Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence, correct word choice (e.g. "casual clothes" instead of "catch your clothes"), and give one supporting reason with a linking word. Keep it concise (1–3 sentences).

例: I prefer simple, casual clothes. For example, I usually wear black and white outfits because they are easy to match and suit my personal style.

提案: Answer directly and avoid repeating mistakes: say which you prefer (comfortable and casual), use correct verbs, and give a brief reason using a linking word like "because" or "so".

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they fit my lifestyle and allow me to move freely.

提案: Good direct answer and reason. Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement and articles) and tighten phrasing. Add a linking word and keep to 1–2 supporting details.

例: Yes, I wear T-shirts very often because they allow me to move freely and are practical for daily activities; however, I sometimes wear shirts for more formal occasions.

提案: Be concise and avoid filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then one specific reason. Fix grammar ("not for me", "it's easy"). Remove irrelevant repetition.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I usually stick to black and white T-shirts and a few favorite trainers, so I'm ready to go quickly.

提案: Give a clear, grammatical answer and a concise reason with specific detail. Correct plural/singular issues and unclear words ("easy teens" unclear). Use one linking word like "because" or "so".

例: No, I don't. I have worn the same simple black-and-white style for years because it suits me, although I wear warmer clothes when I go outside in cold weather.

提案: Good, direct answer. Make it one smooth sentence and avoid short fragments. Add a brief specific reason or example and correct punctuation.

例: I prefer black and white clothes; in fact, most of my closet contains black or white T-shirts because they are easy to match with other items.

× Umm I like catch your clothes.

✓ Umm I like casual clothes.

The phrase 'catch your clothes' is incorrect and likely a mispronunciation or wrong word choice; 'casual clothes' fits the context. Use the adjective 'casual' to describe the type of clothes. Suggestion: practice common clothing adjectives (casual, formal, smart).

× I don't like anything fancy or colorful I just I just love black and white clothes because it easy to suit my style.

✓ I don't like anything fancy or colorful. I just love black and white clothes because they are easy to suit my style.

Sentence needed punctuation and subject-verb agreement. 'Clothes' is plural so use 'they are' not 'it easy'. Also add a period to separate clauses. Suggestion: after 'clothes' use plural verb forms: 'they are'.

× Yes, I prefer where I come comfortable and catch your clothes as I mentioned before because it easy to suit my personal style.

✓ Yes, I prefer wearing comfortable and casual clothes, as I mentioned before, because they are easy to suit my personal style.

Multiple errors: 'prefer where I come' should be 'prefer wearing'; 'catch your clothes' -> 'casual clothes'; 'it easy' -> 'they are easy' for plural. Suggestion: use 'prefer' + gerund for habits: 'prefer wearing'. Ensure pronoun agreement with plural nouns.

× I think I always wear T-shirts because it allows me to move freely and it practical for everyday activities.

✓ I think I always wear T-shirts because they allow me to move freely and they are practical for everyday activities.

T-shirts is plural so verbs and adjectives must match: use 'they allow' and 'they are practical' instead of 'it'. Suggestion: match pronouns/verbs to plural subjects.

× No, not from me.

✓ No, not for me.

'Not from me' is awkward; 'not for me' correctly expresses a personal preference. Suggestion: use 'not for me' to refuse or reject a suggestion.

× As I mentioned before, I love T-shirts because it easy to suit my personal style and yes, I just love black and white T-shirts and just my uh, my favorite routines and my favorite trainers and I ready to go.

✓ As I mentioned before, I love T-shirts because they are easy to suit my personal style. Yes, I just love black and white T-shirts; they are my favorite items and my favorite trainers, and I'm ready to go.

Run-on sentence and pronoun agreement errors: 'it easy' -> 'they are easy'; add missing verb 'am' in 'I'm ready'; split into two sentences for clarity. Suggestion: break long responses into shorter sentences and ensure verbs are present.

× I usually wear same style for more than five years because I think this is my favorite styles.

✓ I usually wear the same style for more than five years because I think this is my favorite style.

Use definite article 'the' with 'same style' and keep noun consistent: 'style' (singular) to match 'same' and 'my favorite'. 'Styles' should be singular. Suggestion: check noun number consistency and include articles where needed.

× Just, you know, black and white and easy teens and sometimes they wear thick clothes to go outside.

✓ Just, you know, black and white and easy tees, and sometimes I wear thick clothes to go outside.

'Easy teens' is likely 'easy tees' (T-shirts); 'they wear' incorrectly refers to someone else — should be 'I wear'. Suggestion: use correct clothing terms and keep the subject consistent.

× As I mentioned before, I love black and white. In my closet. I only have black or white T-shirts. Yeah, because it's easy to suit my personal style.

✓ As I mentioned before, I love black and white. In my closet I only have black or white T-shirts because they are easy to suit my personal style.

Fragment: 'In my closet.' is a sentence fragment; combine with next sentence. Also 'it's easy' should be 'they are easy' to match plural 'T-shirts'. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments by combining related clauses and ensure pronoun agreement.