Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and avoid repetition. Add one brief supporting detail about why you like kurtas (comfort, tradition, style). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

例: I especially like wearing kurtas because they are comfortable and suited to my culture. Sometimes I wear a casual shirt when I need something simpler, but I usually prefer a kurta for most occasions.

提案: Provide a clear topic sentence stating your preference, use correct grammar, and give one specific reason with a linking word (because, whereas). Replace filler like 'uh' and avoid redundancy.

例: I prefer casual clothes because they are more comfortable for daily activities. For example, I wear smart clothes when I go out to the city or to a special event, but casual clothes are fine for shopping or relaxing.

提案: Use full, grammatically correct sentences. Begin with a direct answer and add a brief reason or example. Use linking words if adding extra detail.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to match with jeans. I often wear them at home or when I hang out with friends.

提案: Answer directly with correct negative form and reduce hesitations. Give one concise reason and a short example to support your answer. Avoid repeating words.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I'm comfortable with most outfits. For instance, I usually pick a T-shirt and jeans quickly when I leave the house.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence and use correct conditional structure. Use linking words (if, when, otherwise) and give a brief specific example of styles for different occasions.

例: It depends on my plans. If I go out with friends, I might wear a smart-casual outfit, but if I stay home I usually wear a T-shirt and shorts.

提案: Be concise and grammatically correct. State your preferences clearly and add a short reason or example. Use precise phrasing for colours and avoid fillers.

例: I prefer dark colours such as black and navy blue because they look smart and are easy to keep clean. For example, I often choose a navy shirt for outings and black for more formal settings.

× I love to wearing a kurta and sometime I just wearing AT shirt but I quite love wearing a kurta everywhere I go.

✓ I love wearing a kurta and sometimes I just wear a T-shirt, but I really love wearing a kurta everywhere I go.

Use of 'to wearing' is incorrect: after 'love' use the gerund 'wearing' or use 'to' with the base verb 'to wear'. Also 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb of frequency). 'I just wearing AT shirt' lacks the correct verb form; use 'I just wear a T-shirt'. 'AT' likely a typo for 'a T-shirt'. 'Quite' used with 'love' is odd; 'really' is more natural. Suggestions: after verbs of liking (love, like) use either gerund (love wearing) or the infinitive without 'to' only in certain structures—here use gerund; correct adverbs and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× I prefer casual clothes because the smart clothes actually for going uh going town or go anywhere with my friend, but casual only for go to grocery.

✓ I prefer casual clothes because smart clothes are actually for going to town or for going anywhere with my friends, but casual clothes are only for going to the grocery.

The sentence omits the verb 'are' after 'smart clothes' and uses incorrect verb forms ('go' instead of 'going to'). Use 'are' to form 'there are' or 'X are for Y' structure. Add preposition 'to' after 'going' and pluralize 'friend' to 'friends' if general. 'Grocery' requires 'the grocery' or 'the grocery store'. Suggestions: ensure present-tense 'to be' verb with plural subjects and use 'going to' + destination or 'for going to' for purpose.

× Yeah, I'm comfortable to wearing T-shirt.

✓ Yeah, I'm comfortable wearing a T-shirt.

After 'comfortable' + adjective, use the gerund without 'to': 'comfortable wearing', not 'comfortable to wearing'. Also use the article 'a' before 'T-shirt'. Suggestion: use 'comfortable' + gerund (comfortable wearing) or 'comfortable to' + base verb (comfortable to wear) but not 'comfortable to wearing'.

× No, I not uh, spend time, a lot of time to choosing clothes because I I comfortable wearing any clothes. Uh, I have no problem about it.

✓ No, I do not spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I am comfortable wearing any clothes. I have no problem with it.

Negative present simple requires auxiliary 'do not' + base verb: use 'I do not spend'. Remove extra 'to' before 'choosing'. 'I I comfortable' misses verb 'am'. Use 'comfortable wearing' (gerund). Preposition after 'no problem' is 'with', not 'about'. Suggestions: use correct auxiliary for negatives and include the appropriate form of 'to be' for adjectives.

× Depend depend on my plan. If I have a plan for go out with my friend, so I will uh wearing a different style. If no have so I just wearing a T-shirt.

✓ It depends on my plan. If I have plans to go out with my friends, I will wear a different style. If not, I just wear a T-shirt.

Start with 'It depends' for the impersonal expression. 'Plan for go out' is ungrammatical; use 'plans to go out' or 'a plan to go out'. Future intention uses 'will' + base verb: 'will wear', not 'will wearing'. For negation use 'If not' not 'If no have so'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct article/plural forms. Suggestions: use 'It depends', 'plans to go out', 'will wear', and 'If not' for clarity.

× I like wearing a color black and Navy blue. Uh, actually I love, uh, dark colour.

✓ I like wearing the colors black and navy blue. Actually, I love dark colours.

'A color black' is incorrect; use 'the colors black and navy blue' or 'black and navy blue'. 'Navy' should be lowercase unless starting a sentence. Consistent spelling: 'colour' vs 'colors' — keep British or American forms consistently; here corrected to 'colours' in the second sentence. Use plural 'colours' when speaking generally. Suggestions: use 'the colors black and navy blue' or 'black and navy blue' and be consistent in spelling.