Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer more natural and slightly longer (up to 3–4 short sentences). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a specific reason and a brief example. Avoid repetition (e.g., “black color clothes”).

例: I usually wear baggy clothes, and I prefer black most of the time. I find loose clothes more comfortable and they suit my casual style. For example, I often wear a black hoodie and relaxed jeans when I go out.

提案: Provide a clear topic sentence and then explain what you mean by a ‘clean look’ and ‘two colors combined’. Use linking words (because, for example) and avoid filler words like “umm.”

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they suit my day-to-day activities. I also like a clean look with simple colour combinations — for example, a white t-shirt with navy trousers — because it feels neat without being too formal.

提案: Give a concise reasoned answer and avoid unclear phrases (“combine any fence”, “hide my faults”). Use linking words to connect points and be specific about what you like about T‑shirts.

例: Yes, I do. T‑shirts are comfortable and versatile, so they go well with jeans or shorts. I also like that a loose T‑shirt is flattering and helps me feel more confident.

提案: Answer directly, then give a short explanation with an example. Avoid repeating phrases and unclear wording (“not big problem”). Use linking words such as ‘but’ and ‘for example’ to structure the response.

例: Sometimes I do, but not always. If I have an important event I spend more time choosing an outfit; otherwise I pick something quickly from my usual options.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence, then contrast weekdays and weekends with specific details and a linking word like ‘whereas’ or ‘while’. Correct grammar in the final sentence.

例: Yes. On weekdays I wear casual but neat clothes suitable for classes or work, such as a button‑down shirt and chinos, whereas on weekends I prefer very comfortable outfits like hoodies and sweatpants because they help me relax.

提案: Start with a direct statement about colour preference, then explain why and give a short comparison. Avoid hesitations and ensure grammar agreement (e.g., ‘grey and white are’).

例: I prefer black and grey clothing because they look stylish and are easy to match. Although some people say these colours are boring, I find they give me a calm and confident vibe.

× I like to wear baggy clothes and I usually wear black color clothes.

✓ I like to wear baggy clothes and I usually wear black clothes.

Redundant use of the noun 'color' with 'black' is unnecessary in English; 'black clothes' is the correct plural noun phrase. Keep plural 'clothes' and omit 'color' to sound natural.

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes. I need a look umm by clean and two color combined.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes. I like a clean look with two colors combined.

The original used 'need a look by' which is ungrammatical. Use 'like a clean look' to express preference and 'with two colors combined' uses correct preposition and noun phrases. Also remove filler 'umm' for clarity.

× Yes I do. I like to wearing T-shirts because it's uh, comfortable and combine any fence and it's uh, looking good and hide my faults of my body.

✓ Yes, I do. I like wearing T-shirts because they're comfortable, go with anything, look good, and hide my body flaws.

Use 'like wearing' (verb+ -ing) rather than 'like to wearing'. Match plural pronoun 'they're' for T-shirts. Replace 'combine any fence' with 'go with anything' (correct verb and object). Use 'look' not 'it's looking' for general statements and 'hide my body flaws' is the natural expression.

× Yes, I do, but not all the time. Just sometimes I just see my clothes and I choose and I wear it, but there's not big problem.

✓ Yes, I do, but not all the time. Sometimes I just look at my clothes, choose one, and wear it, but it's not a big problem.

Use 'look at' not 'see'. Replace redundant 'just sometimes I just'. Use 'choose one' and match pronoun 'it' to singular 'one'. Use article 'a' in 'a big problem' and correct word order.

× Yes I do, in my weekdays I choose more casual and clean looking clothes and in my weekends I choose comfortable clothes. It's make me feel good.

✓ Yes, I do. On weekdays I choose more casual, clean-looking clothes, and on weekends I choose comfortable clothes. They make me feel good.

Use 'on weekdays/weekends' (correct preposition). Hyphenate 'clean-looking' as a compound adjective. 'It's make' is incorrect; plural 'they' refers to 'clothes', so use 'They make me feel good' (subject-verb agreement).

× I like black clothes and grey are so white people think it's uh boring colors but these colors give me a good vibe. Yes.

✓ I like black and grey clothes. Some people think these colors are boring, but they give me a good vibe.

Original mixes singular and plural and misorders words. Use 'black and grey clothes' as a combined noun phrase. 'Some people think these colors are boring' corrects subject and verb order; 'they give me a good vibe' uses appropriate pronoun reference.