Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Старайтесь формулировать предложение более связно: начните с чётного тематического предложения, затем добавьте пару конкретных деталей без заиканий. Уберите словесные вставки («uh») и завершайте мысль грамматически правильно. Также используйте связующие слова для плавного перехода между идеями.

例: I prefer casual, comfortable clothes such as T-shirts, shorts and jeans. I usually wear sneakers because they let me move easily, and I find this style practical for everyday activities.

提案: Избегайте повторов («comfortable and casual clothes» и «it's practical because… it's suitable») и неправильных оборотов (например, «convenient to me move»). Начинайте с прямого ответа, затем приведите два чётких и связанных аргумента с правильным порядком слов.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they allow me to move freely and adapt to different situations. For example, they are suitable for both classes and meetings with friends.

提案: Исправьте неверные слова («virtual» вместо «T-shirts») и говорите чётко: один короткий ответ и одно-два объясняющих предложения. Дайте конкретный пример того, как вы сочетаете футболку с другими вещами.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially in summer. I also wear them in autumn because a plain T-shirt is a great base for many outfits, for example under a jacket or with jeans.

提案: Избегайте неуместных генерализаций («because I'm a girl») и грамматических ошибок (времена и предлоги). Дайте конкретные детали: сколько времени вы тратите и зачем. Уберите словесные паузы («uh»).

例: Yes, I often spend a lot of time choosing clothes, usually about 10–15 minutes each morning, because I like to coordinate my outfits and try new combinations.

提案: Сформулируйте предложения грамматически корректно и используйте связки («on weekdays..., while on weekends...») для ясности. Дайте конкретное отличие между стилями и пример ситуации для каждого.

例: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear more classic or smart-casual clothes for classes, such as blouses and trousers, while on weekends I prefer relaxed outfits like T-shirts and shorts.

提案: Сформулируйте последовательность во времени корректно (use past simple vs present). Избегайте тавтологии («but... but after that») и используйте связующие слова для перехода. Укажите конкретные цвета и причину смены предпочтений.

例: I prefer light colours now, such as beige and pastel blue. A few years ago I liked darker shades, but I realised they didn't suit me, so I changed my wardrobe to softer tones.

× For me it's sneakers, uh, because it allows me easy movement and.

✓ For me, it's sneakers, because they allow me easy movement.

Subject-pronoun agreement and verb form: 'sneakers' is plural so use plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'allow'. Use a comma after introductory phrase and remove filler 'uh'. Ensure sentence completes with an object ('easy movement').

× Obviously I prefer to be comfortable and casual clothes because it's more convenient to me move and it's practical because when wherever I go it's suitable and.

✓ Obviously I prefer comfortable and casual clothes because they are more convenient for me to move in and practical, because wherever I go they are suitable.

Pronoun and verb agreement: do not use 'be' before the noun phrase; use 'prefer comfortable clothes'. Use plural pronoun 'they' for 'clothes' and plural verb 'are'. Correct preposition: 'convenient for me to move in'. Remove redundant words and finish the sentence logically.

× Yes, of course I like virtual, especially in summer, but I wear it especially in the autumn season also because it's the base in everything. For every outfit.

✓ Yes, of course I like T-shirts, especially in summer, but I also wear them in autumn because they are the basis of every outfit.

Wrong word 'virtual' likely intended 'T-shirts'. Use plural pronoun 'them' to refer to 'T-shirts'. Use 'basis' instead of 'base in everything'. Combine fragments into one sentence for clarity.

× Yes, especially I spent a lot of time to choose classes in everyday life because I'm a girl and I also love match clothes and uh, find new and beautiful outfits.

✓ Yes, I especially spend a lot of time choosing clothes in everyday life because I'm a girl and I also love matching clothes and finding new and beautiful outfits.

Tense and verb form: use present tense 'spend' to match habitual action. Use gerund after verbs of preference: 'choosing', 'matching', 'finding'. Correct 'classes' to 'clothes' and remove filler 'uh'.

× Yes, of course, I'm a student and I should wear in weekdays. More classic outfit and when I have a weekends I can wear something I want like a T-shirt and shorts.

✓ Yes, of course. During weekdays, as a student, I should wear a more classic outfit, and on weekends I can wear what I want, like a T-shirt and shorts.

Sentence structure and article use: 'wear in weekdays' is incorrect; use 'during weekdays' and 'on weekends'. Use article 'a' before 'more classic outfit'. Combine fragments into one coherent sentence and correct 'have a weekends' to 'on weekends'.

× I prefer light clothes, but some years ago I prefer dark clothes, but after that I recognize that it is not my style and not my colors in clothes.

✓ I prefer light clothes now, but some years ago I preferred dark clothes; later I realized that they were not my style and not my colors.

Tense consistency: use present 'prefer' for current habit and past 'preferred' for past. Use past simple 'realized' instead of 'recognize' for a past change. Use pronoun 'they' for 'clothes' and concise phrasing 'not my colors'.