suit my daily routines. For example, casual outfits are more practical for commuting and doing errands.

提案: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason or example. Fix grammar (use plural/singular correctly) and avoid repeating the same word. Use a linking word such as "because" or "so".

例: Yes, I enjoy wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable and help me feel relaxed. For instance, I wear a T-shirt on weekends when I stay at home or meet friends.

提案: Give a clear conditional structure: state the typical situation first, then provide specific timeframes. Use correct verb forms and linking words like "when" and "if" to connect clauses.

例: It depends. When I'm in a hurry, I don't spend much time choosing clothes, but if I have time I might spend 30 minutes to an hour picking an outfit.

提案: Start with a clear statement, then give two specific contrasting examples linked by "for example" or "whereas". Remove fillers and hesitations, and correct sentence boundaries.

例: Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends. For example, I wear smart dresses to parties or work events, whereas I wear casual clothes like jeans when I'm just walking in the park.

提案: Provide a clear topic sentence naming preferred colors, then give specific reasons and correct word choice (e.g., "it looks" not "it glue looks"). Use linking words like "because" and "so" and avoid repeating ideas.

例: I prefer light colors, especially white and yellow. I particularly like white because it looks clean and bright on me and is easy to match with other items, so I often wear white shirts for work and casual outings.

× I like wear clothes like casual clothes because it comfortable for me.

✓ I like wearing casual clothes because they are comfortable for me.

The verb 'like' is followed by the -ing form when expressing general preference (gerund). Also 'casual clothes' is sufficient; use the plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'clothes' and include the verb 'are' for 'comfortable'. Suggestion: use 'like wearing' and ensure subject-verb agreement with plural nouns.

× I feel comfortable and I like put on.

✓ I feel comfortable and I like to put them on.

The verb 'put on' requires an object (what you put on). Use the infinitive 'to put' after 'like' (or 'like putting') and refer to 'them' (the clothes). Suggestion: say 'I like to put them on' or 'I like putting them on.'

× There's items like jeans, T-shirts.

✓ There are items like jeans and T-shirts.

'There is' contracts to 'There's' but must agree with a plural noun; use 'There are' before plural 'items'. Also use 'and' between list items. Suggestion: use 'There are items such as jeans and T-shirts.'

× I prefer more wear comfortable and casual clothes than smart clothes because it's comfortable for me and I.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because they are comfortable for me and practical.

After 'prefer' use the infinitive 'to wear' (or the -ing form). 'More' is unnecessary with 'prefer'; use 'rather than' for comparison. Replace 'it's' with 'they are' to agree with plural 'clothes'. The sentence ended with 'and I' which is incomplete; clarify the second reason (I changed to 'and practical'). Suggestion: 'I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because they are comfortable and practical.'

× And practical for everyday use.

✓ They are practical for everyday use.

This fragment lacks a subject and verb. To state a fact about clothes, use 'They are' (third person plural) not 'is'. Suggestion: combine with previous sentence or write 'They are practical for everyday use.'

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because T-shirts is I enjoy and T-shirts are very comfortable for me.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because I enjoy them and they are very comfortable for me.

Avoid repeating 'T-shirts' excessively. Use 'I enjoy them' (object pronoun) and 'they are' for plural agreement. 'Like' is followed by the -ing form which is correct; adjust pronouns and agreement. Suggestion: 'I like wearing T-shirts because I enjoy them and they are very comfortable.'

× I feel relaxed.

✓ I feel relaxed.

This sentence is correct; no change needed. It expresses the speaker's state and uses correct pronoun and verb. (Included to show this clause is fine.)

× When I hurry up, I don't spend a lot of time using clothes.

✓ When I'm in a hurry, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

Use 'in a hurry' rather than 'hurry up' for the state. 'Spend time' is followed by a gerund describing the activity: 'choosing clothes' is the correct collocation, not 'using clothes'. Suggestion: 'When I'm in a hurry, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes.'

× If I have more time to choose, I choosing for 30 minutes or one hour.

✓ If I have more time to choose, I choose for 30 minutes or even an hour.

After 'I' use the base verb 'choose' (present tense), not the '-ing' form 'choosing'. Also add an article 'an' before 'hour' and consider 'even' for emphasis. Suggestion: 'I choose for 30 minutes or even an hour.'

× Yes, I wear different style of clothes on weekdays and weekends I look for situation it uh when it is party I wear dresses or if it's only walking at the park I wear casual clothes.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends. It depends on the situation: when there is a party I wear dresses, but if I'm only walking in the park I wear casual clothes.

Use plural 'styles' to agree with 'different'. The original run-on sentence needs splitting into clearer clauses. Use 'depends on the situation' rather than 'look for situation'. Use 'there is a party' (there be) and 'I'm' for 'I am' in present continuous when referring to a current/future activity. Use preposition 'in the park' not 'at the park' for walking. Suggestion: split into two sentences and correct number, verb forms, and prepositions.

× What colour clothes do you like? I like clothes in yellow and white.

✓ I like clothes in yellow and white.

While 'in' is acceptable, more natural phrasing is 'I like yellow and white clothes' or 'I like clothes that are yellow and white.' The original is understandable but could be improved for naturalness. Suggestion: 'I like yellow and white clothes.'

× I especially prefer white because it glue looks clean and bright on me and it's easy to match with other items.

✓ I especially prefer white because it looks clean and bright on me and it's easy to match with other items.

The word 'glue' is incorrect here (likely a mishearing). Remove it. Use 'it looks' to refer to the color. Suggestion: 'I especially prefer white because it looks clean and bright on me.'

× So I often wear white shirts for work or casual outsides and I like light colors.

✓ So I often wear white shirts for work or casual outings, and I like light colors.

'Outsides' is incorrect; use 'outings' or 'wear them outside'. Add a comma before 'and' to join clauses. 'For work or casual outings' is the proper collocation. Suggestion: 'for work or casual outings.'