Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Clarify meaning and use correct vocabulary. Give a direct topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details. Avoid unclear phrases like "soothing cold speakers." Use linking word for coherence.

例: I prefer wearing loose, comfortable clothes because they help me feel relaxed and happy. For example, I often choose soft cotton shirts and lightweight sweaters that keep me cool and allow me to move freely.

提案: Start with a clear direct answer and give one or two concise reasons using linking words. Reduce repetition and filler words. Use correct verb forms and collocations (e.g., "feel uncomfortable", "wear comfortable clothes").

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because tight or formal outfits make me feel restricted and uneasy. For instance, I choose loose jeans and soft T-shirts for daily wear since they are practical and let me move comfortably.

提案: Answer directly and explain briefly with clear vocabulary. Avoid unclear phrases like "balance the treasure" and "maintain my daily life." Give a simple reason and an example. Use linking words like "because" or "for example."

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are versatile and easy to match with other clothes. For example, a plain white or blue T-shirt goes well with jeans or shorts, making it quick to choose an outfit for everyday activities.

提案: Provide a direct answer then specific reasons and one short example. Replace vague words like "analyse" with "judge" or "tell if" and avoid excessive filler. Use a linking word such as "because" or "so."

例: Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes because when I shop online it's hard to tell if the size and color will suit me. For instance, I often read reviews and compare measurements before I decide to buy.

提案: Give a clear contrast: one sentence for weekdays and one for weekends, with specific details and correct adjectives. Avoid contradictory or unclear words like "soothing and unsuitable." Use linking words "on weekdays" and "at weekends."

例: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear simple, modest clothes suitable for work or classes, such as button shirts and neat trousers. At weekends I dress more stylishly and casually, for example wearing colorful dresses or fashionable jeans when I go out with friends.

提案: State the color preference clearly, give a brief reason and one concrete example. Correct grammar and avoid fragmented sentences. Use linking words like "because" and "for example."

例: I prefer blue clothes because the color reminds me of the sky and makes me feel calm and positive. For example, I often choose a light blue shirt when I want a relaxed but pleasant look.

× Actually I like where the soothing cold speakers that can help me to feel relaxed and help me to feel happy.

✓ Actually I like wearing soothing, cool clothes that help me feel relaxed and happy.

The original sentence has wrong word choice ('where', 'speakers') and awkward structure. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) and involves incorrect verb forms and word choice. Replace 'where the soothing cold speakers' with 'wearing soothing, cool clothes' and simplify 'help me to feel relaxed and help me to feel happy' to 'help me feel relaxed and happy'. Suggestion: use correct vocabulary (wearing, clothes) and avoid repeating 'to' with 'help'. Suggested ID: 26

× Actually comfortable clothes because I think and some other clothes type of clothes will tighten me and, and let me feel, uh, not comfortable and, uh, and not suitable. So I really enjoy wear the comfortable clothes.

✓ I prefer comfortable clothes because other types of clothing tighten me and make me feel uncomfortable, so I really enjoy wearing comfortable clothes.

This contains multiple sentence structure issues (ID 26), wrong verb forms ('enjoy wear' should be 'enjoy wearing'), redundancy ('some other clothes type of clothes'), and awkward phrasing ('tighten me'). Correct by using 'prefer' and 'other types of clothing tighten me and make me feel uncomfortable'. Use gerund after 'enjoy'. Suggested ID: 26

× Actually I really like wearing the T-shirt because that is easy to find the suitable color to balance the treasure and also I think that is also can help me to find the good type of clothes to maintain my daily life.

✓ I really like wearing T-shirts because they are easy to find in suitable colors to balance my outfit, and they help me find good clothes for daily wear.

Errors include singular/plural and pronoun agreement and wrong phrasing. Use plural 'T-shirts' and plural pronoun 'they' (ID 1 and 12). Also 'is also can help' is incorrect modal/auxiliary structure (ID 4/26) and 'wearing the T-shirt' should be generalized. Use gerund and correct noun phrases. Keep verbs simple: 'are', 'help'. Suggested ID: 1

× Actually yes, because I always want to buy some clothes online but I could not analyse whether it's suitable for me, so I feel so nervous when I find the clothes.

✓ Yes, because I often want to buy clothes online but I cannot tell whether they are suitable for me, so I feel nervous when I look for clothes.

Mixes present habitual with past modal 'could not' and uses 'analyse' awkwardly. Change to present tense 'cannot tell' for general habit (ID 6). Also use plural pronoun 'they' for 'clothes' (ID 1/12) and replace 'find the clothes' with 'look for clothes'. Suggested ID: 6},{