Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and correct grammar. Be specific about what 'simple' means and why you prefer it. Use 2–4 short sentences, include linking words (for example, because) and avoid repetition.

例: I prefer simple, modest clothes because they are comfortable and practical. For example, I often wear plain dresses or loose trousers that allow me to move easily. Because they are low-maintenance, I feel relaxed and confident when I wear them.

提案: Answer directly (choose one option) and give a brief reason with a linking word like 'because' or 'so'. Keep sentences short and coherent, and correct basic grammar and word order.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I go out for different purposes during the day. For instance, I might run errands or meet friends, so casual clothes let me adapt quickly and feel at ease.

提案: State your opinion clearly and give two concise reasons linked with 'because' and 'also'. Use singular/plural agreement and correct auxiliary verbs.

例: No, I don't like wearing T-shirts because they feel uncomfortable on my skin. Also, my family prefers more modest clothing, so I usually avoid them at home.

提案: Answer directly and reduce hesitations. Explain when and why you spend time choosing clothes with specific details and a linking phrase (for example, 'however' or 'sometimes').

例: Yes, I often spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to look neat. However, if I am in a hurry I just pick a simple, elegant dress that is comfortable and appropriate for the occasion.

提案: Start with a direct topic sentence comparing weekdays and weekends, then give specific examples and link ideas with 'because' or 'so'. Avoid incomplete sentences.

例: Yes, I dress differently on weekdays and weekends. During the week I wear my college uniform or a plain abaya, but at the weekend I choose casual or colourful outfits because they make me feel relaxed and comfortable.

提案: List favourite colours clearly and explain the seasonal preference with a linking word like 'but' or 'however'. Remove hesitations and be specific about why light colours are preferable in summer.

例: I like black, red, pink and blue. However, in summer I prefer light colours such as white or pastel shades because they reflect sunlight and feel cooler and more comfortable.

× I like simple class and makes me weird the class feel easy and comfortable.

✓ I like simple clothes because they make me feel relaxed and comfortable.

The student used 'class' instead of 'clothes' (vocabulary) and mixed verb forms: 'makes me weird the class feel' is ungrammatical. This is an adjective/adverb and sentence structure problem. Use plural noun 'clothes' with plural pronoun 'they' and the verb 'make' to agree (they make). Replace 'weird' with 'relaxed' which fits intended meaning. Ensure logical clause order: reason clause 'because they make me feel...'. (Improvement: practice subject-verb agreement with plural nouns and using appropriate adjectives.)

× Yes, I prefer to wear the comfortable and casual clothes due to the reason of and I go I'm going to outside with any purpose people.

✓ Yes, I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes when I go outside for any purpose.

Sentence contains extraneous phrases and incorrect prepositions. 'Due to the reason of' is redundant; use 'because' or omit. 'I go I'm going to outside' mixes tenses and has wrong preposition 'to outside'—use 'go outside'. 'With any purpose people' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is 'for any purpose'. This involves modal/phrase misuse and preposition errors. (Improvement: simplify sentences, avoid redundancy, use correct prepositions: 'go outside' and 'for any purpose'.) Note: corrected tense kept present preference 'I prefer... when I go outside'.

× No, I don't like wearing T-shirts because T-shirts makes me uncomfortable and my family don't allow to wear T-shirts.

✓ No, I don't like wearing T-shirts because T-shirts make me uncomfortable and my family don't allow me to wear them.

Error: subject-verb agreement with third person plural. 'T-shirts makes' should be 'T-shirts make'. Also 'my family don't allow to wear T-shirts' is incorrect: use 'my family don't allow me to wear them' or 'my family doesn't allow me to wear them' (collective noun choice). Here corrected 'don't' kept to match student's usage but better is 'doesn't'. Also replace repetitive noun with pronoun 'them'. (Improvement: practice subject-verb agreement and correct object pronoun placement after 'allow'.)

× Uh, yes, I spend a lot of time choosing class. Uh, I wear simple and elegant dresses and sometimes, uh, the time is too short and I don't uh, search the simple and elegant dresses.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes. I wear simple, elegant outfits, but sometimes I run out of time and cannot find the simple, elegant clothes I want.

Errors: 'class' should be 'clothes' and 'search the simple and elegant dresses' is awkward. 'The time is too short' better expressed as 'I run out of time'. This is incorrect adjective/adverb use and sentence structure. Use 'outfits' or 'clothes' and 'find' instead of 'search' in this context. (Improvement: learn common collocations: 'choose clothes', 'run out of time', 'find clothes'.)

× I wear a different styles of clothes on weekends. In daily routine I wear college uniform and university abayas, but at the weekend I choose. These dresses make me comfortable and I feel easy.

✓ I wear different styles of clothes on weekends. On weekdays I wear my college uniform and university abaya, but on the weekend I choose different clothes. These dresses make me comfortable and help me feel at ease.

Errors: 'a different styles' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'styles' (article error). 'In daily routine' should be 'On weekdays' or 'In my daily routine'. 'University abayas' may be singular 'abaya' as a type; 'my college uniform' needs possessive. 'I feel easy' is incorrect; use 'I feel at ease' or 'comfortable'. This covers article, preposition and adjective use. (Improvement: match articles to noun number, use correct time prepositions 'on weekdays'/'at the weekend', and idiomatic expressions like 'feel at ease'.)

× I like black, red, pink, and blue, uh, but I, uh, but in summer, uh, I like light colors, uh, because light colors, light colors may feel easy and comfortable.

✓ I like black, red, pink, and blue, but in summer I prefer light colors because they feel cool and comfortable.

Repetition and awkward phrasing: 'light colors may feel easy and comfortable' is wrong; colors don't 'feel easy'—people feel comfortable. Use 'prefer' for seasonal preference and 'they feel cool and comfortable' to refer to colors. This is an incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs and sentence structure. (Improvement: avoid repetition, use pronouns to refer back to colors, and choose appropriate adjectives like 'cool', 'light', 'comfortable'.)