Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples. Avoid repetition and small grammatical errors (articles, plural/singular). Use linking words like 'but' or 'however' to contrast everyday and special occasions.

例: I usually prefer comfortable clothes. For everyday wear I often choose trousers and T-shirts because they are practical and relaxed. However, for special occasions I wear jeans with a shirt to look a bit smarter.

提案: Answer directly and clearly. State your preference in one sentence, then give a brief reason and an example. Avoid contradictory statements and correct word choices (e.g., 'often' instead of 'AT', 'formal dresser' → 'dress formally').

例: I usually prefer comfortable, casual clothes for daily activities because they are practical. For example, I wear trousers and a T‑shirt to work or to run errands, but I dress formally for events like weddings.

提案: Keep the answer natural and avoid repeating the same phrase. Give one clear reason and add a brief specific example or situation where T‑shirts are useful.

例: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they are comfortable and allow me to move freely. For instance, I wear T‑shirts when I exercise or when I go out with friends.

提案: Be concise and give a reason and a specific detail. Avoid repeating phrases and fix grammar (use 'choosing clothes', 'because I like variety'). Mention a time frame or example to be specific.

例: Yes, I often spend time choosing clothes because I like to find the best outfit for each occasion. For example, I may try several shirts and trousers before deciding what to wear for a job interview.

提案: State the difference clearly with one linking word (e.g., 'on weekdays' vs 'on weekends'). Give a specific example of what you wear on each and why. Remove filler words and repeated phrases.

例: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear trousers and a T‑shirt because I need comfort for work, while on weekends I wear nicer clothes, such as a shirt or jeans, when I go out with friends.

提案: Give one clear reason and a correct scientific point concisely. Correct vocabulary and grammar ('white clothes reflect sunlight' not 'absorb'). Provide a short personal preference and an example of when you wear white.

例: I prefer white because it goes well with many other colors and feels fresh in summer. For example, I often wear a white shirt on hot days since white reflects sunlight and keeps me cooler.

× In normal day I love comfortable clothes.

✓ On a normal day, I love comfortable clothes.

Use the prepositional phrase 'on a normal day' to indicate habitual action; 'normal day' needs the article 'a' and the preposition 'on' for correct time expression.

× I wear comfortable clothes like I wear trouser with the T-shirt and in a special occasion I like to wear jeans with the shirts and for and sometimes I wear casual clothes in a special occasions.

✓ I wear comfortable clothes, like trousers with a T-shirt, and on special occasions I like to wear jeans with shirts, and sometimes I wear casual clothes on special occasions.

Use plural 'trousers' and 'shirts' for general items. Use the article 'a' with 'T-shirt' when singular. Use 'on special occasions' rather than 'in a special occasion' or 'in a special occasions'. Remove redundant words ('for and').

× I prefer I usually prefer comfortable clothes in my everyday activities.

✓ I usually prefer comfortable clothes for my everyday activities.

Avoid repetition of 'prefer'. Use 'usually' before the verb to show frequency and use 'for' to indicate purpose ('for my everyday activities').

× It's and I wear trousers and AT shirt in everyday activities and on special occasions.

✓ I wear trousers and a T-shirt for everyday activities and dress more formally on special occasions.

Remove the fragment 'It's and' which is ungrammatical. Use 'a T-shirt' with the article. Clarify contrast between everyday and special occasions for natural sentence flow.

× I usually prefer a formal dresser and on special occasions.

✓ I usually prefer to dress formally on special occasions.

'Formal dresser' is incorrect; use the verb phrase 'to dress formally'. Place 'on special occasions' after the verb phrase for clarity.

× Absolutely, I like wearing T-shirts due to the fact that I often wear T-shirts due to that because they provide a lot of comfortable and feel relaxed in everyday activities.

✓ Absolutely, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and help me feel relaxed in everyday activities.

Avoid redundant phrases ('due to the fact that', 'due to that', 'because'). Use adjective 'comfortable' (not 'a lot of comfortable') and the phrase 'help me feel relaxed' to express cause and effect.

× I generally spend a lot of time to choosing a cloth because I need a lot of variety of clothes to find to find which one is better for me.

✓ I generally spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I need a variety to find which ones are best for me.

Use the gerund 'choosing' after 'spend time'. Use plural 'clothes' and 'which ones' for selection. Remove duplicate phrase 'to find to find' and use 'a variety' instead of 'a lot of variety of clothes'.

× Therefore, it takes a lot of time to choose and that's why I spend a lot of time.

✓ Therefore, it takes a lot of time to choose, and that's why I spend so much time.

Use 'so much time' for natural emphasis. Keep present tense 'takes' consistent. Combine clauses with a comma for readability.

× I often wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends due to that because because in normal activities I like to wear a trouser with T-shirt and on weekends I try to wear special clothes.

✓ I often wear different styles on weekdays and weekends: for daily activities I like to wear trousers with a T-shirt, and on weekends I try to wear dressier clothes.

Remove redundant connectors ('due to that because because'). Use plural 'trousers' and 'a T-shirt'. Use 'dressier clothes' for 'special clothes'. Simplify sentence structure and split with a colon for clarity.

× I like to wear white colour because it it is also suitable with every color combination and every dress.

✓ I like to wear white because it is suitable with every color combination and every outfit.

Do not use 'colour' after 'white'; 'white' alone works as a color adjective. Remove duplicate 'it'. Use 'outfit' instead of 'dress' for general clothing. Use 'suitable with' -> commonly 'suitable with' is acceptable, but 'suitable for' or 'goes with' are clearer; here 'suitable with every color combination' is kept but could be 'goes with any color'.

× And in summer season white color is also beneficial for ourself due to that white color absorb white color reflect sunlight from our body it also helpful.

✓ In the summer, white is also better for us because it reflects sunlight away from the body and helps keep us cool.

Use 'us' instead of 'ourself'. Use 'white' without 'color' repeated. Use 'reflects sunlight' (third-person singular present) and 'helps keep us cool' for clear result. Correct verb agreement ('absorbs' vs 'reflects'); white reflects sunlight rather than absorbs it.